MohiNi SS : I wanna be with u { Last chpt Pg. 56 }

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

nice ss .
liked the beginning.
awesome

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Ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: vkp1989
Good start.

Thnq😊

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Ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: dhwani.
nice ss .
liked the beginning.
awesome

Thnx tons dhwani😃

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Ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Really hope u all will like the upd :)

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Ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Thanks a lot everyone!🤗 Have replied indivisually in the previous pages😊

Thnx for liking!😃

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Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago

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Ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

He talked. But I...

It was an important day for the actors of the English play. This was their LAST practice. The next day was the day they had to display their drama to the audience. The whole drama was to be acted out on the stage today. Just for practice and also so that everyone knows their respective positions on the stage.

So, right now, there was a scene going on where Anant wasn't needed on the stage.The scene was of Srushti only. So obviously, Anant was at the back-stage waiting for his entry. He had to enter the stage after 2 mins. But wait, there was a problem. There was a girl standing exactly at the place from where he had to enter the stage. Feeling a bit shy, Anant walked towards that giral and said,

"Excuse me. I have to go form here. Can u plz move?"

The girl didn't hear what he said. Anant repeated the same thing again. Before he cud complete this time, the girl turned towards him and moved to the left letting him go. That girl was Aarti. Aarti didn't even say "Sorry" or anything like that to Anant. She just m moved. Now, she regrets doing that. "I cud have ATLEAST said Sorry! " thought Aarti.

Anant took a few steps forward and waitned for the right time for him to enter the stage. Right now, Anant was standing next to Aarti. She slowly looked and him and soon enough not realizing what she was doing, she kept staring at him. She was lost in him! Suddenly, realizing whom she was looking at, Aarti tried diverting her mind on other things. But she cudn't. Her heart went DHAK - DHAK. DHAK- DHAK.

As soon as Anant left the backstage and entered the main stage, that odd feeling she had been getting [ Tht her heart was going DHAK-DHAK ] stopped. She sighed with relief!

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Plz ignore the mistakes!😊

Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago

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Ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Link to previous upd! -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3335282/mohini-ss-i-wanna-be-with-u-last-chpt-pg-56

Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

nice upd😉...title is good😳

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soumya vohra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

My oh My...

1st of al...i luved ur DP...hayyee!! beautiful it z n d signature too...missing d old days again!!!

Coming 2 d update...

Oh My Mahadev!!!

actually while reading my heart ws going on dhak dhak dhak dhak!!!

i cn actually imagine both of dem their...

hayee!!!

Beautiful...

Plz yaar...try 2 make sum longer updates...

Vaise agar chote chote updates kr rahe ho toh fir jaldi jaldi update karo! to compensate... ;)

Plz plz plz try 2 update soon...

Waiting 4 ur nxt update PM :)

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Regards,

Soumya :)

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Paramita Ray

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

hey Ria !nice update!totally rocking👍🏼wait for the conversation between Anant and Aarti. Anyways update soon. May Mahadev and Ma Durga bless you.😊

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