MohiNi SS : I wanna be with u { Last chpt Pg. 56 } - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandiniraizaada

Great , very very nice👏


Thanks loads nandini😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasadini

Fantastic work yaar⭐️


Thanks prasadini😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202

wow sooper part😃

loved the gift

anant's letter wow
he gave his pet to her awww

waiting 4 the airport romantic n comic to unfold further


Thanks fr ur lovely cmnt pranita!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope u all will like the upd :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shall try to give long updts frm nw :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot everyone!🤗 Have replied indivisually in the previous pages😊

Thnx for liking!😃

Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The Pain of Separation

"A-N-A-N-T!!!"
He heard someone shout out his name. Anant turned around and looked in all directions, but he didn't see anyone.

On the other side, Aarti kept calling for him.

Aarti was very furious now. With all her might she shouted out Anant's name. She shouted out so loud that it could be heard by the people a floor above too!!

Anant turned around and saw Aarti surrounded by policemen and crying very badly., Aarti couldn't bear it anymore and she ran towards Anant. Even the policemen couldn't stop her. As she ran towards him, she took him inte her embrace.

There were tears in Anant's eyes...tears of happiness. At that moment, Aarti was so so SO happy that she felt that even if she would die that very moment, it wouldn't matter to her. Cause now she knew they both were meant to be together. Aarti had no words to say. There was a mix of emotions in her. Anant gently held Aarti by her arms and brought her aside.

' I'm sorry Anant.' said Aarti almost sobbing.
'Sorry for what Aarti?' asked Anant again taking her into his embrace and giving her a pat on her back.
'Anant, take me with you. I wanna go with you. I can't bear this separation from you now. Please please please take me.' said Aarti breaking into a sob now standing in front of Anant.

He wiped Aarti's tears and said 'I'll have to go Aarti' I'm really very sorry. ' It was getting hard for him to control his tears.

'Anant?'
Called out someone.

Anant turned the other way round to see who it was. It was Anant's mother.

'It's time to go Anant.Come.' said his mother.
'Yes mom' replied Anant.

He turned towards Aarti. There were no words left in his mouth to tell. He then just turned away from Aarti and went away forever and ever and ever! Wait, forever? Who knows if they might or might not meet? Only time will tell us what is going to happen between these two. What will be their destiny?

Gloomily Aarti went away with tears in her eyes. She was a very bright student. But after Anant went away from her, Aarti hasn't been able to concentrate on her studies. Not that she has been failing in her exams, but her percentage has lowered a bit. Day and night Aarti thought just about Anant.

On the other side, even Anant was lost in thoughts of Aarti all day long. He regrets doing one mistake - not taking Aarti's phone number. They could atleast be in touch like that! But, destiny had other plans for them.

The pain of separation,
Only a few understand;
It's not just separation,.
It's something only some understand;.
It's not about being away from your beloved,.
It's something you can't describe..

Come and take me,
To a land far far away,.
Away from this cruel world,.
Away from this evil world;.
Take me somewhere,.
Where there's only you and me;..

Where there's only you and me!.



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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice update n a big one this time
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awesone update. Oh anant is leaving and he left his rabit with aarti. They love each other so much. Bus nw unhe milado yar. And the next update looks nice

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