MohiNi SS : I wanna be with u { Last chpt Pg. 56 } - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome parts riu
just read the missing part i left

luved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sach mein???Anat is the son of CM??Phir toh Aarti ko koi prob nahi hogi...And I am very happy that Anant called Aarti his girl friend.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Sach mein???Anat is the son of CM??Phir toh Aarti ko koi prob nahi hogi...And I am very happy that Anant called Aarti his girl friend.


Rimi, see properly😳
Baad mein Anant kehta hai... I'm nt the son of any CM..i just said tht to save u...he said😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chand1234


Rimi, see properly😳
Baad mein Anant kehta hai... I'm nt the son of any CM..i just said tht to save u...he said😃


How sweet of Anant...waise hona he chahiye akhir woh master kis pet ka hai??Rimi the rabbit ka. She is cute but intelligent no???😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rimi maine woh chpt thoda change kar diya😆 I didn't like it how it was bfore...I still have to completely upd tht chpt
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chand1234

Rimi maine woh chpt thoda change kar diya😆 I didn't like it how it was bfore...I still have to completely upd tht chpt


Kya??Kaunsa chapter??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr


Kya??Kaunsa chapter??


previous page wala😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's better than what I had written before na?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeah...that's true...khmkha CM ko bich mein nahin lana chahiye.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chand1234

The Pain of Separation

"A-N-A-N-T!!!"
He heard someone shout out his name. Anant turned around and looked in all directions, but he didn't see anyone.

On the other side, Aarti kept calling for him.

Aarti was very furious now. With all her might she shouted out Anant's name. She shouted out so loud that it could be heard by the people a floor above too!!

Anant turned around and saw Aarti surrounded by policemen and crying very badly., Aarti couldn't bear it anymore and she ran towards Anant. Even the policemen couldn't stop her. As she ran towards him, she took him inte her embrace.

There were tears in Anant's eyes...tears of happiness. At that moment, Aarti was so so SO happy that she felt that even if she would die that very moment, it wouldn't matter to her. Cause now she knew they both were meant to be together. Aarti had no words to say. There was a mix of emotions in her. Anant gently held Aarti by her arms and brought her aside.

' I'm sorry Anant.' said Aarti almost sobbing.
'Sorry for what Aarti?' asked Anant again taking her into his embrace and giving her a pat on her back.
'Anant, take me with you. I wanna go with you. I can't bear this separation from you now. Please please please take me.' said Aarti breaking into a sob now standing in front of Anant.

He wiped Aarti's tears and said 'I'll have to go Aarti' I'm really very sorry. ' It was getting hard for him to control his tears.

'Anant?'
Called out someone.

Anant turned the other way round to see who it was. It was Anant's mother.

'It's time to go Anant.Come.' said his mother.
'Yes mom' replied Anant.
the whole scene reminds me about Sati. How she ran towards her Shiv and hugged him. How everytime she pleaded him to not go leaving her. How everytime she wanted to keep her Shiv with her...
BTW didn't Anant's Mom notice anything???😭😭😭
He turned towards Aarti. There were no words left in his mouth to tell. He then just turned away from Aarti and went away forever and ever and ever! Wait, forever? Who knows if they might or might not meet? Only time will tell us what is going to happen between these two. What will be their destiny?

Gloomily Aarti went away with tears in her eyes. She was a very bright student. But after Anant went away from her, Aarti hasn't been able to concentrate on her studies. Not that she has been failing in her exams, but her percentage has lowered a bit. Day and night Aarti thought just about Anant.
Hmmm..."Sokhi Bhabona kahare bole??
Sokhi Jatona kahare bole??
Tomara je bolo dibaso rajani bhalobasa bhalobasa...
Sokhi Bhalobasa kare koi??
Se ki kebali jatonamoy???"
Means...friend what is thought? And what is pain? You always keep telling about love and love throughout the day and night...what is Love?? Is this Love is only Painful?
On the other side, even Anant was lost in thoughts of Aarti all day long. He regrets doing one mistake - not taking Aarti's phone number. They could atleast be in touch like that! But, destiny had other plans for them.

The pain of separation,
Only a few understand;
It's not just separation,.
It's something only some understand;.
It's not about being away from your beloved,.
It's something you can't describe..

Come and take me,
To a land far far away,.
Away from this cruel world,.
Away from this evil world;.
Take me somewhere,.
Where there's only you and me;..

Where there's only you and me!.
Hey Riu seriously yaara you should have to write poems regularly...you describes one's pain of separation from her beloved so well.👏👏Keep writing. and Muuuaaah🤗


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