#4 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 19-22

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little.princess

@little.princess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Hey that was a fabulous update.. Finally miss Taani entered the story.. She got attitude will love to c hw she makes Rey 2 apologize.. Loved Swayam ans Sharon they were so adorable..

So finally Smrithi gt 2 knw abt Sharon.. Will she tell abt her 2 Kriya?? I'm so curious..

I'm so sorry 4 replyng this late was busy @office.. Frm nxt week I'm on leave so will b able 2 reply evry tym u update..

Thanx 4 the pm and update the nxt part soon..

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esha

@ArShaAngels

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Awesome part khushi..!!..

luved it..!1..

finally kuch to reveal hona start hua..!!..

tune to secrets se hi maar dala tha..😆

waiting for the nxt prt..!!..

updte soon..!1..

n ya like u said taani's character is really different..!!..

the way she was talking to rey seemed like shes not that weak here like we see her in the show..!1..😉

updte soon

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Unressed comment on p[age 21!!!😊

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Awesome update
Taani's entry well I really liked her entry n lil fight with rey...:p
Swaron part was really nice.Taani is not swayam's sis Interesting.Well taayam= jealous sharon I m loving it..:p
Kria smriti part hmm as u said We all guessed it why she is soo shocked after listening sharon's last name
Waiting for next part

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

luks like tani's character's gonna b strong dis tim...

luv d way swaron's story is gearing up...

lovely update.

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

khushi can i hug u n kiss u plzz (ina sisterly manner ofcourse")

tune y ejo d3 likha he kash u knw kash d3 vaisa hota.. kash palki tera ff padh le..kash..

love u to infinity yaar..!!

update soon..!!

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

khushi i have read the update...but will comment later okay?...sorry...out of time...

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firstly congrats for the new thread...way to go...

coming to the update... m sorry for being so late in editing my comment, was jus caught up..

what?? seriously? dont tell me your putting being sister thing here...hope its something else...

so yeah taani enters here -_- :P nice entry..though a bit filmy but still nicely penned...

atleast she is not abla naari in your FF...the counter with rey was nicely put too...

SwaRon part was really lovely as well as amusing to read...

liked their convo...nature lover part was really put nicely in flow of their conversations..

to tell you, i seriously laughed out loud when i read the part of how-swayam-taani-will-be-put-together thing came...na relation na friends...thank you for that...

with swayam u gave me a shock too...sharon asking him to come in???😲

thanks for the pm...

Edited by shaani2209 - 12 years ago