#4 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 19-22

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Araina

@-Araina-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: lil_devil_himu

Hmm

And you? All studies done? I hate my school wale. Break mai bhi IOP's.

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Misha

@Born2Dance

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

chalo me finally commenting on this ff ! 😛

well i liked d start !

n miss NANNI finally aa hi gai !

though i no u wont make her d person we all hate !

well , dhasu entry !

sachi !

d display of an attitude b**** !

me like !

n madam ko aate hi understanding bana diya ??

lols !

no problem !

though its gonna be difficult at least for me to see her in ur ff !

specially after the tujhko jo paya heartbreak !

lite !

and coming to kriya !

i so had expected this twist but still thought ki tu nahi daalegi yeh !

anyways !

tu jo bhi show kare , ek chotu request hein meri !

please show a proper bond between kriya and smriti !

i mean d hatered and all is fine but you know don't make it so stong !

after all she is also a mother and i can't hate her at all !

hope you understand !

and then the swaron's part !

well frankly , it was really nice !

the start was ok , and then the jealousy part was good but the end !

DHAMAKA !

i mean , did SRP actually ask a mere swayam to come in her house ?

woooh !

way to go girl !

P . S . sry fr not commenting AT ALL !

hope this compensates !

apologies in advance !

-luv mimi !

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

loved the update khushi...ab next update se taani hoga...kab tum kriya aur gang ki meet hogi???

loved the twist it was unexpected...eagerly waiting 4 next part...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

awesomeee update👏

loved ittt😊

waiting for d nxt part😊

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kriyaansh.reyam

@kriyaansh.reyam

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Luved the update di... Taani has entered ... Haan di please humare kr koh jaldi se new year par milva do... Voh pehle new year pe hi mile the sooo plsss ... Jaldi milva do... Waiting for the next part...

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

awsome update...

Luvd it...

Swaron part i lykd it it's on track bt sharon is taking 2 much tym...

Dat's gud u didn't made tanni neighter sister nor friend...

Nd nw tanni nyc entry...
I've no problem with till she's nt goin to cum b/w kriyansh...

Nd want kriya back before NY

so update jaldi-jaldi...

Thankx 4 d pm

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

nd congrats 4 d new thread...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Starting from Taani part... Well i definitely did not expected her to be like this...totally different... i must say i really liked her entrance... thank god she is not his sister.. 😛
Now coming to Kria part... So.. Finally... Smriti's truth is going get revealed front of Kria... And last... swaron part...it was like always..cute... 😳 ... Sharon jealousy when she came to know about Tanni staying with swayam ... wait a sec... Sharon asked him to come in...i mean inside her house... Really..???? : Overall...awesome update... 😃 ... Waiting for updates now...
n yeah bring kria back soon to mumbai..

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Res

unres

awesome part khushi... 😊

taani ki entry ho hi gayi... nice

abhi tak toh sab thik hi hai, i really like her character... but u dnt think that it is some thing similar like kriya's character... first meeting me fight...

swaron track is going good... sharon being jealous of taani... 😆 😉

hope we will get to see some romance btw swaron...

nd pls kriya ko new year tak wapas lekar aao... missing kriyaansh 😭

kriya-smriti convo was creating some suspense nd twist in story...

eagerly waiting for it

update soon

thnx for pm

Edited by GayatriJethani - 12 years ago

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annu

@_sweetannu_

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

wow fabulous update.
tanni entry . . ,. .is bingo 😛 . . . . i like her entry style n clash with poor 😕 rey.
smriti see sharon pic with ring. . . 😲 . . . . . hope truth will come out in nxt part. 👏
Ring pic is too cute. 👏
swaron again too cute n sweet specially swayam slow driving reason. . 😳 luv u swayam.
sharon jealous. . . . . 😉 . . . . . . .she akd swayam to come in. . . . . . 👏 finally their luv story come back to right track.
waiting fr our princess kriya's return. 👏
Loved it.

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