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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

oh no so arnav goona take his revenge on khush family

or some other family...

but khush goona get hurt thts for sure poor herr...

arnav ur really jerk i think 😕

update soon , thnx 4 pm 😃

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

superb updt

luv it

updt soon

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Diakumar17

@Diakumar17

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Even though its short, it gives a hint about arnav's past.
He scares me, this update has taken the story to its next level.
Very excited about next update.
Thanks for the PM

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

I like the attention to detail and that for me is very important in a story, you factoring things in your story takes it a notch higher and am glad to be reading this.

-K

PS - thank you for making me love chikankari all the more, have to add to the many suits and kurtis I already have. I absolutely love that work.

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Chapter 3

I believe the wait in the first part somewhat defines the story. I love how you have written it with details, descriptions and feelings! And to know the intensity of Khushi's feelings in over-whelming. No wonder, they have been pressurised for marriage 😃

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

You have left it at such a cliff hanger. It has left me wanting more. You have especially written this part extremely well.

There is this element of mystery and suspense in your story but the mystery suddenly has become sinister with this update.

This wedding will allow at least one person to fulfill his vow by getting ASR married to KKG. But, Aakash is married to Payal too, one a Raizada the other a Gupta. Why couldn't that man set things in motion from that wedding itself? Why wish for this wedding? Is this related to KKG's past?

Btw in the prologue with the background of ( mill?? ) burning was this the person who vowed?

Update soon

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Wow...talk about the high level of mystery and intensity you manage to put across through this chapter.

So this person is succeeding in fulfilling his vow of getting Khushi and Arnav married.

And you made this person sound really sinister...with his level of planning.

Also, is he the guy who took the first vow? I think he is.

Loved the chapter. :)

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

OK, this chapter really leaves one intruiged.
At the first glance, it seems like a very ordinary one, with just an article prevailing, but as you read, it makes your stomach knots, cause there is something behind the article which is provoking Arnav to agrree to the marriage !

And wait, did he just confess that he trigered the media rumour about him and Khushi ? OK, now that does change a lot of things, and Arnav seems pretty menacing here.. I just hope he's human enough with Khushi and doesnt break her heart, though I have a feeling he will...

Waiting for the next one

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Param

@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

mystic update... arnav is having different plans for this wedding... hope he doesn't hurt khushi as his attitude seems to be very dangerous... do update soon will be waiting eagerly to know arnav's plan and his executions... thanks for pm 😊

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

This reminded of the first vow in your prologue, do correct me if I am wrong.

This was a short piece, yes, but it was precise, gripping and just right. Less is more, and this one is a fine example. The detailing was flawless; reveals just enough to have us glued to the story, and conceals the rest to keep us wanting more!

I gather the suspense, also a sense of impending doom or perhaps crisis. Very interesting, I will be spamming your Scrapbook for updates :D

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago