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Nazneen

@naz_2012

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#861

best 1 yaar...

i hate ths sik..arrr😡😡 nd his brothr too😡

ohhooo riya ws so scared in the flashback...loved to c the way she calmed down aftr hearnd abt her dad health...nd amit he is sweet😛😉 nd d code language ws nyc 1

nd arjun rawte is always d best...he found riya bt lets c wat happens nxt

once awesum update yaar jst a fab😊👏👏

nd ha thankx fr d pm...lukng forward fr ur updates ..take care

Edited by naz_2012 - 12 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#862

Thanks for the PM..

Loved the updates...read it the same day but i guess i had no time for a long comment..and i know u love long long ones...thats ur demand too na? so sorry for commenting it so late...

anyways back to the updates..it was awesome...loved the airport scenes

Arjun-Riya scene was hot...Arjun's impatience and Riya's fear was beautifully written...

Amit was cute when he tried to fight for getting a sorry from the super cop!

overall loved it so much...cont soon!

and take care of ur health...get well soon!

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wondergirl1990

@wondergirl1990

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#863

superb update loved it plz continue soon cant wait to read more dear pls pm me ...Arshi

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#864

hi muskan darling 🤗 Mujhe amit dedo dear 🤣
Rofling...
amit mujhe arjun apology chaiye
lil bodyguard...!.!!
shree 🥳
Proud n frm nepal...
yr mere pas wrds ni h tumhari update ko bayan krne ke liye..
shree drank up whole google 🤣
Sky n sik 🤬
Fb scene 🤗
Yr tareef krun kya tumhari..
jisne tumhe bnaya
is ff ko dene ke liye 🤗
Sky ne riya ko slap kiya arjun ke samne 🥳
Kaka rathod n arjun father 🤗
Shree n rathod 🤗
Amazing
loved it
claps...!!!
grt
superb
excellent
🤗
Thank u dear 🤗
Me done yay
ur greedy reader!!
tc..
super se upar wala update 🤣
Hugs

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Sia

@satanslove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#865

HI Muskaan ,

To introduce i am a recent joiner of the Arjun forum ...and have stumbled upon your FF which i might is very different from all the others mainly the charactyer of Arjun being the most differnt and difficult one .

Coming to ff the way you interlink past and present is nice ...

Arjun- i dont find him gud enough to luv or bad enough to hate coz he is so different yet so similar regarding his observation skills as he is in the serial .

Riya - Innocent seductress i would name her .. i like her bonding with the other ETF memebers and esp with Amit who is one of my favourite characters in the story ...

A request -Could you please mention Ariya in the subject line or update the link in the Arjun forum coz its really tough to find the FF in the fanfictions forum coz that would really help the other memebers too ...

Coming to your dhamki i cant promise to reply asap ...as i dont check india -forumns site soo frequently ...but please do PM me teh next part i have sent you a buddy request ..😃

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#866

Hi, muskaan.

I know, I know! I am one of the silent readers of your ff. But I just love your work. You see, I am not allowed to access the net much. So I usually do the reading through my mom's phone, and it does not have facility to reply throgh it. But I understand how much pain and trouble you must be going through to update a work. So I will try and reply regularly from now on. I have send you a buddy reguest too.

Now, coming to your ff, it's just superb. The different characters have so much depth and potential. Arjun's dark side is also challenging. Do continue soon.

Love,

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nikki08

@nikki08

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#867

hey finally read all the parts...

Its amazing...really...loved it!

Fading Butterfly...wow..this is one of the best FF i have ever read!!!!

Just loved it!!!!!

First of all...Arjun...wow...

Its good to read something new...

I liked the way you have portrayed the grey side of Arjun...

Riya...she is such a Darling...

what patience she has!

I love the way how she doesnt loose hope...and try every bit to make Arjun happy!

The way you move between present and flashback..its amazing...

its good to read it like this...

Arjun and Riya's personal life...

ok...i would say..u have written it really very well!

Arjun...he treats Riya like some lifeless thing..that can be used whenever wanted and throw it away whenever wanted!!! I really hated him at first...

But now when i know the real reason for his behaviour...i dont hate him now...

Awww...he loves Riya.but cant accept her...why ...just because of Sikander...

I feel so bad for him...

Love to see his concern..how he put cameras so that he can make sure that Riya is safe!

In the flashbacks..how he kissed Riya, punished her...

I feel so bad for her...

But also admire her confidence and strength...

aww...Riya making cake for Arjun..

and he loved it too...! wow..!

how she used to do all her chores silently when Arjun was sleeping so as to not to wake him up or disturb him! aww...love her!

his mood swings..no I would say his behaviour swings...

sometimes he is so good and sometimes, so bad!

How he locked her up in the balcony..but then came back and helped her...

took care of her when she was ill...wow..loved that part!

That part when he made her sleep on the bed and she got scared...

I could really feel the pain in Arjun's heart...

Riya..she being scared..I had tears in my eyes...

But now..finally he has started showing his love for her!

I am happy!

how he got so possessive for her safety..

whenever she went out!

that scene in the ETF..when she brought food for everyone..his concern for her..

the way he tld Shree to remove all the case details...

i loved it!

riya's relation with Amit..awww...she is so sweet

I also loved Amit!

And rathod...wow...he considers Riya as his lil sister...

And the whole ETF team...finally...atleast Riya is getting some love from them!

Oh...i so hate that Sikander...

how can he kidnap Riya!

I am sure Arjun will find him and kill him!

This Sikander...bloody...he is playing games...

I really really hate him

First for killing Roshni and now for kidnapping riya!

So..this Sik..he like playing games...ha..

oh..now Arjun has finally got hold of him..

and now he has finally found out that Sky and Riya...

I loved his attitude when he spoke to Sikander...

just like a prince..ofcourse he is..

and his father!

the last update..

wow..a really really long one!

loved it!!!!

ufff...what a flashback!

and now...the case...

wow...i am eagerly waiting to know how will Arjun save Riya!

Finally...completed...

I know how much pain u writers take to write the story...

And I really loved your work!!!

i hope you liked the comment!

And yup...I have sent you a buddy request...

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#868

sorry for the late reply dr...

quit busy...

thanks a lot for adding me in ur PM list...

hw is ur health...

hope u would be fine...

coming to the update...

lots of claps and hugs to the update...

👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.

🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.

i am addicted to ur update yaar...

as-usual ur update was awesome fantastic excellent marvelous...

arjun dad was so super...

hw sweet rathore was as a ETF chief and as a brother...

its shree's magic said shree to arjun tat was nice part...

kaka and arjun bonding was nice...

i don knw how to express my feeling to flash back...

u made me blush yaar😳.😳.😳.😳.😳.😳.😳.

arjun couldn't control himself while seeing riya...

poor riya she was so scared of him...

but she used to love him lot...

in the story amit is my favorite...

he is always naughty...

amit questioned arjun tat was naughty part...

arjun apologized to riya and amit also unbelievable...

stupid sky did a big mistake he slapped riya infront of arjun surely he is going to die before his brother...

thanks a lot for sweet update yaar...

i am dying to read ur update more...

come soon yaar...

once again thanks a lot for adding me in the PM list...

plz post the precap soon...

waiting...

love u❤️.❤️.❤️.❤️

Edited by anu91 - 12 years ago

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#869

sry for d delayed replies...read last two chapters ...

loved d way u writes.

waiting for the next update ... wnt to knw how arjun deals wid sik 😉

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mithramahi

@mithramahi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#870

Hi dear...
Loved d entire part...
U r doing a marvellous job...
The charectors r so complex and still u manages them well...hats off to u dear...
Waiting for d next update...
Take care... 😛