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Posted: 12 years ago
thx fr d pm...!!!
super duper update...!!!!👏👏⭐️
lvd it...!!!
awww arjun cares vry much fr riya...!!!😳
amit riya convo ws awsum...!!!
etf offce scene ws vry swt n cute...!!!
finallyy sikander has been caught yayy...!!!😎
hope riya is safe...!!!
cant wait fr d nxt part...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
super part
loved the flash back scene
poor riya she cried because she thought arjun doesnot like her,
loved the scene when she compared her face with arjun ,& arjun is so caring,he was so much worried of her safety.
loved the precap
waiting eagerly for next part
cont soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee..update..👏👏
this is my first comment on any ff...
u totally rock..
update soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yuppieee...All the week I do wait fr ur update...N its here...thankyou...
Wel...once again great,update..love the concern of Arun..He wanted to protect her..His way of concern is,gud..but sad,for Riya...
the way u portray Arjun's feelings for her is jst fab...
N finally that Sik is caught...
Now hoping cute cute scenes of Aria in present...
Just make Arjun apology sumthing special...
Don't make Riya melting towards him so soon after this much...
Make Arjun suffer a little too...
😆
Btw,thanx fr the pm...n update soon...
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's jus luvly,luvly and luvly...amazin amazin n amazin...n d precap,,,,,its making me ...desperate t read...d next update...plzzz plzzz update it asap...
Edited by princy48 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
muskaan :


honestly speaking, the image of pati-brata naari that riya is currently sporting in the flashbacks is indigestible for me..maye be coz, i have had enough of them already in the zillions of tv shows all thanx to a certain Ms.Kapoor, and cant take any more, specially not riya. rather than that, i liked amit and his comments on arjun " Lion !!!😆 " and arjun's over-protectiveness regarding riya is getting on my nerves despite his reasons for doing so..infact, agar main riya ki jagah hoti toh sirf issi baat ke liye usse divorce de deti !! and finally back to the present, sikandar 's trapped and that too in arjun's palace itself ..you know, i can already hear the famous bg score in my mind as the team stood there pointing their guns at Sikki😊.


update soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey girl,
Lovely update!!! The romance between Ariya is pitch perfect.. I loved it.. Loved the conversation between Amit n Riya.. He calling Arjun "lion" n Arjun smirking at that comment.. I have read this line somewhere (cant seem to recall) it says "No matter how much he hurt her,, no matter how much he made her cry,, She was still silly enough to love him"
This line suits Arjun n Riya in ur story. It would have suited Serialwale Arjun n Riya as well if Sana had continued the show. Coz i m sure serialwala Arjun wouldnt have accepted Riya's love for him so easily..
I know i digressed from the main topic, srry for that. The main thing is that u r a superb writer.. Continue writing many such stories.. N haan, update soon. N thanx for the pm..

Byeee,, Tc!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such an amazing update :) loved it
felt so bad for riya when she was thinking she is not suitable enough for arjun and that she is a bad kisser and also that she is just an ordinary girl...
love how she was worried for him that he didn't have the breakfast and also when she prepared foo for him and actually went to his office to give him the food despite knowing that he might get mad :) she loves him selflessly..
riya's bonding with rathore and amit is beautiful ... loved how arjun didn't want her too see the pictures of those brutal murders and everything else
oh god he made both of them climb the stairs 😆 that part was so funny and especially the way amit was reacting...
the lion's den 😆 god amit is so funny... arjun likes karela...
loved arjun's concern about riya going alone was just too awesome :)
awww how sweet he dropped her home so that she won't go alone and pretended that he came back to take a file ...
the way she was comparing their faces in the car was hilarious 😆 and loved arjun's dialogue " if you are done comparing our faces, we have reached!"
love how he is softening towards her and yet pretending that he doesnt care about her at all...
omg arjun actually knows where riya is? 😲
finally they caught sikander so happy
sikander you are gonna be dead now :) yayyy
precap sounds awesome :) ice cold water on sikander's face 😆 he deserved it...
can't wait to read next part
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally after so many heart wenching updates i had ful nd full happy update to readon... yeah i knw st part was bit sad bt on the whole this updte s happy one...
Ariya's care for eachother, Amits tweet bits on Arjun nd Finally Sikki s caught by ETF so much to celebrate nd happy abt...
Riya comapring her features wth Arjun's was cute nd lovely nd Arjun our super cop nuthn miss his ever vigilant eyes... cool scene it was... Amits comments abt arjun was funny ... oh so he compares Arjun to lion...its a perfct comparison i guess...
Sikki u r so dead... nah nah... u r dead... ha i'm waiting to see hw Arjun s going to shw his hositality 2wrds Sikki... it vl b fun nd best evnt to wait for... i'm already waiting for Arjun nd ETF team to lay hands on Sikki ... it vl defo b a sight to watch 😈
waiting for Ariya Milan... update soon
Edited by Leki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wao akways gra8 update dr,
nice flashback ,
wopppyyy now sik is arested ,
how waiting to kno,
ohhh prince arjun,
realy lv the side of arjun,
how sweet riya,
so inoccent n pure hearted ,
hop soon arjun find riya
waiting for next part,
conti soon
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