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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Hey Muskaan.. That was brilliant!!
You had my heart racing all the while; first when Arjun couldn't find her and they realised that they'd been tricked..
Each time Sikandar mentions Riya, I feel like strangling him, myself! I can only imagine what Arjun and the ETF must be going through..
And then him going to Solapur? Why does he want to meet Arjun's father? Is he going to hurt them too? Or will Arjun have to pick between his family and his wife? God!! Girl, you have me glued to your story..
It seriously is very gripping!!

And now, the less brilliant and more beautiful part.. 😉
I was soo happy for Riya when I read it.. She deserves every bit of love, attention and care that he showers on her.. She's way too adorable..

But I was a bit saddened by the fact that Sik took her away just when their love had started blossoming!

Can't wait to read more of it.. Update sooner.. And thanks for the PM.. 😊


aww dear thanks alooottt...this means a heelll lot to me!!! thanks alooottt...
i am on cloud nine...
picking between family and love is so ekta style! nope..not going to happen😆

the story ahead is interesting..(i hope u find it too)😉

thanks again😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tani23


Thanks dear 🤗...agle part mein isse bhi bada comment ...DEAL ACCEPTED 😉


R u like updating in sum time ???...Waitn

i will b coming after 10 ...
aate saath first post wud b dis ...dat i wud chk ...promise


awww...so sweet of you!!! i am delighted! mai b chek karungi in night..(to see if you have commented or not😉)

and yes i am updating in 10 mins...after i complete replying...😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki

Amazing mind blowing update... i vl kill Sikki with my bare hands... he s such a bloody🤬 ... every update i hating him more nd more... Hw culd he cheat them lik dat... nd wats he doin n Arjun's home... sure he s upto sum flithy plans...

Ariya moment was... update soon...


bechara sik...everybody after him to kill...😉

thanks alot😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Christeee

OMG i just had butterflies in my stomach reading it

When is ARIYA gonna meet
continue soon


soon they are meeting😳😳 very sooonnn😳😳

thanks 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prava55663

Awww...Arjun Rawte the super cop couldn't find his mehbooba yet...😭😭


They searched for her so much..Aww the idea of firing bullets into the boat, just awesome..
Arjun Rawte rocks!!😉

The Beep Beep words for Sikkyyy😡😡
those were very less...hate him to the core...

Flash backs were beautiful romantic as always...

She did All the house hold chores without making noise so that arjun's sleep won't be disturbed..

How much dedication she is showing in her marriage life..😊
And Arjun doubting on her...😲😡that was bad..

He showed love to her and she gave him the space without fear...😳😳
I had butterflies while reading..Their Passionate kiss..X 3..Loved it..☺️☺️

Arjun Rawte is so romantic...but i hope he will find ria soon..

Awaiting for the new twists waiting to read more...🤗



pravaaa...thanks a looottt🤗
mehbooba iski hi hai..kahan jayegi?? mill hi jayegi sooonnn..😉

i am so happy...malum i spend my whole college time thinking of arjun and my half time is spent on thinking new twists for my ff...very happy that my work is being appreciated😳😳

thanks...😃



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Princeess07

That was a superb part...
Liked the way arjun shot the boats..
Sik so bad..that was just a trap for them.. no riya there..
Sik going to arjun's home town..
Liked the precap, pointing the gun n saying it as an appointment...
Arjun showing his princely attitude...it was too good..
Just loved the ariya scene...even if arjun lost his control, he listened his heart at that moment...that was really gr8 chap:)
that was a real gr8 chap:) nd mine favourite part... update the next part soon...


thanks aloottt dear...hope you like the next part too...posting it sooonnn😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: life93

HI MUSKAAN🤗IT WAS BRILLIANT UPADTE WHOLE ETF IS TRYING HARD...

SIKANDER IS SO BAD HE IS HURTING RIYA...😡...N ARJUN IS SO GOOD THE WAY HE GIVE HIS ADDRESS TO THE CRYING WOMEN WAS HERT WINNING ATTITUDE OF OUE SUPER COP...UPDATE SOON

🤗

our supper cop is so kind hearted bhi na...😉
remember the epi in which he once held a small baby...he held it so carefully as if he is scared to drop it!😆😆
love him...😳😳thanks alottt
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

Superb dr...
Loved each and every part of the update...
Arjun ready to pay anything for her love...
As a brother rathore was so superb...and
the most important thing the flashback was fantastic...
Riya is so caring for arjun hw sweet...
First time arjun did wt his heart feels for her...
Make the lovebirds to meet soon waiting for more hot ariya...
If u didnt kill that sik surely i am going to kill him...
Precap so interesting cont soon waiting...


thanks dear...i loved the reply...

request accepted..i will make them meet soon😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Sik is definitely going off limit now..

Arjun Rawte usse khaat ke machli ko khilaana waala hai...
I am so angry..how dare he cheats ETF!
I just hope Riya returns without a scar...to her Arjun...fingers crossed

and WHat is Sik's plan now? why is he going to the palace...oh no, more devilish plans,is it??? eager, anxious...what now?

ARIYA scene...haaaye...so cute and romantic...
And Riya doing all works silently just to ensure that he isnt disturbed...how sweet!

post soon


machli...nah...kutto ko😆

if i were in his place...mai to ...mai to...pata nahi gusse me kya kya karti😆😆

thanks aloottt dear...i am honored to get such great readers...love it...thanks...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: polly_03

muskaan :



damn that sikandar to have whisked away riya again from under their very noses*bangs on the table*..specially now when the entire team is searching for her desperately. the entire idea of the team shooting down the empty boats so as to reduce their numbers was excellent. loved riya's care and concern for arjun and his subsequent guilt on suspecting her in the flashback. hope shree finds out something about the private flight soon. and i'm waiting for more twists in tale, although the biggest twist for me was commissioner Coelho's past ..that Sikandar had killed his wife and daughter too, no wonder he gave arjun all liberties to catch sikandar ..either dead or alive. update soon.


awww thanks alooottt...i loved it...i am sooo happy to read such comments as they encourage me to no limits...i hope i keep on giving good updates to you guys,,,

thanks alllooottt once again...😳😳

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