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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prava55663

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I am splendid...You can soon publish this as a book...So brilliantly written...

It was indeed a long update...

Loved arjun so much today...to secure ria's life he was staying away from her...
but his love was visible to sikky i guess...

I really hate this sikky...how brutally he killed roshni...knowing that she loved arjun..

Flashback makes me cry...😭😭
Ria and her pain was finally noticed by arjun...and he exclaimed he won't hurt her...

she was dreaming of him in such a horrible way...that was really disgusting!!
She couldn't even sleep on bed after the incident...arjun's heart must have been broken into thousands of pieces after knowing this...well writing...loved the you explained each and every emotion...

The best thing in the update was cake part...arjun eating it like a baby...i couldn't imagine arjun like this in your story...so i just loved it:)


aww thanks dear...i hope gorky sir mere ff padhe aur mujhe bhi arjun team me shamil kar le...mai to pagal ho jaungi😆😆😆

thanks alooottt

sikki knew he loved her that is why he behaved tat way...and he in order to hurt him, took off riya...😳😳

aww i loved your reply to the bottome of my heart...thanks alooott dear...😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aroojarain

OMG!! wht an update.. simply awesome... nd jus one word WOW!! lovd it... it was amazing... jus loving da story... nd gr8 work... how u decribd arjun's past.. dat was so emotional.. nd jus lovng rathore,shree nd chottu how dey supportng arjun... best team in a true sense..:) nd aww.. poor riya is scared of arjun... continue soon.. eagrly wiatng for nxt part,,,,.:) nd happy new year to u too :)


thanks dear...and yes they are the best team...the arjun team!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Princeess07

So that was the reason... Roshni-she loved him nd was killed for saving him... All the ETF members got tears, while reading I too got tears..
Sikandar such a bad person..
Riya nd Arjun both favourite chocolate cake...mine too
Riya so scared after that incident-sleeps on couch instead of bed...she's afraid of bed now...
Still believes nd trusts arjun..

That was really SUPERB chap:)
I was hoping for the last precap in this chap:) still need to w8 for next chap:)
waiting egarly for the next chap:)
update it soon...


you got tears...awww thanks aloottt...and i am so touched...thanks...mine too...chocolate cake...bring it on baby!😆😆

the last precap will be in next update...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shaff

wow its awesome 👏
the way arjun care for her im jst speechlss




thanks😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amri174

OMG!


That was a lovely chapter. It was just perfect. The revelation of Arjun's past, his memories of Roshni, and the Riya-Arjun emotional upheaval...it was brilliant. In this chapter you showed the extent of Arjun's love for Riya and why he behaved this way with her. BRILLIANT!


thanks...aww i loved your reply too...thanks dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -SREE93-

hai muskaan...sry 4 the late reply

wat to say as always this part also was too good..
nw understood why arjun s so indiffrnt towards riya...
arjuns past with roshini was heart touching..also flashback with riya was good.
arjun really loved riya...
hope that arjun will soon find riya and will also confess his love for her.
waiting for the next update.

no no yaar..ur no late..infact time pe ho...😉

thans allooottt...itne din baad milenge..confession to banta hai...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...

Brilliant update 👏
I was so keen to know who that " SHE " was ???? ... N did Arjun have any relation with her ???? ...
So she was just Roshni who was just a FREND ... 😲
After every update my hating n loathing for Sikander just keeps increasing ... n I agree with Arjun he should have just killed sikander at that spot when he arrested him ... 😡
Poor Roshni was tortured so badly by that sikander ...
Love the bond shared by the team ... 😊
N omg the flashback was really touching ... :(
Poor really actually flinched when Arjun came near her ... She's so frightened and that incident had such a deep impact on her that she don't want to sleep on that bed ... 😭
But her trust n love for Arjun is just beyond words ... 👏 😊
The DARK chocolate cake scene was terrific ... 😉
N love the way he pampered her for sometime 😉
Hope they meet soon 😊
n can't wait for Arjun acting as a prince and ready to do anything to get back HIS Riya ...😉


awww☺️

thanks alooottt😃

and arjun's princely scenes comng up sooonnn...he will act like a complete prince!!😉

thanks aloott dear your reply is really sweet just like the dark chocolate cake...me too love it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arul01

oh my! arjun has a sad past! poor thing! he has been suffering on his own for so long! i really pity him! and the flashback! it was so awesome! riya's fear of arjun and then her trust on his words! i really loved it a lot! can't wait for arjun to find riya! please update soon! can't wait to know what is going to happen in the next update! i am so excited to read it! looking forward to it already!

thank you dear...it was so sweet of you! hayee...me too waitingto read comments in the next part!😉

thanks aloottt😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

poor roshini!! cant even imagine the pain she had gone through!! poor girl... hmmph so thats y arjun behaved like this to riya!! phir bhi he was behaving like sikandar in the fear of sikender getting her!! atlast he know how deeply she was affected.. did he do something to feel her better??

poor riya!! even scared to sleep on the bed.. but still trusts n love him!! hats off to her faith!!

update soon😃 glad to know u wont b giving aisha riya's place!!

n HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO...!!!🤗

btw she doesnt know about him changing her wet clothes.. then y she is scared of that bathroom door kicking incident?? or she didnt notice herself wearing his dress?? 😆


hmm... he was rude..but what to do..bechara thought he was protecting her...😳😳

and yes..aisha is a totaly different character...

and yes she knows about it that is why she was apprehensive of him seeing her like that...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jumbo_dumbo

Hey... Wish u a Happy New year...

I dont have words to describe what i felt after reading the update...
I loved the conversation between the team especially the conversation between Arjun n Rathod..
The scene between Ariya is depicted in a way that i could actually visualize happening in front of me..
Riya's fear as well as love was ... (no words)

I must say u have a great talent.. God bless u girl... Hope u continue writing such wonderful stories..
N a big big hug to u... N dont forget that i m greedy.. :p


aww i hope you like the next part as well...thanks for the compliments and they meant aloottt to me...really i am touched...thanks alot...😳😳

🤗

hehe me greedy too😉
Edited by MastiMuskaan - 12 years ago

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