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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jumbo_dumbo

Hey.. I m new to this forum.. First of all, i want to thank you for writing such a beautiful story.. I read all the parts at one go.. Ur story is a mixture of suspense,thriller n romance , just like the show.. U have beautifully shown two facets of Arjun... His love n concern for Riya as well as his reluctance to show her.

I m waiting eagerly for the next update.. The way u r greedy for the comments , the same way i m greedy for the update..
Thanks again..


hey welcome to our arjun forum...aww we greedy...same to same😉😆😆

we connect!!😆

hope you enjoy the update soon..😳😳thanks alot for commenting dear😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Amazing post...the scene where she was cold and he tried to warm her was super cool and romantic...he was jealous and angry with the glass...that was so different and wow what an idea!


i liked sikandar in this story...devilish and handsome...cool!

and the place where he calls Arjun for the game...wonderful awesome idea again...a maze...

waiting for more plays and to know how Arjun will get back his Riya from Raavan's clutches...
cont soon!


hehe..thanks😳😳

sikandar...😡 but i like him too😉😆

aww thanks alott...hope you like the next update...😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Hey Muskaan.. Thanks for the PM..

Finally caught up with all the parts.. Girl, you had me on the edge of my seat with each update!

I really appreciate the gradual transitions in their characters.. Just hope, the Prince finds his Princess right away! Oh and Vidyut as Sikandar!! Killer stuff! That just made the chase all the more interesting!

Riya, I'm done pitying her.. There's only so much a woman can possibly take.. And she has endured it all..😭 I soo wish she is united with her husband asap!

Well for Arjun, he isn't a perfect man.. He's flawed and slightly disturbed.. 😉

But then, that's the beauty of their relationship. Both willing to keep aside their whole selves and uniting as one..

Please update sooner, next time.. Can't wait to read more of it!
Great work.. 👍🏼

Love,
Avantika..



aww your welcome dear...🤗

😳😳..i hear that your the great writer yourself..and these compliments coming from you...it means alot...thanks... 😳😳

and i promise,,,riya will have what she deserves, his love, his regrets and arjun himself!!😃😃

well can i call you avi...please..😃

thanks alot dear...⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Musku... m sry... editng in few mins... first of all Happy New Year🤗

and secondly am extremely sorry for the late comment kaan pakad ke sorry!!!

**Edited**

I'm sorry dear I'll just keep it short for this time... will give u a big big big reply on next update.. Thank you soo much for such a long chapter🤗 hayeee you won my heart!😉 and thank you once again for dedicating the Chapter to all of us😳and my name's first hayeee mera 1st tha name😉 haha *m so childish😆

okay to the chapter. I absolutely loved each and every scene... I was feeling like I'm in a maze when I read the maze part. I was blushing like an idiot I dont know why.

OMG Sikander has done this before it seems I mean was it Roshni? was she his girlfriend? OMG what is it yaar please reveal the suspence and little bit... I wanna know more... and Sikander challenging Arjun was just WOW!!!

When I felt Arjun was almost going to rescue Riya, Sikander's magic worked I mean I could imagine everything as if its happening in front of my eyes! and Rathore's helplessness was so sad 😔

I'm sure Sikander is gonna call again. Hey I never thought this but I liked Sikander no no I loved Sikander as villian! 😆

Can you believe I was feeling being a maze for two days? well that's you're magic😆 hey m really sorry once again for the late comment Musku...🤗

-Shru

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki

it was realy a thrilling roller coaster update... Sikki s really a crooked cunning player... hw dare he make Arjun life miserable😡... Poor Riya feeling really bad for her... loved the romantic scenes 😳... if he love her then y did he keep her away from him???? i understand Rathore was worried abt Riya bt still if he dnt do lik dat Arjun might hv rescued Riya... oh no wait Sikki vl defo cheat...😡. b/w who was Sikki mentioning abt??? was dere sum1 else in Arjun's life??? is it coz of wat happnd to her Arjun was behaving lik this to Riya so that Sikki wnt hurt Riya??? Wat is Sikki goin to do nw???? i knw its goin to be much difficult this time... why s he hell bent to make Arjun's life miserable???

Wat am i doing??? i was supposed to comment nd this look lik a question bank😲😲... Plz dnt mind... update soon... Thnx for PM


awww..that was abig reply...thanks alloottt...loved it...you will know everything in the next update dear...you will know why arjun kept her away from himself...😳😳😳

and hey...i like your question bank...😆 it was so cute why would i mind...😳😳thanks...and your welcome...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: littlebrat

jaani dil khush kar diya...first part mazedar

second part uff arjun ki desperation ne hila ke rakh diya


well as for comments and likes you deserve it😛

love ho to arjun and riya jaisa

wow super awesome

good job dear

aww...tumhe acha laga...i am gratefull...😳😳😳thanks alot...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchu

LOVED IT... LOVED IT!!!

SUPERB YAAR!!
THE FIRST PART WAS SO ROMANTIC!! COULD ACTUALLY VISUALIZE IT!!
NEXT PART... OMG... THE MAZE PART WAS SUPERB!!
LOVED THE TEAMS LOVE FOR RIYA!!
PLS DONT FORGET TO PM ME THE NEXT PART!! PLEASE...


thanks aloottt...😳😳..and yeah i wont forget but please add me to your buddy list😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tmbs

superb...no words to describe arjun's helplessness and pain...very well written...nd thanx for the longgg update...nd eagerly waiting for the next update...😊

hey thanks alot...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Love it..

Thanks for pm
Hope you feel good...


thanks radhika...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aroojarain

OMG wow!! wht an update..:) it was fab nd amazing :) lovd it :) very-well written.. lovd da FB scenes... nd how arjun goin through any cost to find riya.. FF is getng intrstng ..:) continue soon :) nd thx for da pm :) nd yeah jus lovng rathore nd shree.. how dey r showing concrn for riya.. was jus awesome :)


hey thanks a lot...i hope you like the next update as well... 😳😳

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