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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

yayy!! dhinka chika 1st one to comment..again a rocking epi..rathod give a chance to arjun..fr riya!!arjun determined to shower all d love to her wow!!!!interrogation part ka to kya kehna maza aa gya.! i m thinking jab hemant ka ye haal hua to sikandar ka to kya hoga hehe..!!like d caring arjun most..he left his car n ran for riya in rain amazing..!! d concern he shows for riya awesum..!! riya deserves a hats off dat in such a condition he think abt arjun n called him sir!! lovely a super duper hit epi once again..!!lots of claps..!!Waiting fr sikandar condition_to come..!!

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Res edit Kal karungi ---

Honestly bolu ye kal kabhi nahi ata..1st of all sorry for the late edit...

Vaise I read your previous reply to my comment.. Omg that was seriously long I actually didnt pay attention then😆

You were dead for some time😲 ohhnooo if that's the case then I'll surely leave very chota sa comment😆 tu decide karle Musku..

This is very rare maybe the first time a writer was eagerly waiting for my comment😳 hayeee dil ko chu liya tune!!! and haan before I end this tu mujhe hug ki jagah hath degi?😆 woww... tere hatoo se mast mast FF's likhungi🤣 sorry would need your brain too hehe😛

On a parting note from the previous reply... a big Bear hug...and seriously you really crashed my bone I'm on plaster🤗

OMG Dhamkiii ye toh sirf writers hi kar sakte hai🤣 dont worry I'll comment earlier dekh I'm 2nd to comment just for you😉

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Okay now to the Chapter...
awww.. Arjun called Riya in his dream and she called him... this is True love<3

The ETFians are on major task wow no neend nothing...

kya haak jataya hai Arjun ne.. der aye durust aye (Hope I said it right) 'The person we all are trying to find is My WIFE' this was awesome from Arjun's side...the desperateness in him is increasing day by day. 😳

Hahaha 'Since when did he got so interested in dresses'?

My answer 'From the time Sikander wanted to be a girl looking at Riya's elegence'🤣

Sikander made Hemant to buy 196 dresses? woh bhi designer OMG kya baat hai yaar Riya should seriously stay with Sik now he provides her clothing..😆 ohh god.. What a crazy obsession this dude has built yaar!!! ufff

Vaise Arjun knows Riya's size? I mean how😉 please ek flashback toh banta hi h na muskuu...

I swear it was Siku's other man who shot Hemant!!! Lets find out shall we...

The flashback of Riya & Arjun was soo adorable.. he drenched himself just to bring Riya inside the house. awww..and he actually saved her..My hero ne kiya...<3

and he changed her clothes I mean the big thing is it was his kurta that she wore😳 and that pant scene😳

I seriously have a big complaint please badi si update karo this one literally started and then in few seconds ended!!!

That's it for now... Bada update next time.. till then a big hug🤗 please dont die looking at this comment (hoping its not longer than your actual update🤣)

*Shru*

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Finally i read it ...

Now dis is wat i call a Super Duper Hit Update ...although it was SHORT

i mean ...Muskaan aapki updates always long hoti hain...

ki dis tym...d moment i saw d Precap i was like:"Yeh itni jaldi kaise finish hui"

chal nyways ...lemme start (it wont b a long Speech ..so dun worry)

Firstly now ..after reading 4 th Chapter ..i m in luv wid character of arjun...

b4 that i liked him but i felt like slapping for misbehaving...

but dis tym he showed his concern , his love n dat was superb

I liked d way ETF team initially interrogated Sikander's Assisatant... OMG he made him purchased 200 dresses for Ria...Kya Obsession hain😆

Luved d way Arjun talked with him..pointing a gun in his mouth...Bechara

*** Now Arjun will bajaoFy Sikander ki band soon ...n sikander will sing :"Band baaja baarat"

n Ria will reply :"Tum to Aivanyi Aivanyi lut gaya"😆😆

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I liked d way Arjun ran just to save her ...to protect her

Fireplace par Kya scene tha ...awesum

Waiting to know how will he react (He wud b angry or show concern for her) wen she will gain consciousness

Sikander ka face revelation ..WOW

(now i m tired writing so Bye..Awesum work ...Ignore dat *** thing...i like expressing everything with songs😆)

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

well thanks again for the dedication😆 and showing us your weak point

ab hum tumhe hamesha emotional blackmail karegein updates ke liye😆

first i'll start with a complaint🤔, update kuch chota nahin tha😭

ok jokes apart, lets discuss your update now

thanks for giving us at least one moment where i didnt want to beat me at all😆

ACP hein, yet he forgot he locked Riya outside, but wow the way he ran back to her...

and hmmm, ahem ahem the warming part ka kya kehna, still blushing at the part where Arjun was admiring Riya when changing her clothes, and then the turmoil for removing her pants☺️, haye you'll take our heart with such an update😆

and now let's be a bit serious, lead to achha tha, but hemant also is dead...

ab kya?

so sikander is buying clothes for Riya? woh bhi dresses😡...

and by the way how does Arjun know Riya's size😳

and thanks for the scene when Rathore reprimands Arjun, saying that this was his last chance and not to disappoint Riya again...

Yaar when will Arjun save Riya????

cant wait for sparks to flow, once Riya is back, now that Arjun is determined to love her😆

please update very very very very soon, itna lamba update jo kiya hein maine😉

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

wow... simply wow...

the way you write the scenes is just perfect...

loved the interrogation part...

and then ARIYA... no words for that...

please keep up the great work!!! waiting for your sikander!!!

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

OMG! another superb update! wow! u are creating magic with ur words! really loved the update! although arjun is a bit harsh on her... he still loves her a lot to even let something to happen to her! hope arjun and riya get together soon! can't bear to see both of them suffering! please update soon! really loved the update! thank you for updating so soon!

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

firstly wow it was amazing update👏

after loosing riya arjun relasing her important

rathore got a new lead,he dont want to tell arjun

seeing arjun pleeded eyes rathore told him,and gave him last chance,

they whent to hemants house,and firsstly they found 6 dress missing,than they asked him but he not told any thing,but rothore shoot him onn his leg,and told rothore is kind hearted sso he shoot on leg,i will directly shoot ur head and he kept gun on his head and finially he feared and told them,thata arjun

but before he could say name he died now wat they will do

arjun struck in traffic,but only for riya he somehoe managged to come out from car,that was so sweet

he changed her dress,and gave air to her,and he rubbed her hand,he also put fire for her,he cared so much,so sweet of him

and coming to precap

riya rememberd every thing,now wat arjun will do,waiting
and sikkanders face will be revilled,eagerly waiting for next part,
continue soon

it was amazing update👏

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Amazing update. The interrogation scene was really great. Love those dialogues. The Ariya scene was the best. Awesome . U made me blush. [:$] .Arjun was so concerned for her. He was so caring. I really want to know whats gonna happen after she gained conscious. Update soon dear.

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

wow!! amazing!!👏

loved the questioning part!! hehehe soft hearted one.. n stone hearted one!! so that lead is also gone.. hope they will get to riya soon!! thank god rathod gave him one last chance... lol he was embarrassed about the dress size comment..😆

one doubt.. in the mean time where is his car?? drenched?? alone in the middle of road?? waiting for him?? just like riya was?? gosh!! he has to think about his belongings more seriously 😆

loved ariya!! wow he was hell worried for her.. i wanna see how he will explain his act to her.. now i know y she is soo confident about him coming for her!! update soon!! i hope there r more than one moment like this one!! 😉

Edited by Queen.Bee - 12 years ago