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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: haruhi26

me first

res, at work will read and comment later😳

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finally i just read it, and can comment
first a big thank you and hug🤗 for dedicating this to us
haye, you made me blushing😳
and muskaan, i dont understand your Arjun is he a good guy or a bad guy?😕
frankly closing her out in thunder and rain, and she sobbing her heart out, yet he didnt return??
and he hating her, looking angrily at her...😭
if right then Arjun had come in front of me nah, i would really have beaten him for treating his wife so horribly😡
Riya and amit are both so afraid of him😭
and now that sikander kamina( read it on an earlier post) really he's not much better, he's here for revenge, wants Riya🤢, but he also beats her and slaps her...
Bechari Riya😭, everyone only hurts her, or beats her her or treat her abominably.
Thankfully she got some friends in the name of Amit, and a brother as Sameer
i loved that Sameer is disgusted with Arjun, anyone would be nah😭
and finally the precap, so they have a lead
and now arjun will find her
and yep how could i forget, Arjun's dream and his promise
you know muskaan sometimes people get damaged too much to be able to trust and love again...
i appreciate and am proud of Riya's unfailing trust and love, but she's only a human
i want Arjun to suffer loads loads and court Riya this time like a proper gentleman and win her heart
please dont make Riya or even Sameer forgive him too easily😭
lovely update dear
and hoping that this comment is long enough😆
will be waiting eagerly for your next update😉


aww dear dont thank me...i should thank you...giving me sooo long replies everytime, taking time to write such long reply means alot😳😳...coz i know some people just went on reading without any reply but you gave me such a heart felt appreciation!⭐️⭐️ thanks alottt i just am compelled to update again and again just to read the replies i get!!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fasa

wow ur dhamki is also sweet like u

really loved it a lot
poor arjun is now suffering
loved rathore's care for riya.
hope arjun finds riya soon.

awww thank you dear...but dhamkee cute hai so dont take it lightly huh😆 coz i am real dangerous😲😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prava55663

what i love the most is ria's unconditional love despite knowing that he doesn't love her...she is still hoping he will respond to her one day...


this really keeps me glued to this FF...

past is so brutal...😭😭

Amit too was so scared of Arjun..
But arjun is too harsh to ria...

I hate this Sikky😡😡...
riya is so confident that arjun would come as her savior...

Loved the update dear...
please i want ariya milan soon:)😆😆


heeyyy thanks allooottt...and yes ariya milan on cards and will be written very soon too...😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aroojarain

ohh wow!!! 👏

Amazing update... lovd it
especially how u take da story frm past to prsnt.. it is jus awesome..😉
love da way riya answrd sikandr..
continue soon 😊

thanks dear!! ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tani23

Muskaan,

I liked d wa Rathore shouted at arjun for not behaving wid her properly

u wont believe but i actually clapped saying :"Rathore u rock"

i liked d fact dat Ria was so much concerned for him , dat she even managed to go to his ofc just to provide him his breakfast...

Aww ria is so sweet ...she immediately bonded with Sameer

i m happy ki he atleast for a moment appreciated her unique way of connecting wid people

but den dis Arjun ...again showed his angr avatar...which is very scary

*** Wen ria will get bak to him ...make him sleep in dat balcony as a repentance 😉

Dat stupid Sikander will definitely b gone 1ce arjun traces him

Finally the last lines by arjun...👏...he accept d fact that he loves her...

Yipee

...

BTW i saw dat u also dedicated d part to me ...THANK U So much

~~~PURVA~~~

THANKSSS!!!!!!
AWW me too..i too wanted to make my readers say that, "rathore you rock!" coz i simply just love arjun-rathore fights! in last epi also...i loved the way arjun back answred him...love you arjuuunnn...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutisweety

wow wat an confidant of riya

she knowss that she doesnt loves her her confident is great

rathod caring gfor riya liked it so much dho they r not a relation

and amit is also scared of arjun

and he said him directly on his face

poor riya arjun locked her

and now he relaising that he loves her

contine soon

waiting for next part


thanks dear!! next update is coming sooonnn...hope you like it ...and yess...the torture of sik will be over sooonnn😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Sneha..

Hey Muskaan!
Amazing update!!
Loved it frm the start to end!
Rathod rocked!! Liked his concern towards Riya..
Aww.. Poor soul loves him soo much that she was ready to bare his anger nd she went to office just to give him his breakfast..
Now Im really curious to knw dat wat was the reason behind Arjun's harsh behaviour..
Atlast.. Arjun accepted that he loves her! Hope he finds her soon :)
God.. This Sikander.. I hate him to the core!!
Finally they got a lead in precap!!
Waiting for the nxt update!

wow!! thanks dear...i hope you like next part too coz much more arjun- rathore in it!!😉😉yes yes...arjun will find riya soon...very soon...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm extremely sorry for the late comment I know you would be like what the shru I've dedicated this chap to you and you did this to me🤣
anyways jokes apart...

OMG... First of all a big Thank you and a hug for dedicating this Chapter to us🤗

Honestly I started blushing just reading the dedication😳😆

I have told you this before I'm absolutely in love with Arjun's character and his change of shades the way you penn it down I'm in love... with Arjun in here and your writing...😳

Ohh and let me first tell you I'm so damn sad... you know why?? OMG I was reading the Chapter before going to sleep well I had saved it on my cell for offline reading so here I'm totally into the Chapter and I'm reading and I said to myself OMG cant wait to read more. I had a drink and then BAM!!! It's gone I mean the Chapter ended...😭 seriously I was into the chapter so deeply that it took me few hours or maybe a day to get out of it...

It was that fab..👏


Awww Amit is such a sweetheart with Riya but I felt sorry for him cause he's scared of Arjun.
Well Arjun's an IDIOT I mean he should have understood that amit is just a child and children do get scared quickly that's the only grey shade of Arjun I didnt like yet...
I mean he shouldnt have come home and yelled at her!!! NO WAY!!
I love the relation you built between Rathore and Riya...it was total a wooowww feeling I mean their hug and convo was super cute...<3
I'm so happy that they met! OMG she never used to take lunch instead used to send it for them awww😔
I'm in love with Arjun because he unconsiously is in love with her, he just loves her to the extent that he took care of her silently... I mean the buzz of phone when someone presses the house bell...I could totally imagine it in my head...
And the camerasss just to take care of her...<3<3<3
Omg Muskuuu how can you do this?? I Mean create something unimaginable(i dnt knw if thats even a word)🤣
OHhh nooo Arjun was in trouble I mean with the three curious pairs of eyes😆
I just cant adoring Rathore and Riya's relation here!!! I love the concern he should to have for Riya, and when he thought he lost his friend just because of Arjun's behaviour!
Arjun desperate in the end made my eyes well up! awww🤗 wanted to hug himm😛

Is it possible🤣
anyways... thanks for dedicating the Chapter muskuuu sorry for the delay... but absolutely in love with the FF.. update soon... and a BIG HUGGG🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey I m really very sorry for the late reply. I had some problem. Amazing update. I love Rathore and Riyas bond. Rathore should be angry with Arjun. Amit is so much scared of Arjun. Poor Riya phirse amit ki nadani ki bejese use punishment mili. Arjun ne use balcony me lock kar diya. Ab wo kya use barish me bhi bahar rakhega. Pls update soon. And pls Riya ko Sikandar se jaldi bachao. Again sorry for the late reply.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mithu_borkotoky

What a stupid creature that Sikander is... Huh!!!

Arjun over-reacted wen he heard Amit's words... but he deserved it...
or bechari Riya ko jhelna pada,,,, HUH!!!
Loved Riya's faith in arjun even after all this...
The story is mindblowing... It nice to see a villan-cum-hero Arjun...
Its different... Its Magic..

aw thanks dear...thanks alloottt...

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