The Fading Butterfly: Thread 2 link in INDEX - Page 113

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

Originally posted by: sanjanakm

di aapka email mil gaya hai but i dont know y im unable to open the chapters pls help me di my email id is

sanjanakm19@rediffmail.com

sanjana

First apologize for the very late Comment ...,Sorry I really stuck with my finals and Uni

Read the intro back in X-mas Vacation, and read the 10 Parts weeks back

Sorry for reply late, I am really held up!!!

To begin with Part - 1, while reading it first I felt like punching Arjun straight in his nose for his big ego and damn attitude.

I adore this Riya and her unconditional Love, doing everything without any expectation and still waiting for him to open up with her.

Well Love is all waiting and doing everything without any expectation, and have described it very beautifully!!!

Though in the beginning Riya was standing up, but his rudeness and cold attitude have pushed her in a pit of darkness.

His act of forcing himself on her ... how can he even think something like???

But when i read the whole part again, I felt there is something amiss in Arjun's behavior.

And for Part -2, OMG, He had his whole apartment footage and watching all her movements.

He was/is concerned and protective for her, then Y he was behaving so rudely with her???

Poor Riya .. really felt sad for her fear and pain, she is suffering a lot!!!

His rudeness will scatter her, where he himself will not be able to fix it.

The Phone conversation was awesome, specially the part where Riya is waiting for him to say her Speak up.

While reading first part i felt like punching, but i read the second part i just loved him, still wondered y he is being so harsh to her.

As for Part - 3, Wow u have beautifully portrayed the wonderful bind between Rathod and Riya!!!

Finally the truth is all out in front of all ETF!!!

love Riya's unconditional love for him but i hate seeing Arjun being so harsh towards her.

His single word gives her lot of happiness, that's what i love the most in this story, Riya's unconditional love despite knowing that Arjun doesn't loves her, and still hoping and waiting for him.

Riya - Sikander's scene was simply WOW !!!

Her confidence that He will come.

Yeah .. finally Arjun agreed that he loves HER.

And Part - 4, It was wonderful, Arjun's restlessness to reach her, and to know How and where She is was described exquisitely!!!

Interrogation part with Hemant in wonderful with 2Rs as lead.

He ran all the way to his apartment in spite of Heavy pouring and traffics!!!

She was waiting for him and sure that he would come for her to rescue.

He really love Her, and his concern for her shows his depth love, but wondered why he was holding himself back than expressing his love to her.

The whole Arjun - Riya scene was beauteous.

And Part - 5, Wow .. Arjun – Riya scenes were Beautiful !!

Arjun's care and Love for Riya is lika dew drops in the early hours of morning which just add beauty.

Daring ACP Rawte and Sikander is back ... Hard play ahead !!!

The whole maze plot was amazing, Arjun is trying his hard to get her back.

It says Once U loose a thing, it's hard to get it back soon.

He and his restless heart to get a glimpse of her.

Sikander's plan was clever and cunning too .. Khadoos to you.

PS : Sikander is damn goodlooking, hard to hate him. Great Selection.

Part – 6, Once reading the part, I just want to re-write all those comments i wrote .

His confession and insecurities just stole the whole update and heart too.

The Roshini part was so brutal!!!

Every man has his secret sorrows, which the world knows not, and often times we call a man cold when he is only sad. ..Well said by the Unknown and great lines apt to the story line.

Arjun – Riya scenes was beautiful again !!!

His remorse and his helplessness to see her going through all was described beautifully!!!

Part – 7, OMG...!!!! The whole thing was a prank, well Sikander not gonna get a easy death !!!

The whole ETF is on high, the game is getting is more interesting and daring.

The whole plot was interesting.

Wonder how Arjun gonna find Riya with so many boats around, the firing idea was brilliant, Khadoos to u again for coming with the idea.

Finally they got a lead to track him down, hope they would successful.

Arjun – Riya scenes were beautiful, the way Riya is taking care of small tiny things of him.

The Hug and Kiss was simply awe, FLAWLESS ...He is irrecoverably in love with her.

Part - 8 (A & B), Yeah ... Finally ETF got him!!!

Past was wonderful, with Arjun's Care and fake indifference attitude !!!

His fear and insecurity is pushing Riya in to more darkness of In-complexity.

My heart went for the poor soul, but still her Selfless Love won again, forcing her to take the food to his office.

Love the Amit – Riya convo about Arjun .. lol Lion's Den !!!

Arjun is though happy to see her but again acted indifferently.

Shree – Chotu's comment for Karela was so funny !!!

He again hurted her, sadoo kahike ...Stupid ACP, but still his few words about her security made her happy.

Mind – blowing update with different shades of emotions.

Part – 9, Yet another Brilliant part !!!

A Full roller – Coaster ride.

Loved it when Arjun and the ETF were in perfect charge !!!

With Arjun as Pilot, Shree as waiter, Rathore as driver, and Chottu as telephone operator ... Khadoos to you again for coming up with brilliant idea !!!

Sikander is again playing his dirty game.

What he is planning now??? Hope Arjun will be able to read through him, and sure he will.

Now what is Sky up to??? As it won't be an easy game, after all he is brother of Sikander.

I really want Arjun to show Sikander his star, but everyone stopped him.

His pain and rage was portrayed awesomely !!!

Part – 10, Sikander is asking for Arjun's life for Riya's.

Finally the King lost his patience, but his faith in his son that he will get his wife and his daughter back was wonderful.

The way Rathore read through Sikander's word were great, true spirit of an ETF.

So that was the reason why Sikander is back of Arjun, Arjun was right he should have killed rather than handing over him to the law... & Shree was so funny.

His brother is His weakness.

Both the brother's are bending in making ACP's life hell.

Sky is as cunning as his brother, the way he disguised himself and Riya, and he was damn good in his act too, and ETF were rocking with the airport scenes, the way Arjun tracked down Sky and caught him.

But still he escaped, and Riya at gun point.

And Finally Arjun – Riya's meeting, it felt like they are meeting after decades.

Sky moved the wrong coin by slapping Riya, the last string that Arjun was holding also broke.

The Past, Arjun – Riya Scenes were simply awesome !!!

The way he confessed how much he wants her, his desire, passion, love for her were portrayed in full essence.

Though she wants to flow in his love and loose herself in his love, but his past act is scaring her and holding her back.

The sorry part was actually so cute, so ACP knows to say Sorry too, and Amit antics were funny.

Lovely Arjun – Riya Scenes.

Part – 11(Teaser) Scary one, Is that mean Riya is back and safe with Arjun.

So finally ACP tracked down Sikander and wonder whats more in??

PS : Thanks for the PMs, Again I'm sorry for the very late comment.

Do PM me the further updates.

I can't reply to the updates sooner, but I promise I will reply for sure, but it will be late.

PSS : Use different color for the Past and Present scenes so it would be more easy in differentiating.