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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
here is the next part

next morning they woke up and as usual nimmo helped kunal select all his stuff
k-pata nahi nimmo tum nah hoti toh mein kya karta

n-oh well tumhara dressing- sense bahut kharab hota nothing much

k-not fair agar koi thank u khena chahe toh bhi tum uski insult kar deti ho
n-insult??? meine toh sirf sach kaha aur tumhara thank u mein din ,mein hazar baar sunti hoon toh koi bhi insaan bore ho jayga, tum apne apko mera dost khete ho toh dosti mein no thank u nah

k-phir bhi nimmo what u have done for me no one else has done
n-ha baba i know
okay now get ready tumhe office bhi toh jana hai na
k-thik hai
(he went to take a bath and water supplied stop half way through when he had soap on )
k-nimmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmo
n-kya hai ek kam tumse nahi hota, mujhe bahut kam hai kya kam hai bahar ake bolo
k-thik hai
(came out in a towel, he thought he had wiped out all the soap but their was still some in his hai and back)
k-nimmo pani kisne bandh kiya
n-kunal, look at u abhi se budhe ho gaye (hid her face and laughed)
k-nimmo kya kar rahi ho pani
n-haan toh jaake pucho nah niche jaake paani kyun bandh hua hai
k-haan thik hai
(he went down and was roaming all over the house in htat state asking why the water supply was cut down and banged with varsha chachi)
v-hai hai kunal tum aise kyun ghum rahe ho
k-kyun
v-yaha pe koi bech party nahi ho rahi
k-oh woh (suddenly realised his state and was trying to cover with his hand)
v-have rehvahde tumko ko kam agaya ha kya
k-haan chachi woh paani bandh kyun hai
v-oh woh, woh tanki saaf karne ke liye aye hai na humko laga sab ne nah liya
k-tanki
v-ha ha have foreigner water tank saf karne aye hai
k-per chachi mera nahna baki hai
v-ay hai itni der tak tu sota hai
k-haan woh raat ko late soya tha nah
v-kem
k-kya chachi
v-uhm samaj gayi
k-nai chachi woh baat nahi hai nimmo toh..
(cutting him half way through)
v-arre meine tujhse koi explination maga, saru ja have mein pani chalu karvati hoon
k-thik hai thnak u
v-per ek baat bata kunal tuhje white baal bahtu pasand hai kya
k-kyun???
v-nai woh kya hai na tumhare baal
k-mere baal(touching his head and finding soap in it) oh yeh woh nah raha tha nah anf he ran to his room
k-nimmmmmmmmo tumhe pata tha nah mein kaise niche ja raha tha its so embarassing i mean tum keh nahi sakti

n-arre kunal mein toh tumhare dimag ka test le rahi thi ki kitna snese of state hai aur usme bhi tum fail ho gaye

k-acha(taking some soap from his head and going towards nimmo)
n-kunal kya kar rahe ho dekho mein abhi abhi nah kar ayia hoon
k-aj toh tum gayi
n-kunal stop haan ,kuch zyada whit baal ho toh iska matlab yeh nahi ki doosron ko bhi de
he went and rubbed all her face with soap
n-kunal stop office keliye der nahi ho raha
k-iss se important kam aur koi nahi tum na old age mein bhi bahut achi nai lagogi

while they were laughinng and arguing natasha entered
hope u liked it guys pls reply 😳
Edited by sufi89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
awesome part!! that was so cute!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it was so gud hahhaaaaaaaaaaa kunnu baby in towel wid soap i guess nat will burn in jealusy 2 see dem 2gether hhahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... its soooooooooooooooooooooo cute and adorable!!!!!!!!!!

i m jus picturing eijaz in a towel... LOLL... cant help it man!! 😉

sufi dear, thnx for PMing me every time. plz keep PMing me whenever u post a new part. thnx so much.

kunal in towel... wow!!!!!
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
here's the next part

n-kunal chodo office nahi jana hai kya
(natasha enters)
nats sees them having fun is a little bit jealous but knows that kunal loves her
nats-sorry bina knock kiye aa gayi
(kunal still holding nimmo's both hands and still in a towel)
k-huh oh um natasha hi, tum yaha
nats-kunal mein yaha pe rehti hoon
k-oh yeah right, per tum yaha
n-kunal kya kar rahe ho chodo
k-oh yeah right
nats-woh hume office ke liye der ho rahithei aur tum ae nahi thats why meine socha mein tumhe bulalu, per tum toh ready nahi ho
k-ha woh pani nahi aah raha tha na isliye mein ek miin mein ata hoon
k-nimmo woh kapde ready hai na
n-ha kunal everything is ready tum jao
(he went)
nats-nimmo waise toh mein kunal se pyar karti hoon,
n-lekin
nats-lekin i'm not ready for marriage yet, i mean its all just two fast
n-tum kunal se pyar karti ho yehi kafi hai
nats-but r sure ki tum dono ke bij mein kuch nahi hai
n-haan woh sab bas tumhe jealous feel karvane ke liye tha nothing much and we're gr8 friends thats why we where comfortable with each other
nats-i understand
(kunal came out)
k-so chale natasha(giving his elbow to her)
n-kunal shayad tum office ja rahe ho ball per nahi and aur ek choti si problem hai tumhare gharwalo ko nahi pata ki u 2 r togehther,toh tum akele jao mein aur natasha thodi der baad ate hai
(at the breakfast table)
v-arre tum dono neh kitni der kar di ane mein
n-haan chachi woh kunal ki wajah se
pam chachi-aur natasha kahan hai woh toh kunal ko bulane gayi thi nah
n-haan bas ati hogi
v-leh avi gayi, shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitaan hazir(whispering)
dadaji-kunal puttar mein chata hoon ki nimmo bhi tumhare sath office jai aur phir woh gharmein baith ke kya karegi
k-yeah dadaji ofcourse

nats(felt a little bad at kunals instinctive reaction)
nimmo-seeing this-nahi dadaji mujhe gharme zyada acha lagta hai i mean sab log yaha per hai

dadaji-jo tumhare marzi per jab maan kare chali jana
n-ji dadaji
kunal and nats went togehther in a car and nimmo waved them off thinking ek din isi tarah kunal meri zindagi se bhi chala jayega aur mein akeli reh jaoongi
just then kantaben came by her side (symbolically she is gonna be on her side forever)

kb-woh tum log english mein do dillon ko mila ne wale ko kya kehte ho
n-cupid
k-haan, agar noble cupid price hota nah woh toh tujhe hi milta
n-kanta massi
k-nahi sach keh rahi hoon
n-massi woh toh mera farz tha, dosti ka after all i want to see kunal happy nah
kb-sach mein mujhe pata nahin bhagwan hamesha tumhare sath aisa kyun karta
n-its okay after all humari toh purani dushmani hai itni jaldi khatam thodi nah hogi
kb-ahca chal mein chalti hoon aj parminder ko pereshan nahin kiya

n-kya massi
k-arre uska gusse wala chera dekhe bina dil ko thandak nahi milti

(after kantaben left nimmo's eyes where filled with tears, after all letting ur love go wasn't ever easy, and she had to sacrifice it 2 times, but was the frist time with vikrant love??? but whatever it was, it had now gone by her and she thought that it will take time to forget kunal but it has go , her love for kunal has to go, and now she could see it, "end" end of everything false, contract marriage,false realationships, ceremonies all' gonna end soon and then what, she could feel that emptiness in her heart, but what has begun has to end and people have to except that) only thing good out of this all drama was that she got such a adorable friend and family.

just then god came by her side giving her a pamphlet

"with every end their is a new begining"

sorry guys if this was confusing frankly even i find it a little bit whacky any ways tell me how it was
Edited by sufi89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
correct me if i am wrong, but isn't the following line from T.S. Eliot?

"with every end their is a new begining"

ghosh... i cant beleive i know that!!

neways, good part... really liked it!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
oh well i just read that line somewhere i forgot the author so even i'm not sure but it can easily be t.s. eliot
anyways yeah i this fan fic nimmo is gonna have a new begining just as she did with kunal after she got over vik but its gonna take time till i figure out howq to put it and now before i say much enjoy reading 😃 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww dats so cooooooooooooooool but 2222 short plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con sooon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey yaar can u do me a favor can u write recap 2 as i read all the fanfics n it gets kind a confusin. thanx 😛 👏

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