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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it! On the author's note, it's your story and your choice on how you take the characters forward. Their romance may be in an office setting but it's more than that. Is there a future conflict when the Mahi/Khushi angle is revealed? Will it confirm Arnav's fear that Khushi is holding back from him? As a reader, I cannot wait to find out how where you'll take this story. Happy New Year!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just got back from vacation and didnt know that a new thread had been started. I kept on stalking the old thread. Wow, this is a treat for new year ... to be able to read 4-5 chapters at a go. Once again I have to say that you are a brilliant writer. I am loving this romantic phase. In some ways it is reminding me of Barun and Khushi and making me very happy. I love this story, its pace and the romance. I have been reading some dark stuff lately .. Dont get me wrong, I love those too ... but nothing beats romance this way. Its just amazing the way you write the feelings and describe the look on the faces. I feel like I am blushing :).
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was amazingly beautiful
Arnav can't be more subtle in his trying to say that he wants Khushi In his life for a long time
I just wonder whether Khushi is gonna tell everything abt her n mahi and if so what will be arnav's reaction to it
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant update and brilliant footnote.

The course of true love never did run smooth - Shakespeare
Edited by dhanya.r - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am commenting more on your note rather than the chapter (which I enjoyed, as always). I like your Arnav and I like your Khushi - I particularly like them together because the characters as you've portrayed them match each other, their personalities intertwine in ways that make sense to me. Office romances are tougher in my opinion for the couple involved because they have to see each other and possibly work together on a daily basis - and their stresses at work may be compounded by their relationship and vice versa. Further, there is the unnecessary gossip that will abound in the office about them - and if the relationship doesn't work out and it doesn't end well between the two - well, that will make the daily grind a completely different sort of hell.
As to relationships in general - you are absolutely right that there will always be outsiders pushing to share their two cents about the couple and their relationship - and these outsiders may very well be well-meaning with good intentions. Ultimately, the strength of the bond between the couple and their willingness to communicate will serve them well and will ensure that the relationship is successful. I wish your brother and his wife lots of good luck!
Happy New Year!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Calm, comforting, and an easy dinner shared between the two.
I'm lovin' it Kalyaani!
Its the way you have molded the characters as individuals and then, them coming together. It makes me smile and be it in fiction :P
Engaging chapter!

As for the note, I have always meant it when I said that you are a brilliant storyteller. And this constitutes on what you believe about relationships, be it office romance or with the family...and what you eventually pen down. I have been thoroughly engaged, gripped, and loved every bit of what you have weaved and henceforth, I'm going to here for the same. Write away :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
A lovely chapter
This Arnav is a sweet heart...
Thx for the email
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...i held my breath while reading the update...
blush..blush..😳
kalyaani love u girl for this
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Posted: 12 years ago
don't ask me how i miss reading this ff while i was in holiday but have Q...why u didn't send me pm for the update? i might not be reading during my holidays but i surely would read after i got from my holidays...
and here i am searching ur update and reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kalyaani the story is fully urs...
we r enjoying it bas...😛
I love office romance... arnav modern but deeply in love with the girl the girl who is very simple and traditional girl...
i am loving it kalyaani...

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