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nomad.ness

@nomad.ness

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

Beautiful update, Kalyaani.

I like the fact that Khushi is so cautious about the whole office romance... this makes it more real; And Arnav's temper and eagerness to move forward in the relationship.

When Arnav suggested Khushi should movie in with him... Gosh, how can anyone refuse. ;-)

As for about office romances, I agree that it can get messy but I think that can be the case in any situation/place. But if you know you are in the right, then others hardly matter.

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chits21

@chits21

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

loved the update...full 2 romance...awww...want a make out session now😉😉

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

A very homely kind of an update...but I do believe they need to know a lot about each other before taking the next step..and i don't just mean her secret...something more basic about each other's personalities ...especially this khushi who has her firmly screwed in the correct place...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

i like the story because of your writing style not necessarily because it translates well to real life. office romances are minefields particularly so if they don't work out for the individuals concerned. but they are minefields for others around them when in progress. in this case, in real life, a case could be made for sexual harassment due to the power differential between the two.

but that is real life and this is fiction

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Fuzzbucket

@Fuzzbucket

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

awww it was as sweet as the kheer mentioned in your update! LOVED IT :) kalyaani, i didn't get your email regarding the update!! can you please make sure i am still in the emailing list!? :) thanks!

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

While it's always great to see real life mirrored so beautifully in fiction, it is the make believe - the possibility of slightly "un-real" - sometimes so perfect, sometimes so disconnected, that makes fiction enjoyable!

So write away, Author.

The chapter was brilliant as always but shucks - another female lead that can cook well. Damn - people like me have no hope! (wink!)

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

I wonder why the topic has been raised.

After all from the beginning we knew it to be office based romance nearer to reality!!

That is what is making your writing so different from the rest!

It has been dealt with a different perspective. Its not really the typical romantic story. Its a romance spiced up with practicality eventhough its a fiction!!

Loved your update Kalyaani!

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

nice update!Arnav's concerns Khushi regarding Khushi was soo sweet!

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

N0 l0ve is easy l0ve but n0t being in l0ve w0nt help y0u either...this phase 0f relati0nship is pr0bably the m0st beautiful...Arnav is quite seri0us ab0ut the m0ve-in...waiting f0r khushi's reacti0n th0ugh I highly d0ubt a p0sitive resp0nse