Tales of the Heart #2 | VirMan | CH 42, PG 112

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Suarez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Loved the two updates !! how supportive virat is !! the chnge maanvi brought in Virat !!! Virat confess that maanvi is the reason for the change stil both unaware of the fact that it might be love !! Too good !! M loving the realisation phase !!!! Beautifully written !!! Love how Jeevika and Viren are playing cupids !! Cnt wait for the honeymoon part !!! Eager to knw wether or not will they be ablle to knw they actually made for each other !!!
Do update soon !!
take care :))

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virumanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

hey i folow diz updates 4rm the very beging.i m a fan of ur posts..never stop 2 pm me yaar..i read both loved it.mind blowing ..plz yaar continue soon..

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MaebyFunke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Wohaa!

Two updates in a row, Woww! I lovedd it..what am I supposed to say now? You always make me fall for you (not the other way lol). Both the updates were too good, the pace with which your FF is going is extremely good. You don't rush things, you make them go in a much better way! Their realization building up!

I wonder how their honeymoon would be man! One week..that's too short! Okay, I always feel your updates are fabulous, but being the writer you're, you may not be satisfied..but I'm also like "Wow" after every update I read of you!

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: LuvVirManNiShal
Loved The Updates
Read The Note totally understand u im alright with the
Sort uodates as long as we get updates
VirMan are becoming closer slowly loved how jeevika interrupted
Their second kiss lol
Naughty Viren teasing poor VirMan
So virat falling in love with manvi viren is trying to make virat realise and jeevika is trying to make manvi realise tht virat loves her
Perfectly portrayed romance and relationships
Beautifully Written
Update soon and pm me please
Thanksz x

Hello! Ha, even if I do say shorter updates...they'll have to be postponed for a few weeks, until my exams are over. Well...their second kiss needs to happen when they're in love, right? 😉

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52
Just read last two updates togthr.. And loved it... Virat is changing... Caring and loving Virat.. Awh... ❤️
And love Naughty Viren... 😉
Honeymoon in london... Cant wait for next part... wanna knw how dey accept each othr as lover... Loved it... Fab update... 😊

I guess the way I've written it or thought of it is that the London part is just so Virat can replace his Maya memories with Maanvi. 😛

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: shilpa09
oh wow zahara... this was a fab update:)⭐️
the way virat and manvi comfort each other is so sweet:)😳... they r always there for each other whenever they need !!!😳
i m waiting to see whether they will go on honeymoon or not... and if they go... how will virat overcome his dark past with manvi beside him...😳
good going dear:)👏

zahara... i can understand ur condition... because i have been in that phase too... so take ur time... dont need to rush dear:)...😊
if u really dont get any ideas to write...or feel low... got out with ur friends have pizza or whatever u like..😉. u feel better. just dont stress urself:)😳

even if u update small chapters... i would like to read it:):):)😊

thanks for double pm dear:):):)🤗

Thank you Shilpa! I live far far far away from my school and friends hence I can't go out unless I'm willing to travel long distances which I'm too lazy to 😆

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: keertu
wow zahara.after a long time with two updates.it was really fabulous.jeevika has to enter the wrong time.😆.pls in the next part pls give us full virman honeymoon.pls continue soon.don't make it late.pls pls pls pls😭

The bold part...I'll just say one thing, sometimes things happen unexpected. One thing leads to another. Hence, you may have to wait a bit. Something BIG is going to happen that brings them together, someone going away? I can't hint it enough. 😆

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: RICOPUNK101
Omg Zahara!!! I was so behind. caught up up on around 5 chapters. Every single one was a pleasure to read- and Serendipity, Hayee what a beautiful titleee.

Now to Virat- Manvi. Turning to friends (who actually are in love with each other) into lovers- the flow with which you are writing this story is just perr-fect. And Viran-Jeevika + Shiv are such darlings. They are not just random characters. They actually have solid roles and that's one of the main reasons I love your story (ies) :)

Sorry for not commenting- Oh and have I congratulated you for your second thread. CONGRATULATIONSSS!!!!!

Disha

P.S Have I said I loveee your dp- totally off-topic but you know.. :)

Hahahaha awww! I loved reading your comment! It's okay, I don't mind when you read. 😳 Serendipity. It was actually meant to be another name but I forgot what that one was. 😆

Yes! You got it! VirMan went from haters to acquaintances, to friends to really good friends and now lovers. Well...you'll see. I'm not sure whether I should write this or not but Shiv actually has a main role near the ending. Yes, you all will be shock but then you need to back and read the introduction of this story. Things happen when we least expect them to but they make sense.

😆

Thank you dude!!!

P.S I love it too! 😉😆

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: nisha33
zaharaaa

this was amazing!!!! i love love love simply love your FF.. the pace of your FF is just perfect!!! man you are one hell of a writer!
i could read your updates hundreds of times and still not be bored.. did i tell you that i love virat in your FF... he is confident, stands up for what he believes in and finally he is willing to let manvi be a part of his life...
viren and jeevika are playing cupids here.. love the concept... hopefully virat will realize his love for manvi soon... i can't wait for the next update... please please update sooonnn..
nisha

I've always thought of him as a rebel but one who rebels because things that happen are wrong for him. He doesn't like royalty becuase he doesn't see the point in others treating him like a celebrity. I'm glad you like this Virat. 😳

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: aysha1989
I'm so so so happy to see your updates... That too double updates... I'm going to get crazy... Thank you so much for the wonderful updates... Loved everything about it be it Virat standing up for Manvi, be it him realizing the difference after their marriage or be it Manvi's support and understanding nature... I loved it all...

And about the note... as you said I don't really think that the chapters were not up to the mark... for me, it was wonderful as always... But I'm perfectly fine if you're going to give short updates...

Hope you're coping up well with the exams... Wish you all the best for the upcoming ones..
Take care 😊

Thank you Aysha! Eh, I still don't think it's good enough but that's just me, I suppose. 😆

Thank you! I think I'll die from this two next exams 😭