Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: boreddamsel

Did I mention, when I was searching google for Viraf's pics, the swarthi pic of Viraf was also one of the results.

Even google knows about your epic love story. 😆

Hmm... candy would work..
But for Swathi's cuddles, I would take more flu shots! 😳

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shivanisaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey great chapter 10!!
I love akash's character! He is definitely a great friend!! I liked that he comforted khushi and then tried to cheer her up! And he succeeded!
And khushi's feelings- NKay being the guy she always imagined being with yet she has feelings for Arnav.. Hmm..
Payal is also a great friend and she understands khushi!
Arnav and anjali's conversation at the end was great! And anjali's horror when he says he doesn't want children because her children and akash's are like his children!

All in all it was a great update!
I absolutely loved it!

Thanks!

Shivanisaur xxx

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NISHI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#973

Awesum updte..sorry i could'nt comment on previous chap..read all chap today..hope u undrstnd..waiting for next..thanx for pm

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McNinja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#974

NB just got done reading chapter 9 and I don't know what you're unhappy with but I enjoyed it 😛

So Arnav has finally realized that there is more to khushi than he thought...I loved him being knocked off his feet by her. It's going to be interesting seeing him try and avoid her or come to terms with his attraction towards her. Waiting for when he finally does something. But then again, I think about the preview you gave of the story and again confused if I want to see what this Arnav does.

I'm going to read chapter 10 a little later but I'm looking forward to how khushi deals with NK and the outburst she had. I think she's doing pretty well for someone who hasn't ever been on a date, and on top of that is sort of crushing on a guy like Arnav. I'm def liking this khushi. Arnav I am still unsure about but I'm liking his appreciation of khushi.

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citi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Khushi's confusion and the exhaustion due to the emotional roller coaster have been brought out so well. She is gaining confidence as seen in her taking the initiative to put her equation with NK as she wants it to be. Akash and Payal are truly nice and warm people...the right kind to friends to have.

Ah! Arnav...what does one say. I like the clarity the man has and his views are very valid. Not everyone needs to follow the expected social institutions and norms...he is happy being himself and does not want kids...well it is his choice to make. But then in the best Indian tradition I don't think Nani and Anjali are going to let him be. 😃

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shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#976

Hey NB , Chap 11 calls for a new thread.. So when do we get it?

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

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THREAD 2

(Chapter 11 coming soon)

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 11, Updated in Thread 2.

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McNinja

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Just got done reading chapter 10. Anjali is the typical, meddling older sister. But she's bearable because maybe I can relate to this Anjali as that's how i am with my two younger brothers. I'm sure they don't enjoy my random games of 20 questions and free advice 😆

Loved the update, liking how the story is slowly unfolding. Off to read chapter 11. See you in the next thread...congratsss 🤗