Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

NB - good to see this post. Take your time writing, I'm sure everyone understands that emotional trauma in the family is draining...I hope your family gets through this trying time!

About the chapter: so Khushi wants to spread her wings and as the baby of the family this can be tough. And we have an insight into more of Arnav's personality. It's clear from his views on rape he has respect for women and I don't think that in any way contradicts any information you've given us about him: he's not into girlfriends, but is loyal and respected Lavanya.

The 1st chapter is always fresh in my mind when it comes to this story; we know where Khushi ends up and I can begin to see how, but I am keen to see if she writes Arnav off once she finds out she's pregnant because he'll never marry her...or is Arnav adamant that he's not interested.

Look forward to reading the rest as you find inspiration to write.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

Kripa I am going to read all chapter in one go...I liked the beginning...😊

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javeria tahir

@Arhi_jia_Monaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Amazing update Wowww romanticcc treaat

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star303

@star303

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

Khushi has a crush on arnav and was disappointed about his views regarding love and marriage hmmm.
NK seems to be a nice guy. Loved the conversion between arnav and khushi. It certainly showed that arnav was not comfortable with khushi going home alone at night. Good update and thanks for the pm.

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DISHA

@shinaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Oh my my arnie is soo helpfull.and khushi already had a crush on him and it looks like arnie too like her.so lets see what u have in ur mind in future about dis story.and one thing isnt the spelling is khushi instead of kushi or is it only a typo.

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

the recent events of Delhi were nicely blended into the chapter... and indeed I agree with Arnav that
"I'd like to believe that I'm a non-violent kind of a person, but even I wish they would face a slow and painful death."

loved the update...😊

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anushja

@anushja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

finally u r back basanti, been waiting for a long time now...

it was a very powerful come back update

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

Bhelcomes back.

First of all, Just dont give a f**k about these insensitive jerks who mocked your cousin's death, Frankly In Phangirls style, they are jealous of you (like we are jealous of BS...LOL, The most ridiculous thing I have ever heard) because they cant write this beautifully and even if they do it lacks class and appropriate English.

Now coming to the update, I loved it how you kept it real with the mention of that incident , KKG is discovering the big bag world , Arnav is there to help her all the way and I am liking this Arnav.

Keep up the good work K.

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#689

Welcome back, K!

Unfortunately more than one thing troubles me about this update for me to comment on the chapter more than to say, it's coming along very nicely.

Your note for one. I can't believe it could get to a level where some insensitive people resort to making fun of someone's, anyone's death. How could there be any justification for such ungraciousness? Who are these people?

The second being the horror that that brave, brave young girl had to go through in Delhi, the horror that her family has to live with now.

I don't even know what to say anymore without demeaning either!

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#690

Thank you for updating :)Good to see you back :) Animals are better than human these days...ignore those insensitive people. They just do not have any work...empty mind is devil's workshop

Your story is flowing in a beautiful way...loved it :)

thanks for the pm :)