Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144 - Page 15

nice part, waiting for arshi meeting

The two chapters give us a glimpse in their lives. Khushi is a traditional girl and is educated & testing out her new freedom. Arnav on the other hand is a loner. He seems like a practical guy with no time to waste on emotional issues. I hope you do explain why there is no love or marriagi in cards for him? He is 34 (much older than what I would have expected).

The way you divided the part were really good...the first part a glimpse of khushi's life and second part a glimpse of arnav's life...both are different ...completely opposite...I really loved both the parts...Fantastically written :)...Thank you for the pm

Hey NB,thank u for the pm...
we get the charecter sketches of both arnav n khushi in these parts...
Waitng for the story to proceed...

Originally posted by: boyznaka

Wow!

First thing I noticed--

Khushi's address in the excerpt-Aurangzeb Road

Arnav's address in this chapter-Aurangzeb Road

Itz have hidden meaninz na?😉

Anywho

Firstly, loved how accepting Khushi was of Payal's relationship with Akash. I for one am all for live-ins, but the way Khushi didn't agree or disagree to it shows a very understanding nature(Now that sounds similar.. Hmm.. Who do I know with such a sensible nature..😉)

And the make-out scene was pretty good. Neat, smooth and not gory at all! And I loved how you displayed Lavanya's emotions. She's clearly leaving very soon(I am just predicting here hope you don't mind heehee)

And Arnav and Khushi are so utterly believable characters. I realy do love how you've made them appear belieavable and not stuck to cliches.

And here's a customary upd8 soon frnx😳

wow me too. I read excerpt earlier and caught up chap 1 and 2 just now. I also thought of the same thing! Aurangzeb Road! Arnav's apartment address and clinic located on same road.
But never realized that it has hidden meaningz.. 😉
Am not very good at passing expert comments like so many ppl here. I would say I liked the story and am already hooked. Now waiting for next update already. yes I am greedy.. 😛

Chapter 1 was all about Khushi, and now I have a good idea of who she is and where she comes from..

I m enjoying reading this entire chapter well written, Plz update the next chapter soon. Thanks.

Originally posted by: shree10

wow me too. I read excerpt earlier and caught up chap 1 and 2 just now. I also thought of the same thing! Aurangzeb Road! Arnav's apartment address and clinic located on same road.
But never realized that it has hidden meaningz.. 😉
Am not very good at passing expert comments like so many ppl here. I would say I liked the story and am already hooked. Now waiting for next update already. yes I am greedy.. 😛

Shree Kushi gave her home address as Aurangazeb's rd at the hospital. Sorry if it wasn't clear.

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Me and popular? 😆 Who would want to know me?? 😲 Apart from my readers not many on the main forum know me. I have barely interacted with people there (My number of posts are thanks to my CC 😛)

But it is actually good you know. Coz of Choti people extend the same courtesy and friendliness to me that they do to her. And I do what in my subject is called B.I.R.G (Basking In Reflected Glory 😉)

What else are sisters for? You are of course popular. I have never read your FFs before, but I still know you nah? Last update left of FS.

This is FF is awesome . Stalking the the Fanfiction Forum does help you know :) You chance upon such wonderful stories once in a while . First the excerpt got me intrigued and now the two chapters have done their job to hook me . The characters are so wonderfully etched . Looks like you are a pro and writing like one too . Looking forward for interesting and wonderful chapters .