Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
The suspense is definately building up ... I cannot wait to see what happens when both Arnav and Khushi meet ... under what circumstances ... is he even the father ... so many questions ... only time will tell 😊
I am glad that Arnav was honest with Lavanya right from the start. I mean he didn't lie to her in order to have sex with her. He told her his views on love and marriage straight.
I also admire Payal's honesty in regards with telling Khushi about Aakash. Upfront.
Khushi's concerned for her friend, but she doesn't impose her views of pre-marital sex on her which not many can do. Khushi is one of a kind 😊
Thanks for the PM.
Already waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm 5 pages late and it's seriously not cool. Damn the job! Coming to the updates :
Chapter 1 :
What stark differences between Khushi and Payal's upbringing. The moral compass is north while Payal's.. got distracted somewhere. Khushi, a woman who respects values and traditions but still mature while Payal, opposite to that but she's honest and frank.
Chapter 2 :
Aha, the bad boy Arnav. A loner but a thoughtful one. Has boundaries and walls and a Lavanya. Poor her, wanting something that is out of the world for him. Really curious about his past now.
Fate has other plans. You have me there, woman. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
They will meet soon

Ok a song comes up here -

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=zPmLQ2KdJJQ#t=5s[/YOUTUBE]

Basantiji i love where you're taking this and I like the personal touch you've added 😳

I am so glad I have something this loving to read. I like to read about perceptions, people, principles,adaptations, changes and how love develops amongst all this.

Let's get on this beautiful journey...

Love you humesha!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello. So I like the way the story is gathering up the suspense with the two parallel tracks going on simultaneously. I love that approach of yours because it highlights the wide chasm which exists between Khushi and Arnav. Diametrical opposites, to borrow a famous term.😉

It's interesting that you've made Khushi seem like this girl who has been protected all her life and now wants to break free. I like that, and it should ideally work wonderfully for her because she seems open-minded yet so grounded in traditional values, but cannot help but feel that somewhere this desire to leave behind her cocoon is likely to make her vulnerable to rash impulsiveness as well. Oh well I'm getting a little carried away here because I've seen it happen in asli waali duniya.

I already like Arnav. Definitely not the nice boy-next-door mothers would set their daughters after, but seems to have his own rigid moral code in place. & a loner. & Anjali is in the US? Thank you.😆

'Fate had other plans' is good. I'm guessing office encounter's coming up next? *fingers crossed*


Edited by merit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg such different ppul! yet khushi will get pregnant! great parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm. So read the first two chapters khushi's thoughts on pre marital sex and arnav doing the same with lavanya, shows the difference in their thinking right from the start. Now it makes me think that the baby is in fact arnav's cos Destiny played its part. Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: merit

Hello. So I like the way the story is gathering up the suspense with the two parallel tracks going on simultaneously. I love that approach of yours because it highlights the wide chasm which exists between Khushi and Arnav. Diametrical opposites, to borrow a famous term.😉

It's interesting that you've made Khushi seem like this girl who has been protected all her life and now wants to break free. I like that, and it should ideally work wonderfully for her because she seems open-minded yet so grounded in traditional values, but cannot help but feel that somewhere this desire to leave behind her cocoon is likely to make her vulnerable to rash impulsiveness as well. Oh well I'm getting a little carried away here because I've seen it happen in asli waali duniya.

I already like Arnav. Definitely not the nice boy-next-door mothers would set their daughters after, but seems to have his own rigid moral code in place. & a loner. & Anjali is in the US? Thank you.😆

'Fate had other plans' is good. I'm guessing office encounter's coming up next? *fingers crossed*




Sorry I should probably made it clearer, Anjali lives in india. He was referring to his friends from the US the ones he studied with at Harvard.

The bolded bit is so very true.

Thanks for your comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MentalExotica

They will meet soon


Ok a song comes up here -

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=zPmLQ2KdJJQ#t=5s[/YOUTUBE]

Basantiji i love where you're taking this and I like the personal touch you've added 😳

I am so glad I have something this loving to read. I like to read about perceptions, people, principles,adaptations, changes and how love develops amongst all this.

Let's get on this beautiful journey...

Love you humesha!!



Gitu, I love this song. Love you too hunny bunny.
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Posted: 12 years ago
A good start...boththe chapters gave a new insight about the characters...Please PM when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update. The conversation between Khushi and Payal was very relatable and realistic. And its a refreshing break to not see Payal and Aakash as the eternally virginal couple. Arnav, is well, all ASR right now. But I feel for Lavanya - poor thing, she is always the one left in the middle of nowhere. Its a great start, I really want to read more :)

Thanks for the PM .

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