D3 ff: SWEET SECRETS-COULD DEY LEAD TO HAPPY END?

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deepshakriya

@deepshakriya

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Awesome update
Part 14 was superb..
All d chits r nice...
Thnx fr pm

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Just read all d parts..
Itz really awesome..
Continue soon..n pls pm me nxt tym

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

superb update

i want to know about kria's chit

thanks for pm

update soon

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

both parts 14 n 15 were superb...

rey getting jealous of karan...

then tht chit part was superb..

whole gang on trip...

loved it...

thnx for pm n sorry for late comment...

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

awesome update...
loved it..
loved kria-viha part...
n her announcement abt marriage as only datin s not allowed for weaklin n dazzlin but not marriage i loved that...
loved how kria threw away vicky's mob since he didnt shut the song was super cool...
loved d entire part...
pm me d next part soon waitin for it...

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

HERE IS CHAPTER 6!!!!

CHAPTER 16

AT AROUND 9:30 , THEY STOP AT A DHABA FOR DINNER. EVERY1 GETS DOWN. KARAN GOES OVER TO THE OWNER & TELLS HIM TO MAKE FOOD FOR ABOUT 50-60 PEOPLE.

SHARON, SIMMI & RINNI: OMG!!

SHARON; MAIN HAR GIZ YAHA KHANA NAHI KHA RAHI.

SIMMMI: SERIOUSLY KIS GANDHE HAATON SE BANAYA HOGA YUCK!

RINNI; PAR KHANA TOH VEGETABLES SE BANTA HAI.

SIMMI; SHUT UP RINNI

KRIA HEARS THIS AND CALLS SHARON IN THE BUS .

KRIA; SHERRY I KNOW KI TUMHE YE KHANA PASAND NAHI , SO TAKE THIS. MUMMA NE YE SANDWICHES TUMHARE LIYE BHEJA HAI.

SHARON; I LUV U SHONA & MOM 2.. THANK YOU..

KRIA: NOW GO BEFORE SUMBODY COMES.

SHARON LEAVES THE BUS WITH THE SANDWICHES & KRIA FOLLOWS.

ALL ARE SITTING ON THE KHATYA. THEIR FOOD IS DAL MAKHANI, PANEER & CHICKEN MASALA.

SHARON, SIMMI & RINNI EAT THE SANDWICHES WHEREAS ALL THE OTHERS ARE ENJOYING THE FOOD.

REY; DUDE THIS FOOD IS BETTER THAN ANY OTHER 5-STAR HOTEL FOOD.

VICKY; THIS IS THE BEST FOOD AMONGST ALL THE DHABAS I HAVE EVER HAD FOOD IN.

NIL; TUNE DHAABE KAB KHAYA?

VICKY; VOH , MERI EK CRAZY FRIEND HAI USE DHAABE PE KHANA PASAND HAI ISSLIYE MUJHE KHICH KE LE KE JAATE HAI.

SVAYUM; THNK U KARAN SIR, YAHA ROKHNE KE LIYE.

KARAN; NO BIGGY GUYS FOOD KHATAM HO GAYA HO TOH CHALE.

HE PAYS THE OWNER & TELLS EVERY1 TO GET IN THE BUS.

AS SOON AS THE BUS STARTS MOVING RINNI & SIMMI FALL ASLEEP WITH THEIR HEADS ON THEIR PARTNERS SHOULDER...

VISHAKA TO FALLS ASLEEP BUT NOT ON BHARAT'S SHOULDER.SLOWLY NEHA ALSO FALLS ASLEEP ON VICKY'S SHOULDER. VICKY SMILES & TUCKS HER HAIR BEHIND HER EAR & GOES OFF TO SLEEP WITH HIS HEAD ON HER HEAD.

SHARON PULLS HER FEET UP & KEEPS HER HEAD ON THEM & GOES OFF TO SLEEP. SVAYUM SEES HER UNCOMFORTABLE POSITION AND QUICKLY PULLS HER TOWARDS HIM & KEEPS HER HEAD ON HIS SHOULDER AND HIS HEAD ON THE WINDOW LEDGE WITHAN ARM AROUND HER WAIST SLEEPS OFF.

KRIA FALLS ASLEEP FIAGONALLY WITH HER FEET ON THE SEAT ON HER RIGHT. REY BRINGS HIS FEET UP AND PUTS HIS BACK TO THE WINDOW. KRIA FALLS ASLEEP WITH HER HEAD ON HIS CHEST. HE WRAPS HIS ARMS AROUND HER TORSO & FALLS ASLEEP WITH HIS FACE IN HER HAIR.

KARAN SEES EVERY1'S SLEEPING POSITION &CLICKS THEIR PHOTOS AND GOES BACK TO HIS SEAT AND DOZES OFF.

NEXT MORNING AT AROUND 5:45 , KARAN WAKES SWARON AND TELLS THEM TO WAKE EVERY1 IN THEIR GROUP AND GOES TO WAKE THE OTHER STUDENTS.

SWARON TURN TO WAKE KRIYAANSH FIRST AND SEE THEIR CUTE POSITION. SHARON PRETENDS TO BE ANGRY AND YELLS AT REY TO WAKE UP.

HE WAKES UP TO SEE KRIA IN HIS ARMS. HE SMILES AT HER AND WAKES HER UP. SHE SEES THE POSITIN IN WHICH SHE WAS & BLUSHES. SHE GETS UP AND WAKES VIHA. BY 6;00 EVERY1 WAS UP...

KARAN; GUYS GET DOWN WE HAVE REACHED.

AND SO HAS THE CHAPTER END... SO COMMENT