FF :Out Of Control-Fate ( Part-8 pg-57) 01/01/2013 - Page 33

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nice update loved it.
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Originally posted by: Suchi.R

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Read all parts together.. awesome FF.. liked it.. only one complaint, your updates are too short..😉



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Well i'm hearing this frm everyone thats my updates are short...So, from next time i will try to make it longer 😃 😳
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Originally posted by: laksh65

nice update loved it.

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Thank you Everyone for your Lovely comments and likes 😳 ❤️
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Originally posted by: hatelove_1

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PART-8



After listen to Doctor, Arnav felt guilty all over again because of him only Khushi is in this state.

Garima - Thankyou Arnav, If you have not brought Khushi home, God knows what have happened.

Payal - Yes Mr Raizada, we are grateful to you. Thanks for bring khushi home.

Arnav felt more Guilty after listening to what Garima and Payal said.

They are Thanking him But they Don't Know that All that have Happened is only because of him

Again no word came out of his mouth.

After sometime,

Arnav - I think i should leave now...

He Left from there...

On the way to home he couldn't concentrate on driving, Khushi's face keep coming in his mind,her tear,her helpless state,everything.

Arnav suddenly stops his car and bangs his hand on steering Wheel.

Arnav - Dammit ! I will not able to concentrate on anything till i sorry to her. Tomorrow first thing i will do is to say sorry to Khushi.

With that thought he make his way to home.

In Raizada Mansion.

Arnav enters and see Akash sitting on sofa. Them avoids him and directly goes inside his room.

Akash gets a little worried as he sense that his Brothers is in bad mood

So he decides to talk and knocks on door.

Arnav opens the door.

Arnav - What happen Akash? Do you need something?

Akash - Nothing Happened to me Bhai and you seems a little Upset over something.

Arnav - No, me upset not at all...he fakes a smile

Akash - Oh! Please Bhai i know you, whenever you are upset you avoid talking to anyone. So now stop faking and tell me what happened?

Arnav - Don't you get at once Akash that I'm not upset and perfectly alright. So Please leave me alone and go from here...said Arnav raising his voice

Akash - I'm not going anywhere till you tell me what happened and you know that. We share everything since our childhood. So please fussing Bhai and please tell me what happened?Please Bhai...

Arnav - You Never gonna change Are you? Okay Fine, i'll tell you...and Arnav told Akash about Khushi and Everything that happened today in Party.

Akash - Bhai, what you have done very wrong with that girl. But you are not like this, how could you do this?

Arnav - I know Akash that i was wrong, trust me I'm regretting so much. But don't know what happenes I can't control my anger when Khushi is in front of me.

Akash - I understand . I know my Bhai will make everything alright. You did a Mistake but it's good that you are regretting it. And Please say Sorry to Khushi. I know ASR don't say sorry to anyone but u have to this time...Said akash with a slight Smile

Arnav - I know Akash. I will say sorry to khushi. Yes i will

Akash - Ok Bhai. Now chill and don't worry. And Good night.

Arnav - Good night to you too

And Akash left from there and after few seconds he came back.

Akash - Bhai i was wondering...Do you need practice Lessons?

Arnav - What the...Practice lessons for what ?

Akash - On 'How to say Sorry' ...said akash with a Mischievous smile

Arnav - Shut Up Akash And Go form here...said a irritated Arnav.

Here in Gupta Apartment...

Khushi is sleeping peacefully when suddenly she starts saying 'Leave me , Help , please help' in her sleep and wake up with a jerk shouting "HELP''

Garima and Payal listens Khushi's voice and runs toward her room.

Payal - Khushi, What happend ? why are you shouting for help? Is everything alright?

Garima - Calm down Payal. Khushi have just gain conscious. At Least give her time? ...Khushi beta ..Are you fine now?...said Garima caressing khushi's face.

Khushi looks at garima and recall all that happened today at party.

Khushi - Mom, Jiji...Who took me here ?

Garima - Your Boss, Arnav. Why? What happened Khushi? Are you hidding something from us ?

Khushi slowly whispers 'ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA' with so much anger

then she take garima hand and says

Khushi - No mom, can i hid anything from you. Nothing to worry about, I'm perfectly fine, it was just i nightmare and i fainted because i forgot to take lunch. Ok so worry...said lied.

Garima - Oh Khushi you are so careless, i have told u thousand time to take proper meal at proper time. But u silly girl never listen to me.

Khushi - Oh please Mom don't start again. I'm really tired and sleepy , Please let me sleep.

Garima - Ok Sleep. Good night beta

Khushi - Good night mom.

Payal was standing there and was looking at khushi. She knows that khushi is surely hidding something.

Payal - Khushi, I'm seriously asking you, have something have happened ?

Khushi - Arree Jiji i told you na , nothing happened, i just fainted.

Payal - Oh really, So why were you shouting for help in your sleep?

Khushi - It was just a nightmare, please jiji I'm really very sleepy. Can you Please for God's sake let me sleep.

Payal - Ok Khushi, Sleep, but you know I'm still not satisfied from your answers. Good Night.

Khushi - Good Night Jiji.

With that Payal and Khushi lays down on Bed.

Khushi turns opposite side from payal and wishpers " I'm really sorry jiji but I can't tell you what happened today with me. I can't , I'm sorry...and a tear escapes from her eyes.

In Early Morning ( Around 5)


Arnav rubs his eyes and looks at Clock. It still 5 am. He hardly slept last night. Khushi's face keep flashing in his mind. He got up from bed and walks towards Pool Side.

He remembers yesterday's incident and looks up in sky and close his eyes and slowly wishper 'i really sorry Khushi'

Here On Other Side...


Khushi didn't slept for a single second last night...She was still terrified from last night incident. She was silently crying whole night. She looks at clock, it's Still 5am and got up from bed and walks towards her room's Window.

She looks up in sky And says ...." Papa, I wish were here. If you were here with me then nothing wrong have happened. I Miss you so much Papa, why you left me alone,why? "...with that she closes her eyes and tears came out.

After some time...She again looks up in sky and says ..."I know you are watching from there, I promise you I will be strong and will fight against wrong. From now i will not lose hope and I will be strong. Because I'm your daughter. I'm a fighter "



To Be conti...



I know there was no Arhi in this Part but Next one will be full of Arhi 😳

Don't you think Arnav and Akash part was really cute 😃

And I guess this time it's not short but a Long Update 😎

Do Comment and tell me how you find it 😊



Edited by Sonakshi_Barun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think me first!
Year brothers bonding was v cute n akash's help for sorry session was :D!
Hope to get update soon!
Happy new year!!

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