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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Thank u so much to all taareyians...for liking our work...
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So our gang phirse aa gayi hai...lekar is ss ka agla part...hope u all enjoy...

(by me)
They are not properly cleaned...but as swayam is screaming they goes to open the door...

Taani open the door and see swayam fuming with anger...

Sw:kya kar rahe the tum dono???itni der kyu laga di??aur dono ke face and hands pe aata kyu hai???

Taani:bhai pehle aap log andar to aaie...swaron comes in...

Sw:ha ab bolo

Taani:bhai ye rey hai na..unho ne mujh par aata lagaya...

Rey:kya taani mene...

Taani:ha aap ne...

Rey:to tum mujhpe has jo rahi thi...

Taani:ha to hasna koi crime hai kya..waise bhi galti aap ki bhi thi...

Rey:meri.. ...???

Taani:ha...agar aap sabji lana bhule nahi hote to me naraz na hoti aur aapko khana nahi banana padta...

Sw:what??rey tum khana bana rahe ho???

Before rey said something taani saw the necklace in sharon's neck...

Taani:wow bhabhi...beautiful. ...kab liya ye necklace???

Sh:wo swayam ne gift kiya...then she look at swayam and eyelock between them...

Taani whisper to rey...dekha kuch sikho bhai se...

Rey:kya????

Taani:kuch nahi...

Mean while swaron comes to their sense and...

Sw:ha to rey tum khana bana rahe the???

(by annie)

rey : ha swayam teri behen bohot kaam deti mujhe sunday pe bhi nahi chodti

swayam : taani jane do na bechare ko kyu satati ho

sharon : guys hamesha jaruri nahi ki taani hi khana banaye ,,,,,,rey ko bhi kabhi kabhi cook karna chahiye taani ke liye

taani : ow bhabhi...aap hi samjaye inko...

(by christy)

sharon : uff..,.,swayum inki fight ko hum inke uper chod dete hai...hum upar chalte hai chalo...

swayum:k tumne kah diya to..

SwaRon goes to room..

here TR alone..

both sharing looks..

taani turns to go..rey catches her hand..

rey:angry on me???*puppy face* taani: *serious* haa

she takes her hand from rey forcely and gives an angry look and goes..

rey thinking how to manaofy taani...

(by me)

Here taani goes into kitchen to drink water... Rey goes behind her... And as in the epi he stares at her...water is dropping on taani's neck...rey come near her...

taani:rey...dekhiye me aap se bahot gussa hu... She try to leave...but rey hold her waist...

Taani:dekhiye rey aap ki koi bhi treak nahi chalne wali...me bahot naraz hu...

Rey put his finger on her lips...taarey bg tune...

Rey:taani tum kitna bolti ho... Water is still on her neck...rey bend down and started to kiss her neck... Taani closes her eyes... Rey suck the water which was on her neck... Again started to kiss her neck...taani is melting...rey cup her face and kiss her forehead and cheek...

Meanwhile swaron in the room:

Sw:sharon mene tumhe gift diya to mujhe bhi to return gift milna chahiye na...

Sh:ha swayam bolo tumhe kya chahiye???

Sw:sach me ...me jo kahunga wo dogi???

Sh:ha swayam tum bolo to sahi...

Sw:achha to phir thik hai...and first he put her hairs behind her ears...sharon understood what he want...

Sh:swayam this is not our house...

Sw:shhh... I know but abhi to hum akele hai na...and he cup her face...and goes closer and closer...

Sharon close her eyes and in no time swayam kiss sharon...both are lost in the kiss...they broke the kiss when they feel short of breath...

Then sharon hugs swayam abd swayam hugs her back...

After some time they broke hug...

(by rhea)

sharon-swayam kitna ajeeb hai na hum dono yaha aise and waha rey and taani fighting uff saari galti rey ki hai pehele toh woh veggies lana bhool gaya and ab taani se hi fight kar raha hai

swayam-par sharon choti si hi toh galti hai na bechare rey ko kyo bol rahi ho

sharon-bechara rey correction Mr. Swayam Shekhawat bechari taani jo use rey ke haath ka bana khana khana padega galti tum ladke karo aur bhugatna hum ladkiyo ko pade

swayam-uffo sharon ab yeh girls VS boys kaha se aa gaya beech mein

sharon-toh aur nahi toh kya tum ladke pehele galti karte ho phir wives ko manane ke liye proudly khana banane chale jate ho...khana banana toh aata nahi tum logo ko aur tum logo ke haath ka torture hume jhelna padta hai

swayam-what ...u mean to say ki hum boys khana nahi bana sakte hai hamare haath ka khana tum logo ko torture lagta hai

sharon-YES

swayam-taani yaha aao

sharon-taani ko kyo beech mein la rahe ho...

Precap:rey asking forgivness to taani abd fight between reyam and shani...pillow fight between four...


So guys how is it????i hope sabko pasand aaya ho...so ab hamara kam khatam and aap ka kam shuru...so chaliye ab do likes and write comments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow !!! Taarey kitchen scene and swaron scene loved it ! Great gng guys :) keep it up
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW!! Guys mein haar subha ko tum logo ka update read karti hoon and it is SOOO sooo beautiful n awesome that it just makes my morning great !! TAAREY nok jhok with romance n swaron nok jhok with romance !! Aww it was perfect ! CVs bhi Itna balance nahi raak pate jitna tum logo ne kiya hai!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Yeppi awesome part love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
wow man it was romantic
but u did not show taarey kiss
it kkk plzzz put nxt prt soon n show taarey romance
n thanks for PM do same as u put nxt prt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sara_Taarey22

WOW!! Guys mein haar subha ko tum logo ka update read karti hoon and it is SOOO sooo beautiful n awesome that it just makes my morning great !! TAAREY nok jhok with romance n swaron nok jhok with romance !! Aww it was perfect ! CVs bhi Itna balance nahi raak pate jitna tum logo ne kiya hai!!



oh...thank u sara...hope cvs hum se kuch idea le... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SacredLove

Yeppi awesome part love it



aww...thank you...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Actually I read this update even before the pm... 😊
It's really nice...I like how they all r together...swayam supporting Rey,Sharon supporting taani...and then the romance between both the couple...it's a treat to read... 😊

Grand update guys...and thanks for the pm dipu... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great work guys 😃!

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