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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: nature2
nyc update

but simple karo yaar samjh hi nhi aahrahi ki kon kon kya bol rha hai 😕

well, i can try.. thanks!

Originally posted by: esha_arsha
loved the updte..!!...
awesome..!!...
waiting for the nxt prt..!!..😊

Thanks esha..!

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
awesome part

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
nice 1

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Originally posted by: -Ocean.eyes-
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Lovd it rashi
awesome part

Thats it? Tabyat thik ha kinjal di?

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh
the crush thing was so freakin hilarious...

😆 😆 😆 😆

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@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: TBPfanforever
Rashi!! 😃 how are you?? mast n u? I finally am commenting!! Previous update par nahi kar paayi so sorry (maarna mat fir sorry bolne ke liye) kya karun tera me?
now i will go to the update!! finally i thought dis will nevr come! 😆
Awesome update rashi!!! Loved absolutely every part of
It!! 😊 *sigh* Mehnat Safal..!!!
Loved the way Kriya handled poor Sam.. kya kare bechari..
The fight between kriyaansh was amazing just like how it used to happen in the serial!😆 Aww... how shweet!
heehee Kriya taken to be reys wife and she agreeing to it 😆 Was awesome !!! Ooh waiting eagerly for next update also!! :) karo akro wait karo..!!
Mujhe yeh bhi pata karna hai ki kyun sam apne dad se itni rude hai!! usme b ek raaz hai, wich i wont reveal soon..!
With all that said take care!! Update soon!! And best of luck for your upcoming exams!! :) Thankyou and same to you..!!
Hope you pass with udte rang!! (flying colours :P) i do wat is udte rang..!
Love ya!! :) 😊 Love you too.. ❤️

Thankyou..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: cutekriya
lovely update
kriyaansh moments r sweet ...😳
loved it.

Thankyou so much..!!

Originally posted by: aishu3003
awesomeee update👏

Thanks!

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
Superb update :-)

Nikki <3

Thanks!

Originally posted by: enrique305
amazing update 😃

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Originally posted by: sweety-reylover
awsome!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: _sweetannu_
sweet n cute update... I loved it 🤗 eep!! Reallyyy????

rey kriya ko apne saath boston le gaya ...😛'kya favour maga...maine to socha kahin propose to nahi kerga... 😆 😆 LOLZZ i dnt think itni jaldi karega...

kriya bore hoying to rey ko date pe le jana tha... 🥺 stupid ne romance ka chance bhi kho diya... 😆 haha... kash aap hote usse batane ko ye..!!!!

sam ne apne crush robert ko hit kiya... .🤣🤣''kriya bhi ye try ker chuki hai... 🤣''kya jodi hai.😆 LOLZZZ yesss..!!!! u now preteen crushes..!

kriya is sweetheart she supported sam..😳''but rey is too rude... 😡 rey is emotionless acordng to kriya and hitler acrding to sam..
rey n kriya ek bad share karege..[:^)]... dekhte jao..

best of luck fr ur exms.. 👍🏼 Thankyou...!
love u sweety ❤️ Love ya too...!!

Firstly a li'l sad ki itne dino se bat nhi hui..

Secondly Thankss!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: zona_malik
Amazing.. it was??

dat was fun.. Thanks!!

kria-sam convo... oh han... !!

den kriyaansh scene.. yupps!

update soon..👏 can try..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: kriyansh_Alisha
awesome... Thankss!!
kriyansh part was superb... aww.. reallly...??
sam is too cute.loved sam n kria's part... *sigh* Mehnat safal..!
thnx for pm... I wont reply this line, as i totally hate it..!!

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: ruchitasaphire
amazing

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Originally posted by: Toor
The kriyaansh part was amazing really... saccchiii??
sam... so cute ... awww... thankss!
update soon can try!
Kriya loves Snap... she was her pet u know..!!

Thankyou!!

Originally posted by: gunnu1
marvelous...great story!! really?? Thankyou!!
wud love to read further... Mehnat safal..!
pls cntinue soon...nd dnt frgt to pm me... will definetly pm you!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Chapter 6: I'm Sorry!

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This one's especially for my roop di, who complained so much 'bout me late updating yesterday... see finally here's d update! Love ya!! 🤗🤗

She woke up with a start as the door opened, a little creak came, Did she fell asleep while waiting for rey? and is it him or someone else? she switched on the light... but he didn't notice her, he just walked in.. she checked the time 12:54 voila! where was he? "Where were you?" she said getting up from her arm chair.. "Out!" he replied "Out where?" she asked, but he kept ignoring her and continued to walk in. "Dinner?" she asked "No thanks, i ate out" he replied after washing his face he went straight to his room kriya followed him "Rey. Where were you?" she repeated "Why?" he asked "I was worried.." she stated "Why?" he repeated "You could have faced a car accident as far as i know.." she said "Will you please mind your own buissnes? why do you want to know everything?" he yelled wiping his face with a towel, he looked at her, she looked disappointed "Fine!" she said and left the room "You wont sleep in here?" he asked "No, i dont want to be anymore trouble rey." she said and left rey didn't go after her. she was being enough lately, but some where inside he felt sorry for whatever he said to her... he saw her switching off d lights, he went out to apologise "Kriya.." he said but before he could continue "Good night rey" she said ...

She wanted to cry. she wanted to ooze out her sadness but some what she couldnot. what will crying fetch you kriya ghai? she thought.. she turned trying to sleep, she knew rey would never apologise, he must be sleeping happily on his cotton soft bed enjoying all his dreams. he didn't care about her, after all..! why will he apologise...??

Morning.. he woke up, last night was a lot of trouble. was she still angry? will she talk to her? will she even look at him? thoughts were spinning in his head like anything he walked out of his bed.. the place was empty silent and still. just like it used to be before sam and kriya arrived... he felt awkward. he brushed silently. there was no kriya who would joke or blabber during his brushing. no sam who would keep shouting at him.. but where was kriya? he wanted to meet her before he went office. where was she? he thought and suddenly realised he had brushed his teeth for too long and now his the paste was getting sour inside his mouth. heck! he did his things as usual first he dressed up and then ran towards the dining table missing kriya, who would have served him right now, a smile and food as well.. and he saw the note..

Good morning rey!

Hope you're up by 10, you've got a meeting to attend.. remember?

Anyways i've dropped Sam, and i'm out with my friends, don't call me please as i don't want to talk to you, Your breakfast is on the table...

Have a good Day!

After The Meeting-

Rey called her up 7 times, and every time she rejected the call... he tried again 8th time.. no answer he called from the nearest telephone booth. finally she didn't pick up. he messaged her "Lets meet at Barista after 15 minutes.. will you come? i've got important stuff to tell"..

She was shopping, ofcourse she had no friends in Boston. her cell phone suddenly beeped. a message? hmm? what kind of important stuff? is it sam? or is it Swayam? she really wanted to know.. and the suspense was growing.. what the heck!! she had to GO..!

15 minutes thats what his message said, she hurried through her shopping routine to meet him, and he was late! gosh! she hated waiting, and she was angry too.. where was he? where was he at this time? no more she thought, why was she even waiting for him, I HATE YOU REY! she thought but suddenly she found a hand on her waist.. and a chin resting on her Shoulder.. her eyes widened who was it? he was sure to get an earful from her right now! "I'm Sorry" she heard his voice she looked down, it was HIM! gosh! he hugged her! whats up with him today?? has he gone insane? "rey.. leave me" she managed to speak. "Shh.. Just let it be" he said and with his right hand he took out a hand-made card which touched her heart, is this the real rey? the rey sh'd known? REY? "y..you made thi..s?" she stammered "Sure did" she smiled, he left her she lifted her lashes up and looked at him he stood there smiling a big BIG grin.. and they ended up with a LLHH..!! "how is it?" he asked "It..Its Beautiful..." she said "amazing".. "Still Angry?" .. she shook her head she hugged him, a little hug.. he was amazing! great! he sure turns rude at times but he's cute and sweet as well..! and she LIKED him...!!

Precap- Reyaansh gets a shock!

("ROOP" tera Mastana... update kesa tha batana..) for my roopsi di..!! love you..! hope u liked it..

Well, i suck at romance! i know i do..!

hope this part wasn't so Filmy...

i replied every comment, please let me know if i didn't reply ur comment!

and the comments were amzing..

well, i hope it was okay..

Review time!

and and and Don't forget to hit the tab!

-Rashii😉

Now. time for...

RESERS

i) Angel_Luvkriya (Tammna)

ii) Moon_ArSha (Arpita)

and ofcourse...

iii) ..Roop.. (roop di)

Kab unres karoge besharmo?? 😆 😆 😆 😆

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

res...😃

unres...

awwwiiieee u dedicated this to me...😳

awww love u tooo...

okay now abt the update...

mene tuje jaldi update karne ko bola to inna chindi size update kar k bhag gyi...

chal koi nai teri studies vagerah ko dekhte hue maanf hai...

n i loved the update re...

kriya is concern for rey...

but rey to poora pagal hai faaltu me uss par chillaya...

but he realises his mistake...

n than that sory part...

it was schooo cute...

that hand made card n than hug...

it was lovely...

n precap me Rey ko kon sa shock lagane wala hai...

update soon...

n pleezzz stop saying k u suck at romance...🥱

P.S.-now u know wat i want...m waiting for that eagerly...😉😃

Edited by ..Roop.. - 12 years ago