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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_star14

awesome update..
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Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

upd8 soon...waiting for kriyansh meeting..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awww thnakkk gawddd finaallly kr milne waale hain..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu3003

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Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou Everyone for all d beautiful wishes, Cakes, Gifts.. nd all dat.. Aur un sabko jo mera birthday bhul gaye Sharm karo khud par aur kuen me kud jao sabke sab jaakar..!
Dont worry Abhi me kisi Ko bhi bore nahi karne vali.. And han im really bad at all this stuff .. toh dont worry kisi ko bhi Jhelna nhi padega.. 😆 😆
Comments seems like Everyone is really excited for d Update hena? Toh mene socha chalo Birthday ka return Gift...! 😉 😉 Here a update

Pehle toh SS ka nam Full on style me...
Weep No More-Short Story (SS)
Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Chapter 4:Surprise Surprise!!
(Return Gift!)
Banner Credit- Purple Valley Creations (Kinjal)
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As rey n swayam were about to enter his phone rang..

"I'm a Barbie Girl,
In d barbie Wold..
Life in Plastic, Its Fantastic!
I'm a Brabie girl!" (sorry aage yad nhi hai...!)

Oh shit! sam has messed up with his phone again! Swayam burst out laughing.. N wowie! its sams call d greatest devil alive! "Tu..Tu hans mat, Teri hi beti ki karmat ha ye sab.." rey said n took d call..
Sam: Liked your new ringtone rey?? 😛
Rey: SAM! i told you not to mess up with my phone!
Sam: well, i thought it wud suit you.. !
Rey: Shut up.. why'd u call me?
Sam: Yeah, where are you guys? im alone right here? n wen r u coming back??
Rey: ah.. ya ya,.. we'll be back.. you stay in d house watch TV if u wanna..
Sam: Really?? Thanks!
Sam was happy rey never allowed her watch TV very very often when he was in a good mood.. n dat was really rare.. so, she hoped to spend a few happy moments watching all her favourite shows..! cartoons ofcourse, n staying away from rey's scoldings too...

Rey on the other hand was quiet his best friend has been laughing since 15 minutes almost and he could NOT control him.. "Dude mujhe shak ha.. tu.. tu officer ha ya.. ya school girl??" swayam said trying to control his laughter..
"Chal ho gaya Syapa! Sam uth gayi akhir beti kiski ha tamasha toh karna hi hai usse, chal ghar chal.." Rey said
"Nahi tu dekh ye secret frnd kon ha, me.. me usse handle karlunga dont worry..!" swayam said
"Tu- janta ha na ki teri aur sam ki zyada.. " rey said
"Han yar, ill handle dont worry!" swayam said "Good Luck" N he left..
Swayam reached d house soon,
sam: dad! (hugs)
swayam: hey sweetheart
sam: sorry i was really rude last night
swayam: no i understand.. here wanna talk to mom?
sam: Sure! 😃


Reyaansh singhania set his foot to find out d secret personality.. he saw a feminine structure on d window.. but he thought he'd better ring d doorbell, he finally took a deep breath n rang it.. n d door was finally open..

Someone was watching her,
The little hairs prickled on d back of Kriya's neck and somehow she just knew. Lifting her head from her Cookie making, she narrowed her eyes against d brightness outside to see d powerful figure of a man standing at d far end of d garden, He was still as a statue. only his thick black fancily trimmed hair n his head moved a little. her heart gave a funny little kick as he began walking towards d house n finally she heard d doorbell going "Ting tong"...

Reys amused glance took in d floor covered hands of hers. And suddenly his senses were alerted by more than her soft beauty. The rare smell of home-baking in d cluttered room made him think of a world he'd only ever glimpsed. A world of warm and cosy domesticity.. and he felt an unexpected twist of his heart. he battled away his uncomfortable thoughts and looked away instead
She was a little old-fashioned he thought, The kind of girl he didn't think existed anymore---- atleast not outside d Television. She was wearing an apron and he couldnt remember d last time he'd seen any girl wearing one of those. A deliberatly retro version of frilly cotton, n it was tied tightly enough to emphasise d tiniest waist he'd ever seen n for once his heart skipped a beat.

"You?" she said smiling
"Me" he smiled back
"How'r you?" she said
"fine what about you?" he asked
"Good such a.. (she searched for d right word) neat ya neat surprise" she finally said
"Well, What can i smell?" He asked
"You mean d cooking?" she asked as well
"you certainly haven't let me close enough to sample your perfume" He said shrugging one shoulder she shook her head
"You're still d same. no maturity i can see that" she said
"Well, u can theropy me later right now i need to grab something" n he moved in
"Excuse me? when did i let you in?" she asked
"Uhun u don't need to miss"he said as he grabbed a cookie.."how's your husband?" he asked "i think i shouldnt come in in his absence" he said sarcastically kriya was silent this topic was way too much for her. she didn't wish to continue this anymore..
"Rey you can come my home anytime you wish, and, and for your information i didn't marry" she said
"You didn't?? really??" he said
"u heard me, i didnt marry" she said "how did u find me?" she asked
"Sam u know her?" he asked "She's swayam and sharon's daughter" he said "what?" she said 😊 he nodded "yes, she visited you few days back, i wanted to find out who exactly she went to, so i came." he said
"thats really great, its great to see you after alot of time.. how much time its been?" she asked
"12 years. i guess" he answered munching anither cookie
"How much you eat!?, let me finish baking them atleast" she said
"They're great as great as you" nd he stepped a bit closer it was enough for kriya's heartbeat's to rush, "rey" she asked "what?" he answered and she just stepped away, "Sam won't come to you" he stated
"She..she wont?" kriya asked
"U heard me right" he declared
"What?" she asked
"I beg you please, i need her" kriya said
"i really dont care." he said
"please rey. please" n her eyes filled
"i'll see.." he said
they both talked for quiet a while n den rey left. he said he had some unfinished work..

5 days went by kriya didnt see rey or Sam at all. she missed her and she hated to say but she missed him as well.. finally one day she caught him roaming around "Rey!!" she said
"Yeah?" he turned
"Oh kriya? i was coming to your place, in a while.." he said
"i doubt that" she said
"U do? well need to talk" he said
"About?" she said
"I need a favour, a real big favour" he said...
Precap: Twists n Twists..!
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i hope ki ye chappy thik tha??
was it??
wel, it was a bit boring i guess..
was it guys? i really appreciate feedbacks so please please please batana!
hmm.. lot many twists coming up..
Will b uodating really late sorry m really busy right now and i need to study as well, so updates ka toh koi saval hi nhi hai..!
hope this is enough for a few days...
Thankyou to my spamming queens Annie di n Anjali..
Thanks guys!
And ofcourse all those who wished me on my birthday!
Thanks a TON!!
Love all My Kaminis n my devils!!!!!!
Love you all... sorry of it was a borring update
ab koi keh ke dikhao ki chota update tha.. accha bada tha na?
i hope ki tha.. sorry double read karne ka time nhi mila So ignore typos..
Bye guys review time!
Love ya all!!

P.s- Buddy me if u want pms! =)

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Loved the meeting of Kriyaansh
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
kriyaansh meeting was superb..
thnx for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part rashi
omgg loved it

*rofl*

"i am a barbie girl in the barbie world
life in plastic is fantastic
u can brush my hair n dress me everywer
imagination
life is ur creation"

*rofl*
i used to luv this song when i was small...

Sam..great job..kya chun ke nikala hai ringtone...woww

agar swayam ke jaga koi aur hota toh voh bhi yehi karta
rofl

loved the kriyansh part...
Even i was eating cookies while reading the part...
Coincidnce

what are these twists and turns?

great treat

cont soon
thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooosssoomm update...,:-) loved it..:-) thanxxx 4 pm

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