Feelings:Raghav's POV chapter 3 pg 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys! I know Im a little too late to make this ss, but a thought just occured. I thought of making an ss on Raghav's feelings on how he felt after he left Elite. Heres the prolougue. ...
We were out on our first romantic date together. That is when I got to know that mum has cancer. Blood cancer...
11 June 2012
The train left the patform. Im going to go back to US today. To be with mom. Cuz she needs me the most. I've got to leave behind everyone... Juno,my best buddy. Wadda Nikka, my partners in crime. Sammy, my other best buddy. Tanya, my silly but good friend. Vishal, the "Villian", Sally,my ex-girl friend. Pata nahi sab ko bye kaise boloonga. Agar in sab ko bol bhi doon, toh Pushpa ko kaise boloonga? Pushpa. My one and only first and the last true love of my life. The only girl, jiske saath main freely baat kar sakta hoon. The one girl jiske kareb aate hi meri heart race karne lagti hai. How? How do I tell her good bye?
3 hours later
"Raghav... Raghav... I...I...I love you too.." screamed my Pushpa. She came running behind the train. Oh how i wish i can pull her up into the train! But its too late now. She cant run any further. We just keep waving to each other till we can see each other.
The train has already left the plat form. I walk over to my seat and sit down. I kept my bags down on the floor, when I feel my cheks are wet. I touch them. I am crying. I cant control them any longer. When Pushpa was with me, I had to control, so that she doesnt start crying. But now. The compartment is also empty. I can cry all i want. No one to stop me...
(These pix are of Raghav's flashbacks)
That was the last I saw of her. I close my eyes..
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I open my eyes. The more i try not to think aout her, the more i end up thinking of her. I divert my thoughts to juno and the rest of my gang.
Insead of the good bye part, i remembered all the fun times we had together. The times when we made of Vishal...
How am I going to cope with this? Will I ever meet Pushpa, Juno, Wadda Nikka, Sammy, Tan, Miss Sane, Bull Dog... Will I ever meet them again...
...
Thats it guys. Hit the like button if you all like it. Sorry for the senti part.
Thank you... 😳
INDEX
PROLOUGE= PG1
CHAPTER 1=PG2
CHAPTER 2=PG5
CHAPTER 3=PG 7
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum start sasha.. dis was sumthng v always wantd.. v hve always seen sia's feelings bt nt raghav's.. thanks 4 starting sch a lovely ss.. continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!! Sasha !!...The idea of the ss is too good and the start is just amazing...u have potryed each and every feeling beautifully and the pics go very well with what u have written...cant wait to read more about raghavs feeling...Its just lovely!!😳😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firstly, so happy so see u back. 🤗 Missed u very-2 much. Regarding this FF, I loooved it; loved it to the core. It was so awesme and very nice to read about Raghav's feelings and his POV after his departure. You portrayed them sooo well sweetie. 😃

My request to you: Hope you are not writing this as an OS!!! Please make it longer and make it a SS!!! YOu write so-2 well, and love ur readings. I am not that good at words...but I really wnt to read more! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i don't follow this show shasha so i have no idea who raghav is but you have a nice writing style😊...received your PM, thought i would check it out,...and found out you gave me the wrong link and thats how I ended up here😆
Edited by haya20 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey sash glad that u started this ss😃
its nice to know things from raghav's pov...awesome start!!!
the feelings that u portrayed were too good!!!
want to read more...continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jerryberry

Awesum start sasha.. dis was sumthng v always wantd.. v hve always seen sia's feelings bt nt raghav's.. thanks 4 starting sch a lovely ss.. continue soon..😊

Thaku Jerry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskanpuri99

wow!!! Sasha !!...The idea of the ss is too good and the start is just amazing...u have potryed each and every feeling beautifully and the pics go very well with what u have written...cant wait to read more about raghavs feeling...Its just lovely!!😳😊


Thanks Muskan! Your comment matters a lot! Embarrassed
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks!!!!! 😃 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat4u

Firstly, so happy so see u back. 🤗 Missed u very-2 much. Regarding this FF, I loooved it; loved it to the core. It was so awesme and very nice to read about Raghav's feelings and his POV after his departure. You portrayed them sooo well sweetie. 😃

My request to you: Hope you are not writing this as an OS!!! Please make it longer and make it a SS!!! YOu write so-2 well, and love ur readings. I am not that good at words...but I really wnt to read more! 😊

Thanks!

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