Feelings:Raghav's POV chapter 3 pg 7

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sasha sorry for being late bt soon i'll read all updates

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Originally posted by: AbiAnshUtpol
Sasha sorry for being late bt soon i'll read all updates

Heeeyyy!!!! Seein u after a looong tym in the forum... heard u hav xams... All the best!!!!!
And, don't worry, baad mein comment kar do... thanx 😃

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CHAPTER 1

"Oberoi Mansion". I have reached home. Back to USA. Now, theres no turning back. Par... I DO wanna talk to mom and dad and sort out our problems but... Khash ye problems sort karne ke liye mujhe Elite chodke na aana padta. I take i deep breathe and look at the big mansion in front of me...

I still remember my fifth birthday. Mom and dad... Werent so busy that time. They always made time fr me. Coming to my fifth birthday...

30 Deember. A cold snowy winters night. I was packed off to Rishabh's house (My bro) in the morning and in the evening, i was rushed to Jack's house (my friend).

I returned home at 7 PM. It was all dark arround and then suddenly... "Happy Birthday Raghav!" I heard innumerable people scream from everywhere! And then I enjoyed my birthday to the fullest! It was the best day, I ever had with my friends and family. Especialy mom and dad; but it was the last fun moment we ever had...

Now, finally decide to go in. Meet mom and dad. I had informed dad about my arrival, but I asked him not to tell mom. I wanted to surprise her. I ring the bell. A lady opens the door. Mrs Stewert, our house keeper. She was practically my baby sitter as well. She greets me with a tight, warm, motherly hug and I hug her back. Now, I tip toe into the living room...

Mum is sitting on a sofa; she is reading a magazine. "BOO" i say, right near her left ear.Mum litterally jumps with fear and turns back!

"Raghav! Tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya tha!" she says as she hugs me tightly and gives me a kiss on the cheek. I hug her back. And suddenly, we realise that we've not spoken to each other for years. But still, this is so wierd that within 5 seconds we got along so well. Guess this is what they call MAMTA!

"Tumhari flight kais thi?" asks mum breaking the silence between us

"Flight... Well, it was white on the outside, golden yellow in the inside aur..." I say

"I meant ki tumhari journey kaisi thi!" says mom

"Achchi. Aur aap?"

"Theek... Waise tumne bataya kyu nahi ki tum aa rahe ho?" says mum

"Bataaya tha, dad ko. But, Maine unhe iss baat ko secret rakhne ko kaha taaki aapko surprise kar sakoon!" I say winking 😉

"Tum aur tumhare dad na... So, tum kuch khaaoge?" she asks

"Haan, par abhi main fresh ho jaata hoon." I say walking towards the stairs...

Thats my room! Cool right? It hasn't changed a bit. Theres only ne difference... Now its a lot more cleaner! I dump my bags on the ground (I didn't let the house keepers carry it; i wanted to do my own work). I sigh and fall on the bed!!

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Thats it for now.. Hope you liked it. Sorry for not adding any Rasia memories. Do comment and hit the like button if you liked it. Thank you!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It is an Awesome update!!!

loved the mother-son bonding and ya this is only known as mamta.😉

The pictures u put..go so well with wats written and it was wonderful..the way u showed the past of raghav...when he was a child...and about the rasia scenes...not now so in the next one...don't worry about that..!!.😉

Update soon!!😊

PS : btw ...will u show raghav's comeback and his feelings after coming back???

Pls do so!!...welll it's a long way there..😊

Edited by muskanpuri99 - 12 years ago

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chahat4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey the update was superbly superb! :D n i just loved the grand pics...added so much!!! Plz update soon and longer this time! :P n its ok regarding there being no Rasia memories, its not possible in every update is it? A couple's story always have other linked incidents too. :)

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-Nimmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sash it was an awesome update!!!

loved the mother son bonding!!!

the flashback was also good😊😊

hey that's ok if no sira part...its not possible to get them always...😊

waiting for ur update😊

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Originally posted by: muskanpuri99
It is an Awesome update!!!
loved the mother-son bonding and ya this is only known as mamta.😉

The pictures u put..go so well with wats written and it was wonderful..the way u showed the past of raghav...when he was a child...and about the rasia scenes...not now so in the next one...don't worry about that..!!.😉

Update soon!!😊

PS : btw ...will u show raghav's comeback and his feelings after coming back???

Pls do so!!...welll it's a long way there..😊

Thanks muskaan... Next update may or may not be late... Thanks for commenting!!!!!!!!! 😃

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Originally posted by: nimmi-hhl
Sash it was an awesome update!!!
loved the mother son bonding!!!

the flashback was also good😊😊

hey that's ok if no sira part...its not possible to get them always...😊

waiting for ur update😊

Thanks Nimz!! Will try to update as soon as possible... 😃

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Originally posted by: chahat4u
Hey the update was superbly superb! :D n i just loved the grand pics...added so much!!! Plz update soon and longer this time! :P n its ok regarding there being no Rasia memories, its not possible in every update is it? A couple's story always have other linked incidents too. :)

Thanks Charu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry for the short update; i typed in a hurry. I'll try a longer and soon update! 😃