End or a New Start? *Last os*

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Heyii guys... umm first of all Im DAMN sory but I cant help it! I have discontinued all my works on kriyaansh obviously except my combine works... ermm have something to say. well guys THIS OS IS MY LAST EVER WORK ON KRIYAANSH. sorry guys but i seriously done feel like writing... something bugs me always.

Anyways this one is ONLY N ONLY for my cute si lil sis my KESHU.

Luv yaa dear 🤗

I still didnt got a PM from you. Hope it will be enough as a gift wich you wanted 😛

and yup a treat for that goody news too 🤣

Rishabala Fans do have A look at it!

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**End Or A New Start**



Sitting on a table kriya checked her messages. Sharon was scolding a guy while Vishakha was least bothered about anything happening around. Lousians were in their class attending a fullto boring lecture from the AVP. Suddenly a poen came and told AVP that she had been called into VP's cabin. Lousians went behind them. It was not lousians infacthalf of the class went behind them not to overhear the matter but to check out TWO girls.

In the VP's cabin a new comer handed the papers to the VP and AVP cleary saying that they are kicked off from their job. Outside the cabin lousians happiness had no bound! They just left for canteen to celebrate.

(P.s. Aashi n Swayam are JUST friends while t - r have no relation excpet for rey she is his boss (😡) n swayam's sister)

But as soon as they entered the canteen they were shocked beyond limit! "Hey guys...!!!" Vishakha greeted them while Krisha paid no heed and continued doing their old work.

"Sharon stop it! Amy bro will look upon him!" Kriya shouted geting damn irritated
"but..."
"no buts!"
"but kitty..."
"kitty my foot! vish kal engagement hai what to do? nothing is decided yet n all of you are just arh!!!"
"oh hello kitty even you are check your messages!"
"is watching arjun's routine for the engagement a crime?"
"WHAT! he messaged you and not me?" Sharon said with a pout.

All the while Lousians were shocked beyond limit. Vish when looked back saw someone coming and asked krisha to stop all quickly and they followed.

"Hey guys!!!!"

Lousians turned back to get another shock! What was it? A shock after another?! guess thats not enough for them. Soon kriya stood up finding it difficult to walk. For making it easier for her the guy which just came goes to her when she hugged him.

"Happy b'day bro!"
"thanx. sahi bol theek hai na?"
"huh? 1 mahine se hai ise hataao na!" Kriya said with a pout.
"no! not until ridz allows you to...!!!"
"Amy bro" She pouted.
"these pouts arent gonna work. anyways aaj 2pm pe appointment hai teri."
"eeks... love you...!!!!" she hugged him giving lousians (except vishakha) a shock while rey a minor heart attack.

His heart ached listening to those words...

"Hey Im reserved han?"
"woo"
"shut up!"
She showed karan her tongue and started to leave.

Sharon was frozen just b'coz she saw the person she once loved the most.

How... how dare... i..itna sab hone ke baad bhi they want to return...??? why...!!!!! why they cant leve both of us alone...!!!! whats our fault??? yehi ki we both are... arhhh ghin aati hai mujhe ye bolne mein... bolna toh dur ki baat hai mujhe toh ye sochne mein hi ghin aati hai... you both broke our trust dad... never ever in our life we are gonna come back to both of you... we both are far better with our friends n bro... though he isnt our real bro or even cousin but you know what he is far better than you both... one that gave us shelter when we both never had anyone by our side... one who cared for us not the one who let us die... one who risked his life when we were in danger... you both are nothing in compared to him MOM N DAD!!!! just nothing...!!!!!

***

Krisha were twins and both of them knew this fact before they came to St. Louis... One day both of their parents had a fight and smriti took kriya while gautam took sharon... both krisha were heartbroken... it wasnt they were young to understand these things... they were capable of understanding these things... they knew what it meant! They were the best of the sisters... indeed more than sisters they were like besties... those which can never be seprated by faith...!!!! They were 16 when it all happened. Smriti shifted to dehradun from delhi while gautam shifted to mumbai... thats when THEIR real story starts... smriti started to hate dance and blamed it for this condition of her n kriya while gautam make him fully occupied in dance ignoring sharon... she felt lonely and thus turned into an attitude b***h for others while from inside she was as soft an cottton. Gautam noticed the change of behaviour in sharon and tried to bring the OLD sharon back but that was way too late... she kept ignoring him... when in St. Louis she first saw kriya she thought she was just imagining... but soon she got all the thingy... both of them were happy but they cant just talk n all infront of all so at night they both used to stay back and talk for hours.. those hours were the time when Sharon was the Sharon kriya knew... not an attitue bit*h. Days passed (same you all know. so im directly skipping after sharon left.)

Inspite of going back to her dad sharon went to kriya... the only person she can rely upon... the one who gave all what she needed... vishakha krisha karan ridz (karan's would be wife) arjun n abhimanu (friends) started living together... A few days passed (a month before they return to st. louis) kriya met with an accident and got her leg fractured... Sharon scolded her a lot for this... as much as sharon hated kriya for hurting herself intentionally she loved her byond that... it was just that she can never forget her parents to give such a torture to both of them...

***

A lone tear escaped sharon's eyes. She just wiped it away and left the place. All looked at karan hopefully... Karan started to tell them everything that happened... all of them including vishakha were in tears... Rey's heart skipped beats listening to the story... TAANI was least interested while aashi...

"Amy bro..." she spoke.
"uh aaashi? what are you doing here? you are supposed to be in NY"
"ya even after knowing whats tomorrow! NEVER!" she took her frustration out.

Vishakha was rofling like anything. Both aashi and karan gave her a deadly glare and carried on with their blabbering while from back vishakha was acting as if they would never stop. A guy came running to the place.

"VISH!" he called out

All shifted their attention to the new comer.

"heyii man..."
"uh heyii late come fast...!!!! EMERGENCY!!!!" he spoke and dragged her with him...

Bharat's blood boiled seeing it. Giving a look at karan, the new guy left the place.

All folowed them including karan!

Soon when they reached they were in hospital... all were hell confused what was happening.. soon a ward boy came to karan.

"sir... baby... ridhimma mam ko assit karna hai aapko..."

he said panting hard... as soon as karan registered the fact he left the place immediately followed by others...

Karan went inside the OT. Lousians were hell confused. Sharon sat infront the the OT crying badly... vishakha went to her.

"hey what happened?"
"Im the worst sister vishakha!"
"oh pls stop it! agar kriya ne suna toh chodegi nahi wo tujhe...!!!"
"she's right sharon!" the guy2 (who brought vish here) kept his hand on sharon's hand to assure her that everything will be fine.

Sharon took her hand back hurting the guy a lot.

"Excuse me!" she said and started to leave only to be stoped by rey!

"what happened sharon?" rey asked her concerened clearly visible in his voice. Sharon just hugged him tightly...

Rey patted her back to bring her to normal but it was way too hard.

"Sharon hua kya hai?" asked simmi.
"vish... use mat bataana mein kahan jaa rahi hun!"
"WHAT THE HELL...!!!! sharon uska hak banta hai jaanne ka!!!"
"but I dont want HER to know...!!! you know last time jab wo thi yahan that was even coz of me and now too...!!! pls leave me alone...!!!"
"but shar..."
"pls.."

With this sharon ran from that place. Soon after a few moments karan came out.

"sharon kahan hai?" asked karan from vishakha and 2 guys.
"bhai wo chali gayi yahan se..." guy 1 answered!
"WHAT...!!!" shouted karan. he started calling her.

"sharon what is this! come over here fast she needs you...!!!!" karan shouted on her.
"no bro I cant!"
"sharon she needs blood you have to be here!"
"blood?" she said
"ya she needs blood and im sure you will not like if I call them here! would you love it?" asked Karan
"NO! Im coming." exclaimed sharon and han up the call.

Karan smirked.

"how do you always do it?" asked vishakha.
"I know the weak points so not a big thing. anyways will se you later ridz andar hai main toh shar ko dekhne aaya tha. paagal ladki!"

Vishakha and Aashi chuckled wit the 2 guys over there.

After a few days everything was back to normal. Krisha + Vishakha joined the college. things were back to normal b/w the group. Kriya's leg was fractured still because of the accident which took place a few days back. Kriyaansh and Swaron were coming ore close to eachother. All except Taani were very happy!

Soon Kran and Riddhima's wedding was done. All were very happy with that.

On the wedding day...

"Kriya follow this kid" the note said. Kriya followed the little boy. He told her a place and left from her sight. She went over there only to be blindfolded by someone.

"Rey!" she exclaimed.

He kissed on her nape and "Wait and watch baatcutter" wishpered in her ear.

She pouted and let him direct her.

He took her to a beautiful place all decorated with everything of her choice.

He slowly opened her blindfold. Slowly she opened her eyes and was in awe with the place.

He guided her to a place and stood infront of her. Yes he was gonna propose her!

"Kriya... the day you met with an accident after you came back I felt like my heart bleeding and would stop beating any moment... that day when karan sir said that you need blood I felt like my heart almost stopped beating. When you were not there I felt lonely . Though I plastered a fake smile for my friends but that wasnt myself. Then a day I realised how much it affects my friend. I started living again for them but then sharon even left me! My best friend without whom I cant even live left me. I still hold myself up for others. Then one day you were back. My love, my bestfriend both were back... that day I felt my heart beating again. The life which I took as an abrupt end became a New start. Start because my Love was back. With you I had experienced a life which I would never had! I Love You Kriya ! I Love you... Will you marry me?" Asked rey.

Kriya by then was in tears... she didnt knew wheather she was sad happy or guilty for doing this to him? Rey looked at her and saw her tear striken face. He cupped her face.

"Kriya..." he said with all the love he had but she just hud him tight.

"Im sorry..." she said midst her sobs while he was patting her back to calm her down.

"shoul I take it as a yes?" he whispered in her ear as she nodded slightly.

He made her face him. "I didnt got my answer!" said rey.

"yes..." she said wiping her tears. He gently kissed her forehead and both of them had their best evening with the other beside them.

A year later...

Kriya in her sleep hugged the person sleeping beside her as she was disturbed by the sunrays.

"uh huh" she was being disturbed by the sunlight constantly. The person beside her was not sleeping weather he was adoring the angel infront of his eyes. He gently caressed her forehead and soothed her as she opened her eyes smiling widely at him.

Rey kissed her forehead and she sat up straight.

"kya hua?" asked rey. "ku..kuch nahi..." as she went into washroom and vomited.

She came out wiping her face. rey was tensed for hr now!

"are you alright?" he asked taking her into his embarace.

"umm ya." answered kriya.

"I will call the doctor. I in any case am not gonna go to office." announced rey.

"but rey..."

"no buts. take rest." he made her lie on the bed and went out to call the doctor and fixing an appointment.

In the afternoon the doctor arrived and checked kria. He announced it as a good news.

Kriyaansh were more than happy...











Hmm end !

Dont ever ask me the reason fr me discontinuing my works on kriyaansh and why I stopped writing on them.

Just cant tell!

Happy as I got a lot of close friends throug D3 but at present I wont write anything on kriyaansh. will read but still Im higly Inactive so you all cant expect fast udates of other works which I didnt discontinued.

Was a very lovely experience writing on them :)

Hope to see you all around!

Ya I forgot those two boys. imagine them anyone. friends of krisha.

Love

K
Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago
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Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago
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Res 😡
Unres


Im sorry but i cant comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaram se read kar ke comment karugi!
You want a big one, right??
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Originally posted by: Kesha1234

Aaram se read kar ke comment karugi!

You want a big one, right??


yup 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os...
beautiful...
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Amazing os Konzu..!!..
just luved it.!!..
thnx for the pm..!!..
will miss ur works of KR..!!...😔
hope ull continue them soon..!!..
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Amazing os
par 😕 baut kiya ...😆😆
or kon kon say wor hai mein toh bhul bhi gaya hu😆😆
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awesome os
all is this what i can say

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