28Dec Ch25/2 pg71 :Arhi|Th5 How IPK should've been

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pakpearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

thanks Smitzy for not ditching us...for giving beautiful updates !!!!

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

chap 24 scene 3
awesome...
glad Anjali and the baby are fine...
and Arnav has come to know about something and hope he will get this out sorted...
and the audacity of that creep...
cont soon dear...

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damonzlady

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

glad to know that anjali's out of danger!

the part where arnav sees his niece was really nice!

the precap--the nerve of that creep Manohar Jha!

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asr13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Intezaar-a-Ve !!!!😕🥱

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Devika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

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- sorry, i havent read some of the earlier chapters yet. Im having my exams right now, and after that, i promise to read and comment-

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

😳 I LOVE How This Story Is Progressing

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Factitious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Amazing update...happy that anjalis baby was safe. And shocked what the hell shyam doing in arnav's cabin. Waiting for u to continue soonish.

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NothingLasts

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

I loved the last few updates! I have finally caught on!

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Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

i've finally caught up with the last few updates... amazing...amazing...amazing! thats all i can say

Why werent you writing the actual scenes 😭... it would have been such a treat to watch!!!

thanks for the PM :)

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melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

Smitzy,

I read all the chapters from thread 1 to thread 5 and what can I say. It was a JOY ride. I loved all the chapters.

Before I forget I want to point out my fav scenes from the updates. I would have LOVED if the show had adapted these scenes but atleast we got to read it in your FF.

1. The absolutely loved the way you revealed Arnav's past. I liked how the whole family went to Lucknow for the sharad ceremony and Arnav discovers the deeds of his dad. My heart was beating in anticipation when Arnav started reading the diary...I also loved how you procrastinated it by bringing in dadi at right moment...The story of his past was complete...in the show they never closed the loop.

2. Arnav flashing his ring to the camera when a reporter asked if he got ober khushi or not. I was sighing, singing, blushing at that gesture 😆 That was absolutely wonderful.

3. I liked how Arnav transferred the Gupta house to buaji's name. In the show we never got to know what happened to that deal.

4. It was so nice of Arnav and the Raizada family to come and apologize to Garima for misunderstanding and insulting her in front of family and friends. That was good move.

5. Neha Bamb as Nandini was a good addition. NK and her track is nice to read.

6. Loved how Arnav apologized and gained Khushi's respect and love. They are LOVELY

7. Thank you for giving Anjali a little brain 👏 She discovered the cameras...that was amazing.

8. In the Diwali episode after Arnav wins the card game he brings Khushi to the poolside and what I loved was the part where he kept walking her to the wall asking if she remembered last Diwali...that line "and then...and then...and then..." was so romantic...sigh...Their Kiss and Dance...I am

9. Anjali's didn't loose the baby...YAYYY for that and I am glad she is out of danger. They should have followed that in the show instead of that unnecessary miscarriage and drama 😡

10. Payal and Aakash actually have a role to play and I was clapping when Aakash actually walked out of the house to support Payal.

On the whole I loved the way you wrote this story and I loved reading all the chapters. You are a wonderful writer.

Please cont soon 😃

Edited by melonie - 12 years ago