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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..too good smitzy...arnav can make khushi do whatever he wants..ab aayega mazaa😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!!!!!!! Loved d update!!!!!
Hmm... Daydreaming huh...!!!! ;)
thanx for giving such a superfast update!!!!
And dont u lose hope just because of getting less no of comments!!!! Remember we all love ur updates and want u to write more and more and more!!!! :D
thanx for d pm too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome !!! so arnav won... lets see what has he planned .. do update soon... thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the cards game...ramanchi stuff brought back so many memories from the show
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was awesome! Waiting to find out what Arnav makes Khushi do 😉 . Please update soon! And thanks for the pm.
By the way, reading your FF feels like I am watching the show. So even if the show has stopped please do continue with your FF. And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Are you updating today!??
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update!! hmm wonder what arnav will make khushi do 😊
NK is completely smitten by Nandini, and Nandini seems to oblivious to him, wonder how things will take a turn...you are an amazing writer :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva


Haayyyeee...Haayyeee...

You knw what thank god u didnt put the dance in this update too, other wise i defo would have fainted!!<3
God, i was swooning and twirling all over man!!<33
Hot and sexy Arnav bitwa!☺️😳

Yes, finally Khushi wears the gift!!:D Really nice to see her admiring it affectionately :)

You knw what i just LOVE how you emphasise and write every small detail!!<3 It makes reading that more effective!!
Ohk, i just love NKs reaction when he sees Nandini! Its soo funny and cute! Lovesick puppy he is! :p
The way u described Arnav and that pic!! Faintwa<3 :*
God!! Cant stop drooling!!☺️


And i loved how you expressed Arnavs emotions throughout the update!
Especially when he sees her walk through tht door! You can totally imagine "air whooshing out of his chest!"<3😆

And when he said "Oh Khushi", i was like "Oh Arnav!"☺️😆

He just had eyes for his lady and no one else and didnt care if neone was even around! Also loved when he brushed her hair and the "Rabba Ve!"
Obviously someone had to interrupt!!😆 Nahi toh kaise chalta!:p

Hahaa, i love the banter bet Arnav and Nandini! :D Everytime she sees him, she just climbs on top of him!(no pun intended :P)
Now that he and Khushi are becoming all romantic, someone has to do the nok-jhok na!! ;)

And the response of Akaash with the bimari and love-eria thing just cracked me up!!🤣
Ohk and Buaji when she was almost said Sankeswar bt stopped, reminded me of Mami when she says Phatti Sadi!!😆 No wonder Mami was soo curious!

Ohk the taash thing, seriously Khushi was actually able to play properly with hot and sexy Arnav by her side!! :O Yes, she lost! Now its time for the bet!!😳

Almost faints thinking about the next update!!<3:*

PS - I have no idea who the Nandini is, but she seems to fit the bill! :)


hahahaha after long time I'm replying to your comment Shwetha darling!! muaaah love you for the lovely comment yaara 🤗

bete abhi yahi padh ke swooning and twirling, to next scene mein to tum faintwa ho jaoge :P I'm not going to brag but coming scene is going to be my most romantic attempt EVER!!! It's going to be long, sweet and lingering on passion and HEAT and UFF YUMMMAAA!! 😉 To bete ready rehna.. smitaa ne to already popcorn ka tub tayyar karke rakha hai I think hahahhahaha

I'm glad that I decided to write this diwali chapter really.. judging by the drama that is soon going to follow, uska jhatka will at least get cushioned slightly by the next scene 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asr13

😉...and i secured a first ..YAY !😃

Smitzy !!!

Ramanchi !!! But a verrry cute update ...sab kuch chodo, the Mr Oldie thing had me roaring with laughter ...just couldn't control myself !😆 I lau her or what !!! I was like YAY you go girl, NK in awe of her is no surprise, mee too 😛

Haai for once Khushi wore Arnav's gifted saree ...very thoughtful ...love you for picking that up and thereby, closing the loop😊! I thought she showed too much attitude on her Birthday, especially when he was trying so hard to please her ...I hated her when she pretended to not like the poolside decor and the cake ...hmmm! 😕
Loved the whole Gupta house scene ...very normal sa chaos on a festive day, especially when you've got limited time to get ready ! 😃

Thank you for describing the dapper looking ASR ...I almost fainted, had to desperately hold on to the arms of my chair for support ...Hotness personified ! 😳

And, when Khushi walked in ..air sucked out of his lungs ...and mine too ! Awesomely (Excuse the grammar, I really dont care ...I need to spew it out! ) done ...the entire entry scene !!!👏 Arnav almost bumped into Nandini 🤣 and she had a go a him ...again !!

I loved the way you've described Arnav concentrating on his woman and her only ...love the way you've pointed it out again and again ...and I am loving our man with his monologues ...that's a first !!! Love it , it brings out the kameenapan in him... Loved it all the way though ...especially Oh Khushi!...it said so much !!!😳
Akash -Payal - Khushi- Arnav exchange was very cute, loved the bit about Loveria-affected Raizada bachelors ...who's worked the hardest, oh and the best bit was the big bro asking PayAsh to take rest !!!😉 Uff too much gutter !

And then the Rabba Vey ...beautiful !!! Ofcourse, ws inturrupted by the new to-be jodi😆!!!

Arnav's astonished as Khushi switches into a planning mode immediately after ... 13 patte now !!! And he gets goaded into the game, yet another time ...and she was obviously going to lose, even after the clever attempt at counting (counting !!! Matlab she was actually able to concentrate on those cards with the man sitting next to her ...next to her !!!😲 )

Ab shart ke mutabik, main tumse jo chahe karwa sakta hoon ...Haai !!! *gutter* and off they go, into the confined boundaries of their room, their haven ..."their poolside" ...
*swoons twirls Thud!*
Now how tf do I wait till tomorrow ?? Tells tells you wicked woman ! 😛


@#$!#%!#% I wrote an awesome reply and the whole thing disappeared. FCUK!

Anyway, gist of the comment was that... bete what the next scene is going to present is going to blow your mind. Agar upcoming scene ye log serial mein dikhate na boss duniya bhar mein aag lag jaati 😆

wicked woman is going to make you gasp and pant and blush and swoon and faint all within one reading 😉😉

muaaah!! Stay tuned!

PS - congrats for the 1st res 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED the last update! Can't wait to see what happens at the poolside. Because of Arnav and Khushi I have felt Diwali is such a romantic time. The show really blew it this year on Diwali. But that's why I read your story!!! The way it should've been 😉

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