28Dec Ch25/2 pg71 :Arhi|Th5 How IPK should've been - Page 19

Note : A lot of "Haayyees" and maybe "Awws" will b mentioned! 😆

Okay...how the hell do i start!

*Swoons, Twirls & THUD!!*

Hai re Nandakishore!!

OMG They Kissed!! They finally kissed!!☺️ Woohooo!! This itself counts for a celebration!!<3😆

Baap re Baap, i really need to catch my breath!!
How the hell did you right this stuff woman!? :O
By God Smitzy, my mouth is hurting from all the blushing and grinning!! :p

The moment Arnav started to speak i had a huge smile on my face!!
The way you explain and emphasise everything makes it soo damn effective!! even as little as shivering, the gupling, brushing her hair behind the ear!!! Every damn thing!!<3

Awww, he decorated the poolside like last time!!<3
Okay, loved how Arnav did the whole last time Diwali foreplay!! Just the whole thing flashed in my mind yaar!!<3 Sigh...what a scene it was!<33
Finally Khushi expresses her sadness of that day to him! He should knw u knw doin all that and then treating her the way he did.
Oh i soo loved the way u expressed Arnavs emotions. Finally he laid it out in the open, His fears,his doubts and how he felt! And u knw i understand him. It couldnt have been easy for him u know.But im really happy they had this convo. Khushi does really understand him!<3

Haayyeee...the dance!!<33 Tbh iv never heard the song before. It suited so perfectly!!<3
I just swooned and twirled man! And also imagined how it would be if i were in Khushi place!😳

And the Rabba Ve!! Haaayyyeee! God, soo dreamy!!<3
The way you describe the atmosphere and everything makes it feel so real!! As if literally theres sparks flying!!<3
Oh my! Soo many kisses!!😳 Haayyeee
And then the most awaited "The completed kiss!!"☺️ They finally kissed!! Haayyeee!!😳
Finally Khushi got what she wanted from the start!! :p

Dude what a mindblowing update!! i actually could visualise the whole thing!!And i put the RV tune on repeat as i just cudnt get enough of it!! :*
Thank you soo much for making my day!! :D:*

Though the precap sounds really really bad!! :/ Bechari Anjali! :(

ILubYouDamnit!<3
Muaah!!

PS - Yes i know im super late!! Yes iv said and done this many times! :/ So this is sumthing for you though it says the same!! :/


Oh and Smita, thank you u for reswa!🤗

😳Res

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nice update waiting 4 nxt update

I love this work immensly.

I love this work. The pool side dance and kiss scene was one of the best portrayel of arnav kushi romance i read so far.

res. i can now safely gloat i think. :-D

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Let me tell you that I was commuting in a bus when I read this on my phone. Only Khushi's Devi Maiya and I know how I suppressed my whoops and giggles. Although I had a ridiculous grin on my face all the time so everybody was looking at me a little weirdly anyway. Yeh kya kar diya aapne humaare saath, Smitzy ji? But I did ask for this, so...thank you.🤗

If there was any justice in the world, you would have been writing IPK. Or at least the cv's should have been stealing from you, since this is after all ghor kalyug. I loved that you put in those flashbacks of all those incomplete kisses - now that's called closing a loop. The whole conversation about last Diwali was much needed, and I loved Arnav's honesty about his feelings. What a change Khushi has wrought in him, makes him so much more lovable to someone like me who is not really much of an ASR fan. The dance,too - very well-described. 👏

Oho, Anjali - poor deluded woman. & on Diwali too. Very depressing precap.

wow!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Res

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I am feeling breathless here! That was...WOAH!

Tell me again why werent you writing the story of IPKKND for the whole of this track?!

*Needs to catch breath*

They finally kiss and how! Hayye! Aisa time hai inka toh yeh time baar-baar aaye and ab toh rahega hi because its ArHi time now! <3

Eeeps! That was fantastic and I really appreciate how you took the time and effort to create those two videos! Thank You! :)

The Rabba Ve part had me actually visualizing the whole thing! Sigh! <3