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ok sorry sorry neeti for commenting so damn late
u know i wasnt in a great mood to comment
n wanted to read ur os with a super amazing mood
firstly when i read the title i was expecting something else
then i read ur note 😆
the beginning was amazing re
sharon n swayam dancing to the tune of their own heart beats totally unaware of the reality n the loud music playing in the room
swayam shaon were going to share their first kiss but were interrupted with the hiccups of the gang 😆
swayam n sharon's eye lock was cute
even i want that chocolate cake which rey cut 😭😆
then the scene abt nilesh, bharat n neha was funny
swayam is such a gem coz he never drinks
but rey was forcing him to drink 😡
lol nilesh was having shots as if he was drinking water
clever sharon after all she is the diva- beauty with brains 😉
she poured water instead of that weird liquid and swayam gulped it down his throat without questioning sharon further
loved the part where u showed the gestural talk between swaron through their eyes
this is called true love which exists within swaron 😊
finally they escaped from the situation
swayam was thanking sharon but sharon was wanting to complete some unfinished work😳
their first kiss was so amazing to read
lol
swayam was like keep saving me n i'll keep thanking u😆
in short i fell out of words to describe ur brilliant piece of writing 👏👏👏
super amazing neeti
u r gifted by god with this amazing n awesome capacity to write stories
thank you for coming up with htis wonderful piece re 😃
keep writing more
n im really very very sorry for replying so late
but i guess it was ok coz yeh comment sidha dil se tha 😳 only for u 😊
Edited by BusyIndivaBee - 13 years ago
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