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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
part 8
awesome update
geet is upto something..
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part 8
nice part...
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Part – 9

Geet comes to Km…..

Woh itni jaldi mein thi ki ussko samnewala nazar nahi aaya….

As usual Geet Maan se takraathi….

Maan: tu?..tu yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet Maan ko push karke upar jaathi…..

Maan: baktameez ladkhi, aaj mein usse chodoonga nahi…

Maan Geet ke peecha karnewala hai…..

Dadi comes in search of Maan….

Dadi: hare Maan bte

Maan stops….he comes down….

Dadi: Maan bte, panditji aapko doondh rahe hai

Maan: ji Dadi, mein jaatha hoon

Annie is ready….

Geet comes in& locks the door…..

Geet: Annie, humme ye sagaayi rokhna hoga

Pinky: Geet ye tum kya keh rahi ho?

Geet: Annie, kuch toh bolo

Pinky: Geet , Dadi Annie ko neeche bhulathe hai, ab tu kaise faltu batein kar rahi ho?

Geet:Annie, Arjun wapas aagaya

Annie: toh, kya hua?

Geet: Annie, ye kya bachpana hai?

Annie: Geet mujhe usse koi lena dena nahi hai

Geet: par usse toh hai

Annie: Gee tab bahut dher ho chuki hai, hum kuch nahi kar sakte hai

Geet: kyun nahi?

Annie: par mein ab usspe barosa kaise kar sakthi?

Geet: ye letter pado, ye Arjun ne tummare liye bheja hai

Annie starts reading….

Annie: ullu ka ptta, itne din kahan gaya?

Geet: Annie tujhe ussko daatna hai toh abhi chalo, woh ghar pe hi hai

Annie: Geet, aaj meri sagaayi hai

Geet: kaunsi sagaayi?

Annie: lekhin Geet

Geet: Annie ye lo, tu ye dress pehenno, aur tummare dress mujhe do

Annie: Geet ye mein nahi kar sakthi

Geet: Annie ye behas karne ki waqt nqhi

Annie: Geet

Geet: mujhe patha hai tum kya soch rahi ho? Maan bhai…. haina? Tummare Maan bhai ko mein sambalthi, tu chal

Annie goes to change…..

Geet: Annie kitne dher karogi? Jaldi…

Annie comes…….

Geet: Pinky sambalke

Geet sends them & dresses up like Annie……

Ab Annie aur Pinky bhi chale gaye toh Geet thoda nervous ho jaathi……

Kaise sab ko sambalegi?...woh bhi uss Dust Danav ko toh pehle hi sambalna mushkil hai….

Aaj toh Geet gayi……

Someone knocks……

Geet: chalo Geet, tu toh sherni hai, haina? Babaji mere rakhsha karo

Geet opens the door….

Hare ye? Maan has come to take Annie…..

Geet jaldi andar chale jaathi…..

Geet: babaji itne logon se ye hi mille the kya? Sare ladkhiyan kahan gayi? Ye Meera kahan gayi?

Maan comes in…..

Maan: Annie, ab toh tub hi sharmathi ho?

Maan ko laga ki Annie sharmakke andar chali gayi…..

Maan comes near….he holds her shoulders…..

Maan: Annie, chalo neeche sab tummare liye intrezar kar rahe hai

Geet backs off…….

Maan ko shak ho jaatha…..

He removes the pallu………..

Maan: tum?

Geet: woh….mein….

Maan: tumne mere behen ko kya kiya?

Geet: meinne kya kiya?

Maan: Annie kahan hai?

Geet: Annie kuch zaroori kaam se bahar gayi hai

Geet: kya? Tumne Annie ko kahan bheja?

Geet: meinne nahi bheja, woh kudh gayi hai

Maan: mujhe pehle hi patha tha ki tum kaise ladkhi ho, lekhin phir bhi meinne tujhe andar kaise aane dhi?

Geet: aap kya kehna chahathe ho?

Maan: mujhe toh pehle hi Annie ko warn karna chahiye ki tujhse dhoor rahe, ab dekho kya ho gaya?

Geet: Mr, aap ka matlab?

Maan: tu chal yahan se

Maan drags her out…..

Sab dekh rahe hai…..ye kya tamasha ho raha hai?...

Meera: Geet…Geeet

Geet: haath chodiye

Maan stares her……

Geet: pehle mere baat ko suno

Maan: chup….bilkul chup

Dadi: Maan bte, ye sab kya hai? Annie kahan hai?

Maan: Dadi aap fikar mat kijiye, mein abhi Annie ko lekhe aatha hoon

Dadi: Maan bte

Maan rukhnewala nahi hai….

Maan: jaldhi chalo…..Maan Geet ko aur tez keenchke jaatha….

Geet bahut dar jaathi….

He takes her to the car….

Geet: mujhe kahan lekhe jarahe ho?

Maan: Annie kahan hai?

Geet: mujhe kya patha?

Maan: Geeet

Maan looks into her eyes…angry look…..

Ab Geet ko sachaayi bathana hi padega…..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
part 9
nice part...
Geet shouldnt have done this not without consulting the elders...
cont soon dear...
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Part – 10

Maan : Geet jawab do, Annie kahan hai?

Geet: woh Annie paas hi gayi hai, abhi aajaayegi

Maan: Geet tumne mere behen ko kahan kidnap karke rakha hai, jaldhi bathao warna mujhe

Police ko bhulana padega

Geet: kya?

Maan: tumlogon ko kya chahiye? Paise? Kitne paise?

Geet: aap galat soch rahe ho

Maan: Annie kahan hai?

Maan ka gussa out of control ho raha hai…..

He pushes Geet in the car & slams the door…..

He goes & starts the car….

He drives so fast that Geet ko lagtha ki aaj woh zinda ghar nahi jaa sakthi…..

Maan aur tez jaatha…..he is furious…..

Maan: agar Annie ko kuch ho jaatha toh tu aaj zinda nahi jaasakthi, samji

Geet: Annie hummare ghar pe hi hai, aap dhere chalo

Maan looks at her…his eyes are red in anger….

Now Geet aur kuch nahi keh payi……she keeps quiet……

Maan stops at their apartment….

He literally drags her out of the car……

Geet hits the door……but Maan doesn't stop….

He takes her up….Geet also rushes with him……

Ye lehenga pehenke stairs climb karna itna aasaan nahi haina?

She falls……Maan let her hands off….

Maan: Annie kahan hai?

Geet: door no.132 mein hai

Maan leaves her & rushes up…..

Geet gets up & follows…..

Maan knocks the door….

Arjun opens the door….

Maan just punches him on the face….

Arjun was not expecting this…..he is stunned….

Maan: Annieee, annie kahan hai?

Geet comes……

Geet: Annie andar hi hai

Maan: ye kaun hai? Tera bhai?

Geet:haan, kuch aaisa hi samjo

Maan tera bhai haina? Toh aaisa hi hoga? Annie ko kahan chupake rakha hai tu?

Maan is about to hit him again…..

Annie comes …….she is in tears…..

Annie ko rothehue dekhke Maan toot jaatha…..

Maan: Annie, tu teek toh haina?

Maan goes & hugs her……

Maan: mein tum logon ko nahi chodoonga, abhi police ko bhulatha hoon

Annie: bhai , rukho

Maan: Annie tujhe kuch nahi patha, mein toh isskki shakal dekhte hi samajgaya ki ye aaise hi kuch gadbad karnewali hai

Annie: bhai, galthi toh meri hi hai, Geet toh bas meri madat kar rahi thi

Maan: madat? Apne saheli ki sagaayi ko thodna kitna bada madat hai?

Annie: bhai mein Arjun se bahut pyaar karthi hoon

Maan: Annie ye log tumme fusadenge, tu chalo mere saath

Geet: Annie kahin nahi jayegi

Maan: tummari ye himmat?

Maan almost slaps….

Annie: bhaaiii

Arjun: Annie , tum apne bhai ke saath jao, hum kal aaram se baat karenge

Maan: kal? Tu bahar rahoge toh baat karoge, haina?

Arjun: aap galat samajhte hai

Geet stops Arjun……

Geet: ssshhh……….jaane do, Annie tu chal

She holds him back…………

Arjun: haan Annie jao

Annie goes with Maan…..

Maan ka gussa abhi bhi tanda nahi hua…..

Annie keeps quiet…..

They return…..

At Km…..

Khannas have left……..sare guests bhi chale gaye……

Dadi bahut pareshaan hai…..

Annie: Dadi…

Annie goes & hugs dadi

Annie: Dadi, mujhe maaf kijiye

Dadi: Annie bte, aaise nahi rothe

Maan: Dadi, kya hua?

Dadi: Annie aap apne kamre mein jaake aaram kijiye, hum badh mein baat karenge

Annie leaves….

Dadi: Maan bte achcha hua ye shadhi toot gayi, woh log toh Annie ko doshi kehke chale gaye

Maan gets angry….

Maan: par Dadi, Vicky?

Dadi: woh toh apne maa ke peeche hi chala gaya

Maan: kya? Meinne kya socha aur ye kya ho gaya?

Dadi: ye toh hummari galti hai, humne hi jaldhi mein galat faisla le gaye

Maan: nahi Dadi ye sab toh usski galthi hai, uss Geeet ki

Maan couldn't control himself…..

agar woh Geet nahi hothi toh Annie ki sagaayi achche se ho jaathi….

Par ek baat toh hai, ab toh Maan ko iss Vicky ke barein mein bhi patha chal gaya……

Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan in angry mood
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
part 110
awesome update
uff maan apne gusse par control karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Part – 11

Annie goes & locks up in her room….

Do din se kamre se bahar nahi aathi…..

Maan is worried…..

Maan tries to console her…he goes & knocks….

Maan: Annie….Annie…..

Dadi comes…..

Dadi also tries to talk to Annie……

But Annie is stubborn ……..she won't come out……

Maan chahe toh darwaza thod saktha…lekhin dadi stops him….

Dadi: Maan bte unko akhele chod dijiye, woh apne aap bahar aajeyegi

Maan leaves her alone…..

Annie thinks of the past……

Annie ke college ke shuruat ke din the……

Geet ke saath dosthi bhi tabhi hui….

Arjun Geet ke apartment ke opp. Apartment mein rehtha hai….

Just like Annie he also lost her parents very early….

He is a single child….

He works in a software company…..

He is on his own…some of his relatives are in Delhi….

When he learns about Annie also a parentless child he feels sorry for her….

He develops a soft corner for her….

He could relate with her yearnings for her parents….

Slowly he starts liking her company…

He likes to spend time with her…

He hangs on with Geet, Adi Pinky & Annie on Sundays…

Saath mein movies dhekte hai…disco chalte hai…aur bahut masthi karte hai….

Annie also kind of likes him..

He is also very caring & loving just like her Maan bhai….

Geet innkke barein mein jaanthi hai…

Lekhin ye donno apne feelings ko share nahi karthe…..

Geet Annie se iss barein mein baat karnewali thi….

Par abhi toh shuruat hai….she wants to confirm it…..

Annie sometimes Geet ke saath Arjun ke barein mein baat karthi….

Kaise sab ko itna pyaar kartha, sabko bahar lekhe jaatha….

Kaisa woh akhela hi bada hua…

Atleatst Annie has her Maan bhai to support her……..

Annie ko Arjun ke tanhaayi pareshaan karthi….

Iss duniya mein akhela rehna kitna mushkil ha?i…..

aur ab kitne mehnat kartha hai….he likes his job….he is dedicated….

But she never goes personnel………..

But the only problem is Annie's habit of comparing everyone & everything with her brother…

Arjun already suffers from inferiority complex & Annie's talks aggravate it….

Oneday when they were chating at Pinky's housse, Arjun tells about his adventures when he was

at college….everyone is excited…

as usual Annie starts her Maan bhai katha….

Arjun couldn't tolerate ……

Arjun:Annie, tujhe apne bhai ke alawa koi aur bhi dikhtha hai ya nahi?

Annie: kyun?tumme jalan hotha hai kya?

Arjun: mein kissi se nahi jaltha

Annie: tum kitna bhi koshis karo, lekhin tum mere Maan bhai nahi ban sakte

Arjun:achcha ,tu apne bak bak continue karo,mein chaltha hoon

Arjun is hurt…..he stops talking to Annie…..

He remains silent for a week or so….

Finally oneday he just disappeared…

From that day his housse is locked & nobody knows where he is ….

Annie is very upset by his strange behavior….

Had he liked her he would have atleast called her once….

But no….that's why Annie agreed to marry Vicky wohm her family chose for her

Meanwhile Maan Arjun ke barein mein sab kuch patha kartha….

Maan comes to know that he is currently working on a project in Bangalore

He has a good reputation at his company & he is sure to reach higher positions soon….

Everyone talks about him highly….

Maybe he is not that bad….

Maan is confussed…..

Ab kya karein?...

Vicky pe kitna barosa rakha tha sabne…..

lekhin ussne toh Annie ko milnne bhi nahi aaya………..

Ye bhi achche ke liye hi hai, warna Annie Vicky ke saath kaise kush rehthi?

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part 10
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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part 11
nice part...
chalo big bro has come to know about Arjun...
cont soon dear...
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Part 12

After a few days'.

Annie comes out of her shell'..

She is dull & quiet'.

She doesn't go to college'.

Geet is worried'.

Iss Annie ko kya hua? Woh phone kyun nahi uttahthi?

Kahin usskke akdu bhai ne ussko Mumbai ke bahar nahi bhejdhi?

Usska koi barosa nahi, woh MSK haina?

Kuch bhi karega'.lekhin kuch bhi karne se pehle doosron ke barein mein sochtha hi nahi '..

Geet keeps on calling Annie'..

Geet toh kal KM jaake check karnewali hai'..

At KM'.

Annie ka phone ussdin garden mein ghir gayi '.

Annie kissi se baat nahi kar rahi hai '.ussne Arjun ko bhi call nahi ki'.

Ye baat Geet ko aur pareshaan karthi'.

Mali se Nakul phone lekhe aatha'.

Nakul: Maan sir, phone

Maan: jisska phone hai?

Nakul: laghta hai Annie m'am ka hai

Maan gets it '.

He calls Annie to give the phone'.

Maan: Annie'.

Someone calls'

Maan looks'it's Geet'

Ye kyun call karegi? Phir se kuch ulta toh nahi karnewali?

Maan answers the call''

Maan: tum?

Geet: aap? Toh aapne Annie ka phone bhi cheenli? Ussko house arrest karke aapne teek nahi ki

Maan: stupid ladhki, kya bakwaas kar rahi ho?

Geet: mein teek keh rahi hoon, Annie abhi major hai, aap aaise nahi kar sakthe, mein police ko lekhe aathi

Maan: tum kissiko bhi lekhe aao, mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki KM ke andar kaise aathi?

Geet: hummare Hoshiarpur mein bhi log civilized ho gaye hai
Maan: kya?
Geet: aapne ussko kuch khilaya pilaya bhi ya nahi? Lagtha hai mujhe pehle ek doctor ko lekhe aana chahiye, Annie teek toh haina?

Maan: tum ek kaam karo saath mein ek lawyer ko bhi lekhe aaao, case file karna haina?

Geet: haan ye bhi teek hai

Maan: tumme kissne bahar rehne dhi? Tumme toh pagalkhane mein bandh karna chahiye

Geet: kya? Mein pagal hoon?

Maan: haan, tum jaise katarnaak logon ko bahar goomne nahi dena chahiye, pehle tumme house arrest karna padega, samji?

Annie comes'

Annie: bhai, mera phone aapko kaise mila? Aur aap kisse baat kar rahe hai?

Maan: woh teri pagal dhost , Annie tum isse dhoor hi raho, warna tumme bhi pagal banadeghi, sach mein ye ladhki toh mujhe aada pagal banadhi

Annie: Geet?

Annie snatches the phone'..

Geet: Annie tu teek toh haina?

Annie: Geet mein teek hoon, Arjun kaisa hai?

Geet: woh bahut upset hai, do din se no khana aur no batein

Annie: kya? Ab kya kar raha hai?

Geet: kabrao mat, meinne ussko samjadhi ki agar uss MSK ke saath ladna hai toh pehle se zyada khalo aur body shody banao, warna Annie ko bhool jao

Annie: kya?

Geet: haan, ab Arjun ko gym bhi join karna padega

Annie bursts out laughing'..

Annie: Geet ye tum kya keh rahi ho?

Maan is happy to see his sister return to normal'.

He leaves''

Geet Arjun ko phone dethi'.

Annie talks with him'.

He assures to set everything right as soon as possible'.

Next day''..

Maan finds Arjun's letter'.

Annie must have lost it that day'.

The letter goes''.

Annie,

Congrats. Aaj tummari sagaayi hai, mein bas tumse maafi maangna chahatha hoon.I am really sorry Annie. I shouldn't have left like that. Par mein kya karoon? Tummare Maan bhai ke batein sunke mujhe nahi laga ki mein tummare layak hoon, aur mujhe himmat bhi nahi thi tummare bhai se tummare haath maangne ki. Issiliye mein Bangalore chala gaya. Mujhe nahi patha ki tummare gharwalein tummare shadhi itne jaldhi fix karenge.ho sake toh mujhe maaf kardho. ' Arjun

Maan is impressed by this letter'.

Maan sochtha'.toh ye sagaayi thodne ka plan Ms.Attitude ka hi tha''

Maan goes to see Annie'..

Annie apne kamre mein hi hai'.

Maan: Annie

Annie: bhai

Maan holds her hand & takes her down..

Annie is scared'

Annie: bhai, mujhe kahan le chalte hai aap?

Dadi: Maan bte, kya hua?

Maan: kuch nahi Dadi, hum abhi aathe hai

Annie: par bhai hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Maan: tujhe apne bhai pe barosa haina?

Annie: haan bhai

Maan: toh koi sawaal nahi, bas chalo mere saath

Maan takes her to Arjun'.

Ab Maan ke liye Arjun hero bangaya aur bechari Geet vamp bangayi

Arjun is surprised to see Annie'.

Arjun: Annie, tum teek toh haina?

Annie looks at Maan woh is standing behind'..

Arjun has not noticed him'..

Arjun: aap? Andar aayiye

Maan comes in'..

Annie & Arjun couldn't believe their eyes'.

Ye Maan hi haina?

Donno Maan ko hi dekhte kade hai'.

Maan: Annie, tummara choice hi hummara choice hai

Annie: bhai?

Maan: haan Annie, Arjun bahut achche insaan hai, he is perfect for you

Annie: thanks bhai

Annie goes & hugs him'.

Arjun keeps looking at her'..

Maan: Annie tum baat karke aao, mein chaltha hoon

Maan has barely turned Annie goes & hugs Arjun'.

Maan turns back''

Arjun steps back'.

Maan : woh Annie mein driver ko bhejtha hoon

Arjun: mein Annie ko drop kartha hoon

Maan smiles & leaves'..

As soon as maan leaves Annie goes & tells the story to Geet '.

Geet is very happy'.

Finally Maan bhi Maangaya?...

Sab kush hai'.

Geet: congrats Annie, aakhir tummare Maan bhai kaise maangaye

Annie: mujhe bhi patha nahi

Geet: chalo, zindagi mein pehle bar tere bhai ne apne dimag ki isstimaal ki

Annie: Geeet

Geet: shayad Dadi ne unnko samjaya, warna ab tak woh thandav karte rehte, Dust Danav

Annie: Pinky ye Meera kahan hai? Mein issko akhele nahi sambal sakthi

Just then Meera comes'.

Meera: lagtha hai mere baat ho rahi hai

Pinky: Meera Annie ke bhai ne Arjun ko accept karli

Meera: mujhe pehle hi patha hai, woh bahut achchehai

Geet: ab ye bhi aagayi toh Arjun chalo humme yahan koi kaam nahi hai

Arjun: haan Geet chalo hum apne ghar chalte hai

Annie: Arjun, tum bhi?

Geet: haan, woh hamesha sach ka saath hi detha, haina?

Arjun: you are right Geet

Annie: Meera tum toh mere saath haina?

Meera: ofcourse? Kal hummari dosthi rishta ban sakthi haina? mein toh hamesha tere saath hi hoon

Pinky: toh Annie aaj teri treat hai, haina?

Annie: done

They go out for dinner'..

Edited by ghsp2fan - 12 years ago

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