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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey guys m reallly v sorry fr updating late ..n sorry for not liking n commenting on ur posts..bt i really busy with my job n hardly find time ..but i do follow your updates regularly (some times sneak into IF thru office s wifi to read them)on my way to office via cell but wont be able to like n comment on them due to ntw prob...pls do pm me updates i would nt want to miss any of it..n pls dont feel bad if i dnt comment or like them


Chapter 15-trouble brewing in paradise

rey says"haye " & smiles at her n leaves taani blushing still more harder'she sees herself in mirror her hand unknowingly reaches the pendent she looks down towards the pendent n slowly closes her eyes cherishing the spl n precious moments which rey n she shared few mins ago..& smiles creeps on her face & her face starts turning crimson red..her heart skips beat..she feels her heart pounding by remembering all close moments with rey..when sharon enters the room and ..

sharon:taani !!taani!U guys r next jaldi chalo'

taani still lost in her sweet trance holding the pendent ..while sharon s talking to her..sharon notice s that taani s not paying any attention to her ..

sharon:taani tum sun rhi ho?? Still taani paying no heed to sharon..when sharon shakes her by holding her shoulder and yells "TAANI"

taani(shocked)OW!!shar chilla kyun rhi ho mai tumhe sun saqti ho dheere bolo..

sharon(eying taani):oh really?tum to apni sapno ki duniya mai khoyi thi n pichle panch min se bula rhi hu'aur bol rhi ho sun saqti ho!!

Taani(nervously n slyly ):sorry!!kya bol rhi thi?

Sharon(rolling her eyes):ufff mai yeh bol rhi thi ki u guys are nxt jaldi ajo neeche!!

Taani(shocked):Wt itne jaldi?? ?humara performance 2 hr ke baad tha na..ek baje..

Sharon again hits her head with palm n turns taani s head towards wall clock n says time dekho!!its 12.50..taani s shocked to core cz the last time she saw watch it was 10:50 b4 changing into her costume ..it it seemed to her like it was 10:50 few mins ago..then she realized she spend 1.5 hrs thinking abt rey n did nt realize what time it was..

Sharon :taani tunhe kya hua hai?aese paglo wali baat kyun kar rah..when her eyes fell on the pendent taani was wearing..

Sharon:taani yeh pendent??

Taani sees the pendent smiles n blushes..sharon understands every thing n thinks:acha baat itni tak badgaye ..hmmm ..when taani starts stammering (still blushing): wo..wo..wo pen..pendent..

Sharon(nt wanting taani to make feel awkward):achawo sab chodo chalo der ho rha hai ..taani s relived n says ya chalo..taani s abt to leav when sharon stops her..and goes near her n says jaane se pehle yeh kaala tika lag du..kahi kisi ki nazar na lage aj bahut sundar lag rhi ho..

Taani blushes thinking abt rey n her s tika moment..shoron s abt to put tika when she sees a tika behind taani s ear.. and smiles n wispers to taani:hmm rey kitna caring hai na..

taani dreamingly :haan wo to hai!!! realizing what sharon said wt her reply was & says..re..rey??nahi nahi to..

sharon:han rey..waise uska bas chale na to wo tumko apni bhao mai humesha humesha ke liye le le n pur duniya k nazaro se chupa kar rakhe..

taani s eyes almost pops out at this ..

sharon(teasing):aese kya dekh rhi hu sach to keh rhi hu!!ab yeh mat kehna ki tumhe nhi pata ..n tum bhi wahi cahti ho na..

Taani starts blushing..

Sharon(teasing):ab aese hi sharmati rahogi ya chalogi bhi ..nhi to rey k saat dance kaise karogi..

Taani:sharooonnn n starts chasing her..

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Its taareys turn ..taarey starts to dance on ranjha ranhja(frm raavan)..their chemistry is out of the wrld n there dance moves are breath taking..they were so passionate while dancing their eyes reflected love love n only love they were lost in each other while dancing..they forgot abt the world n were lost in their world of love.. that fr audience ,participants n judges it looked like a heavenly love stry..so perfect that that they made audiences wanting to fall in love badly..taarey made audience fall in love with love..so mesmerizing that they never wanted it to end ..finally their performance ends leaving audience yerning fr more ..

Host comes up n appreciate taarey..for their brilliant magical mesmerizing n wt nt performance..

Results are announced n taarey are declared as winners D3 team is over joyed..with judged commenting that after seeing them perform there was no point in thinking who the winner is..

Taarey are on stage to receive their trophy ..when judge makes an announcement..

Judge:this year v have decided a spl prize fr couple dance winner..every one are confused:

Judge(smiling):v r presenting the couple dance winners with a dinner at restaurant decruze.

Audience n D3 gang hoots in excitement..

Judge (smiling):he presents the coupon to taarey n have fun my darlings..taarey are looking at each other in excitement..when judge continues the restaurant s all your for a night..

Taarey and others are hell shocked:judge chuckles :oh oops I almost forgot to tell you all its romantic dinner date for these two ..audiences n D3 gang starts hooting ..when judge continues:and and and it will be all yours..decruze is booked for you two..n winks at them..taarey are blushing like hell..n caught in a cute eye lock..while people around the world watching them in awe & happy for them..except for

Some one in delhi..

Who is feeling jealous n angry by seeing them together she could sense their love care n passion..n was getting angry in anger she breaks the vase kept on table next to her..

Girl(anger n frustrated):reyaansh aur taani tumhe kya lagata hai tum logo ko apna happy ending mil jayega ?? kabhi nahi mere hote huye to kabhi nahi..kabhi nahi..bahut badi galti ki reyaansh tumne mujhe tukra kar wo wo bhi is is taani ke liye ..bahut pachtaoge tum..taani tumne yeh acha nhi kiya ..tumse to mai tumhara sab kuch cheen lungi sab kuch u ll never be happy ever again khoon ke aasu rogi tum ..aesi halat karugi ki maut ki dua mangogi har roz har pal tumhare Krishna ji se..aur ghoot ghoot ke jeeyogi har pal yeh mera tumse wada hai..reyaansh ko apna banakar hi rahugi cahiye job hi ho jaye..

Mean while in manhattan..

Some one has tear, remorse ,guilt in eyes..that persons heart is aching seeing taarey together..that person hurts self when he sees their passion n love towards each other..person is looking at a photo n creasing the face in photo with tears n pain in dark

Person:I knw ki maine tumhe bahut dukh diya hurt kiya..tumhara dil toda..bt trust me is ki saza aj bhi muhje mil rhi hai.. I m dying every min of my life coz of the greatest sin I have commited..but I do really love you from core of my heart from my soul..letting you go was the biggest mistake of my life.. (bet you guys must have guessed who it is by now)

For those who didn't .. the person is ..bingo u guys are right its taani s ex bf..Note pls I have decided to change taani s ex s name from shivam to Ritam(as I dnt wanna hurt nikki(aka nuckts) as we all know how much she likes shivam & lavin..so u guys can visualize any one as ritam apart frm lavin..

Ritam (crying):janti ho taani meri zingdagi mai sab kuch hai paisa hai shaurat hai ..jo mai humesha se cahta tha usko bhi hazil kar diya (yes guys Ritam is now a famous actor in Hollywood)har ladki mere banna cahti hai but mai mai sirf aur sirf tumhe cahta hu..sirf tumhara bana chata hu..janti ho sab ko yeh lagta hai ki m so lucky ki mere pas sab kuch hai but koi yeh nhi janta ki mai kitna lonely hu..kitne taklif mai hu..kaha nhi dundha tumhe maine ..(now possiveness and obsession taking place of love,pain)but ab jo tum mujhe mil gayi to mai tumhe apni zindagi mai wapas lakar rahunga..tum kisi aur ki nhi ho saqti tum sirf meri ho sirf meri..chaiye iske liye muhje kuch bhi karna ho.. and turns on the light smile forms his face when he sees hundreds of poster .pics n cutouts of taani s pic in his room(he has tee s,pillow cases,bed spreads ,sheets with taani s pic taani s name written on wall with his n in some pics he has morphed pics from his movies with taani s pic to make it look like she s in his arms,she is hugging him n other stuff )..he goes to a cut out of taani(in bridal attire)n kisses her lips ..wo din dur nhi jab tumhe mai asli mai kiss karunga, baho mai lunga n humesha humesha ke liye apna bana lunga ..n looks at her dreamingly then he gently rubs his left side of his chest (near heart)where he had curved or tattooed taani s name with his own hands..(kuch jayda hogya na?? bt obsessive lover kuch aese hi hote hai)

Ok m done with chap 15...how was it?i knw sab soch rhe hoge ki girl kon hai ..no worries u ll get to knw later ..

so guys how dangerous will ritam s obsession n unknwn girls hatred be to taarey??how will they face this danger?

Precap: fr chap 16

Rey shifting to taayam s house..D3 team in yatch couple s entry some romantic moments

Precap fr chap 17

Taarey s dinner date where the dangerous game of obsession revenge ,stalking begins..

Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeahhh i am first hehehee saw before your pm dear
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omg super duper awesome chapter yaar ,
loved taani lost in rey's dreamland , 😳😳😳
so cute , vo 1.5 hours tak rey ke aur taarey ke romantic moments ke baarein main sochti rahi 😳😳😆
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😉😉 , pyaar hai , haann pyaar hai 😛😛
and taarey's love was visible in their performance , 😳 , vo kehte hain na pyaar chupaye nahi chupta , 😳😳😳 , and they got couple's entry 2 restaurant and that too 4 whole night , very good ji ,
but wait ye unknown girl kaun hai ????????? 😡 i am very angry on her

and badi jaldi akal aa gayi ritam ko , 😡😡😡 , aur ab obsessive lover boy ban gaya hai hamari pyari taani ka dil todne ke baad
idiot, mad ,😡😡😡but taani to sirf rey ki hai aur hamesha rahegi
aur rey taani ka aur sirf taani haan nahi to vo apni taani ke liye sabko dishum dishum kar dega hehee😆😆😆

what an interesting twist yaar !!!!! am very excited 2 read further
loved your precap also , rey in taayam 's home 😳
even more excited ,

plz plz update soon my dear friend , plz i will be waiting 4 your update

Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
reserved yaay finally updated it
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Posted: 12 years ago
res...vil unres tmrw... 😊

unres

Taani lost in her dreamland was so cute...she lost track of time...and then Sharon teasing her was amaing😳😳😳

Taarey going on a romantic dinner date

Ritam ka toh samajh mein aata hai...Taani's ex n all...but who is that girl😡😡😡

One thing is sure she can't harm Taani as Rey will always protect her😳...but still I hv fear for both..hope all goes good...

please try n update soon😊
Edited by sashaz_sis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update loving blushy taarey ☺️ precap is damn intresting n i knw upcoming episodes r gonna b awesome..thnks fr updating 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME 👏 👏 👏

just perfect 👍🏼

PlzZZ PM me nxt tym also..!!

PlzZZ update soonn..!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
its fab. ye rey aur taani ke psycho lovers kaha se aa gaye. sabh kuch bigad denge. I hope taarey ye sab handle kar paye
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...👏👏
Loved it to the core...😳😊
Taani blushing and Sharon teasing her was superb...😳😉
Now I'm scared for TaaRey that what will happen to them...😕
But I guess it will be interesting...😊
So do update and PM me...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all thanks for updating story was damn good but official confession is yet not done before that villian's entry and that to two two poor taarey, hope all will end well


waiting for update

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