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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update. Taarey were so cute. Loved it.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update as usual loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey I read ur this story in 1 go..
its pretty awesome..

just angry on tht unknown girl n ritam
feel like killing thm

wow just luv taarey romance

plz update the next part soon n pm me as I'll b waiting 4 it
and once again n awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey bags a gr8 update...arre yaar aur probs laane se pehle taarey confession toh kara do...n ya reqst hai yeh dono villains k chakar mei taarey ko alag mat karna...plz shw sumthin lyk dey face all probs 2gedr...n bcum each odrs strength :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb diii!!😳
Taarey part sakkath aagittu!!!
Omg!!!taani was wanderin in hr dreamland fr past 1 hr???omfg!!! Inki chemistry bohot strong hai lyk covalent bond!!😆
Ya phir in dono ke mazboot jod ka karan fevicol hai!! 😆 lolz...

Bt akka next part bega update madu..peesh..peesh..peesh!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update grt chemistry now things are gonna get more interesting jaldi update
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey awesome update dear...!!!!!
really after so many days got ur story update...😃

n after reading it felt so happy...
dil main thandak pe gayi...😛

n the twists ur bringing...
i must say just mindddblowinggg...👏

now someone bck for taani...
n even ur bringing some girl for rey too...
oh poor taarey,...🥱

now have to suffer...😭😭
eagerly waiting for these two characters entry in frnt of gang n taarey...
who is the girl m thinking yaar...

eagerly n restlessly n desparately waiting for the next part...😲

do continue as soon as possible...
love u for this outstanding update...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
hwy guys m back with chap 16 ..baap re priyu ne to jaan kha li thi update ke liye so ab khush priyu(aka lovely priya)...in this chap there is a spl gift fr all swaron fans😊😳n ofcourse surprise for taarey fans(well not surprise exactlly) jisko padh ke sab ke reactions kuch ...well kudh hi padh lo...

Chapter 16-surprises..

After few days

In night around 10:30 PM dark figure is seen luring around rey house..that person is wearing a hood..by that persons physic he looks like a guy..tall,muscular guys he has a knife in his hand along with a medium sized box..he s wearing gloves..he is hiding from rey s watchman..he sees here and there to see no one s watching him ..he goes towards rey room n opens his rooms window with help of knife without making even slightest noise..he peeps in slowly n climbs the window n enters rey s room.its dark n damp in rey s .he tip toes to reys bed..n knife pointed towards rey s bed ..he s slowly moving towards reys bed when he accidently bumps into table near him n vase kept on it falls down..he hears someone walking towards room..hooded figures heart stops beating ..he looks here n there to find a place to hide..and hide behind the couch in rey s room..then lights are turned on he slowly peeps out from his hiding place to see rey with confused expression n rey comes in..searching for source of sound..rey sees the vase on floor n open window he s shocked ..thinking he must have left the window open n due to wind vase must have fallen down he walks towards the door to go out..when he remembers he has left his phone near couch ..he moves towards couch..the hooded fig is scared n sweating hard..he stoops low to hide himself..he is almost visible.. when rey s near the couch & about to turn towards the place where hooded fig is hiding he hears sharon call him n rey takes his phone in haste n moves out'hooded guy breaths a sign o relief..n that guy moves towards reys door when he hears rey

Rey(to kaka)-kaka!!mai do din ke liye swayam ke yaha rukne wala hu..aap apna khayal rkho..

Kaka:thik hai rey baba..par aap bhi yaha nhi ho mera man nhi lagega mai bhi apne native ja ke ata hu

Rey(smiles):thik hai kaka aram se ana ..chalo mai nikal ta hu..n leaves with sharon

Hooded guy is staring at rey n watching him & sharon go..he s disappointed ..he then feels something move n making noise inside box..he simles to himself and he moves towards window n goes out..then he opens the box packing with help knife n empties the content of box in reys room ..without touching those creatures..n sees those creatures crawl towards reys bed..

He closes the window n smiles to himself" ab toh kaam ho hi jayega!!bas do din aur!! ab kya karoge rey!!" and leaves from there(ab sochte raho ki kya hone wala hai aur sir phodo apna'n ja ke mentos kho kisko pata tumhare dimag ki baati jaljaye!!!! Areyyy ab gussa karoge to no fayda harm to tumhare pc ko hi hoga na!)

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Mean while at taayam s house..taani s pacing up n down waiting for someone ..so is oli..suddenly she hears door bell.excited she goes to open..when she opens the door she s shocked!!to see swayam ..stopping him near door

Taani:bha'bhai ..a..aap??

Swayam(confused & looking at her suspiciously):haan!! Mai kyn kisi aur ko expect kar rhi thi kya?ab andar ane bhi dogi ya nhi

Taani moves aside n lets swayam in..taani:na..na ..nahi bhai ..wo aap it..itne jaldi?kya aap ko wo mila jo maine mangwaya tha

Swayam(handing taani a packet):haan wo ice cream milgayi tumhari coffee almond chocolate cookie chip flavor ki.. so agya ..ab to khush?? pata nhi tumko aese flavors hi kyun pasand hai jo milne ko mushkil hote hai..

Taani(nervously smiles):n hugs him :thnx bhai ..

Swayam:ab khogi nhi?

Taani ha..haan bhai n puts ice cream in bowl for him n her ..n both starts eating..taani finishes her icecream soon hoping swayam ll finish his ice cream soon bt swayam s eating it slowly enjoying every bit of it..where as taani s getting impatient..finally after 10 mins swayam finishes his ice cream..n is watching tv

Taani:chalo bhai 11:30 hogya ja ke so jao..

Swayam not in mood to go to bed:baby doll tum so jao ..mai bad mai sounga yeh ek movie dekh ke.which had just started ..

Taani(herself):hey krishnaji yeh movie to aur 2 hr chalegi..kya karu ??hhan !!sme thing clicks in taanis head n she slowly goes to store room where fuse is situated n pulls out the fuse..n light goes..she could hear swayam..swayam lighting candle n taani comes out acting surprised

Swayam:oh teri pwer ko bhi abhi jana tha? N baby doll thoda invertor on kardo

Taani:bhai inverter kharab hogya h..

Swayam:thik hai kaka ko bol ke generator on karwa do..

Taani:bhai generator mai kachara bhar gaya h..

Swayam:ajeeb baat hai ruko mai dekhta hu..

Taani:nah..nahi bhai itni raat ko aur itni andere mai?kal subhe dekh lena..chalo ab so jao.. n starts pushing him towards his room..

Swayam:pa..par baby doll..

Taani:par var kuch nhi!!ap ja k so jao n pushes swayam inside the bed n closes the door n breaths the sign of relif..after some time she checks on swayam n he s fast asleep ..n taani fixes the fuse..then she goes to her room n is making calls ..when she feels gentle knock on her window she pulls the curtains n is shocked to see rey hanging on pipe her room is on 1st floor..rey has letme in expression

Taani:aap yaha aese kyun latak rhe ho?aur baki sab kaha h

Rey(sarcastic way):mai to bandar hu na isliye..

Taani(confused):huh?

Rey(rolling eyes):huh kya kar rhi ho upar kheecho mujhe..

Taani gives oh yes expression..n takes his hand n pulls him up inside..resulting taani too fall with rey on top of her..both are lost in each others eyes ..rey moves towards taani face ..hair s falling on her face he slowly brushes hairs off frm her face n sees his angels face n unknowingly says beautiful..taani s shocked n replies huh??

Rey:you..taani blushes n both are lost in hhll moment when small stone comes flying from window n hits reys head causing a bump on his head..rey is about to yell when taani closes his mouth with her hand..n both are lost in a eyelock again..after some time one more stone comes flying in n hits reys shoulder now rey s v angry he gets up n moves towards window in anger is near window.. again a small stone flies in n hits rey on his fore head ..rey(in anger):hey!! N sees gang..with nil n vicky having stones in their hand with Vicky:dekha mera dur gaya..nil:nahi mera..suddenly they hear n see rey in anger n they drop the stones n nods their head n points at each other..rey staring at them in anger..

When sharon actions him to open the door..rey nods n he n taani opens the door gang tiptoes n sharon asks wispering:swyam kaha h?..

Taani:wo so rhe hai..badi mushkil se sulaya unhe..aap sab saman lekar aye ho na..

Gang shows huge bags ..n they get to their work..

At 12 ..swayam is wakes up with a jerk after hearing taani scream,,he is scared n rushes out calling taani s name ..he is in hall where he hears taani call bhai again faintly he s scared :Baby doll kaha ho?tum thik ho na ..kya hua.. n in hurryturns on the lights to see the hall decorated he s shocked to see hall decorated n smiling faces of gang n taani n sharon..all are wearing party hats ..even oli also..n all start to sing happy bday to u with oli barking in tune..

Swayam is happy to see this..n hugs them..soon they cut the cake n n swayam feeds every one starting with sharon..bth have a brief hhll moment..later the gang dances,does all kind of masti &starts playing with cake(cake fight) after some time they clean up n starts to give their gift to swayam..sharon is left when simmi asks tumhara gift kaha h?

Sharon starts blushing ..wo ..wo mai..

Rinni:wo kya sharon kya tum koi gift nhi layi?

Sharon(blushing):haan layi hu..

Neha:to give na!!

Sharon removes a small packet n gives it to swayam..

Swayam(looks at it like a small kid looking at his gift his eyes are shining with curiosity):kya hai ismai?

Sharon :khol ke dekho

Swayam carefully wnwraps the gift n he s shocked to see a white handkerchief with "swaron" beautifully embroidried on it with red n golden threads with small hearts on one corner..he looks at sharon with shocked n surprised expression where as sharon blushes..then he sees a woolen muffler beautifully woven ..he is in awe!!!last bt not the least he sees a scroll made up of silk cloth..he opens to see his n sharons pic on it with words embroidried on it

"How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height my soul can reach. "

He looks for sharon with a diifrent spark in his eyes . to see she s already on her knee..holding a hand made Plaster of paris heart that was covered with shiny red stones on it..and

Sharon:my heart truly belongs to you..no matter how much I tried to deny & supress my feelings for you they turned more n more strong..that if I had to choose between loving you or breathing I would choose to say "I love you " in my last breath!!

Swayam s spell bounded n well others are shocked!!!every one s mouth s hanging down eyes are almost popping out ..poor oli had big piece of cake in his mouth when sharon proposed swayam n he immedietly dropped it due to shock.(he s defo gonna regret fr droping cake later .)

Swayam s eyes softens n a smile forms on his face.

Sharon:I know ki ur my mr right or not..i dnt know ki v r ment to be together or not..i don't know if I m worthy you or not .. but all I know is you mr swayam shekawat completes me ,my soul,my heart. And I need you And I would prefer not living rather than being incomplete without you!!!.so mr swayam shekawat do you accept me sharon raiprakash as your lawful n official girl friend and bear all her madness ,attitude n stupidy for the life time?

Swayam(in serious tone):NO!!! every one are shocked ..NO ms sharon raiprakash I dnt accept you as my girlfriend for my life time..sharon has tear in her eyes she looks down ..when swayam holds her by her shoulder n makes her face him looks in her eyes and" no sharon I don't want u as my gf till the end but I want u to be more then that..i want you to be by side all the way till I die side by side as mother to my children,as grand mother to my grand children(sharon blushes) as daughter for my parents ,as bhabhi for my baby doll,loving aunt for my baby doll & her Prince s babies(he says this seeing rey ..taani blushes n rey s jealous thinking abt who ll be taani prince rey :mai hi taani ka prince,charmer,cuties sweetie hu ..kisi aur ne agar taani k saat shadi karne ka socha bhi to aesa haal karunga ki ki(confused ki???) haan ja ke ladke se shadi kar lega n smiling )..and as a lover and wife to me(sharons face s tomato red)..and hugs each other .. bth are lost in HHLL..

After some time they are out of their trance with gang aweing!!!sharon(meekly):so I ll take it as yes???? Gang starts laughing

Vicky:yeh lo swayam ne bache,grand bacho ka yaha taak taani aur Cough!!cough!!(indicating rey where as taarey blushes rey ko to abhi se apni aur taani ki shenai ki gunj sunai de rahi h.. ) bacho ka bhi plan bana diya n tum abhi bhi puch rhi?? Sharon looks at them innocently

When gang:HE SAID YES!!!! N sharon blushes n hides her face in swayam s chest..

Precap:party at yatch..ultra romantic moments btw taarey n swaron n others..full dhamal masti..n wt s there in rey s room will be reveled(if I m n good mood to revel it😆janti hu kamini hu ek no ki😃)


AHEM !!toodles guys yeh update padhke paaka priyu(lovely priya) and may be others mere ko kacha chaba jayegi ..ab is se pehle scraps n fb pe msgs ka barsat hoga priyu ki taraf se ...so hastala vista..sayonara..till i update nxt part ..tab tak ke liye

n mentos kho dimag ki bati jalo 😉🤪🥱

jane se pehle ek gaana

"dimag mai hai apni utpatan se idea ..duniya ko kar de pagal hum bhaiya..sukh dukh taarey ke liye hum bate..badhe ideas hum sab ko sunaye ..areee nache hai hum ta ta thai ya!!are hum to aese hai bhaiya ...yeh apna fashion hai bhaiya areyyy hum to aese hai bhaiyaaa...😃😉

Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yu finally updated...Rey ko stones maar rahe the 😆 Nil n Vicky gosh 😆 Anyway update soon waiting for yatch romance n Rey's room 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Resss!!!
Ayyo..am. Late..😔.
Niways kal ubres karungi..😊
Lazy me..u noe na..😆

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