Pyar Ki ye ek kahani-KR FF Thread 1 - Page 41

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Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

Part 1

After So Many Years...

In Mumbai:-

Scene of a beautiful house :-GHAI MANSION

Inside the House

All are busy in some preparations hey wait ! what type of preparations kahi kisi ki shaddi toh nhi hai...?...well abhi toh kisi ki nhi hai par jaldi ho sakti hai...kiski...?aur kiski humari kria ji ki...humaro kria ji ko ladke wale dekhne aa rhe hai aur unhi k swagat ki tayariyan chal rhi hai...chali andar chalke dekhte hai sab kaam thik bhi ho rhe hai nhi...

Man:Smriti ,kria uthi ki nhi...

Smriti:ha shashank abhi dekhti hu...

(Shashank & Smriti Ghai:Parents of kria, Shashank is the Dean In the Hospital SANJEEVNI and well known reputated Surgeon while Smriti is a house wife & a good mother ,they both love their kids sooo much...)

Shashank:kya kar rhi ho,ladke wale aate hi honge...jaldi karo..

Girl:chill dad abhi bohot time hai...

Smriti:neha,

(neha Vikramjeet Singh:neha is good looking & a hard working doctor,she is the elder daughter of Shashank Smriti,2 minutes elder & most loving sister of kria & a loving wife of Dr.Vikramjeet Singh and she works in mumbai sanjeevni as a post of senior doctor)

Smriti :tumhare dad ko toh faltu main tension lele ki aadat hai

Shashank:ha hai kyonki tum log jo tension nhi lete aur is baat se mujhe tension hoti hai...are ha neha Vicky (vikramjeet)hospital se nikla ki nhi nhi...?

Neha:nikal hi gye honge dad...wo apne saurjee k orders thodi na taalege

Voice :(from door)Bilkul shi kahan tumne ,(while entering the house)main papa k orders kabhi taal sakta hoon

An,S&P:bilkul nhi Viky

(Dr.Vikramjeet Singh:Husband of neha , a good friend of kria and also works as a senior doctor in mumbai sanjeevni)

(Vicky come near S&S and touch their feets to take their blessings and goes near the neha and)

Vicky:acha neha meri pyari si saali kahan hai...?

Neha:aur kahan hogi abhi tak so rhi hai

Shashank:neha beta jaldi se jao aur uthao kria ko...aur vicky tum mere saath aao...

V&N:jii Dad/papa

In Kria's Room

Neha:(while entering in the room)kriya tu uthi ki(seeing kria sleeping peacefully & her face is covered with blanket)nhi ye lo ye madam toh abhi tak so rhi hai mom dad toh kaam main busy hai ab mujhe hi ise uthana padega par kaise uthau...(thinking)...idea...

(Nehai goes to the bed and sit beside her and whispers in her ears)

Neha:(whispers)Dr keerti...

(Dr keerti is d desciplarian and a senior doctor of mumbai sanjeevni she is also senior from kriya Vicky & neha)(ok guyz aap soch rhe hoge yahan kria ko uthane k liye dr keerti ka naam kyo liya well dr keerti ko unke juniors hitler naam se bhi bulate hai aur hitler ka naam sunke toh koi bhi apni

pyari si neend se uth jaayeega na)

kria wake up with jerk

(kriia Ghai(__):She is beautiful ,cute ,sweet & a pure hearted girl .she's the younger and lovely daughter of ShashankSmriti , sister of neha,and a good friend of vicky...She also work as a senior doctor in mumbai sanjeevni withneha and vicky)

Kria :kahan hai kahan hai

Neha laught at her sister's act

Kria : neha(irritatingly),tu bhi na...pause...subha subha kyo uthaya..

Neha control her laugh and

neha:Dr.Kriya Ghai subha k 12 baj rhe hai aur aap shayad bhul gyi hai ki aaj aapko ladke wale dekhne aa rhe hai toh aap jaldi se tayaar ho jaaiye

kriai(making face):yaad hai aur ho rhi hu tayyar...tu ja niche main thodi der main aati

Neha:(smilingly)ok...jaldi se aaja

neha smiles back and neha leaves

and kria sits properly on bed

kria(in mind):kitne saal ho gye hai elite ko chode Rey se bichde hue...bichde hue hum toh kabhi mile hi nhi jo bichdege...ye kaisa ehsaas hai mera rey ki liye jiska koi vajoot nhi hai jiska koi matlab hi nhi hai (getup frm bed and)bas ab aur nhi is faltu k ehsaas k liye main papa ko aur sharminda nhi karungi pehle bhi main bohot se rishte mana kar k papa ko sharminda kar chuki ab aur nhi (goes towards window)waise bhi is baar toh rishta papa k frnd k beta ka aaya hai toh acha hi hoga...agar ladka mujhe pasand aaya toh abhi ha toh nhi par ladke ko jaanne ki koshish jarur karungi...(look at the time and)(to herself):oh shit jaldi kar kria(in hurry pick up her towel) late ho gyi toh ma papa bohot daantege...

Scene 2

Scene of a very beautiful & big bunglow THE SINGHANIA's

Lets go inside the bunglow...its so beautiful there are so many beautifull paintings on the wall & and beautiful but not so young lady come outside from her room and wearing cream color net saree & diamond jewellery and goes near the man who sits on the sofa and reading some files...

Lady:Raj,main kaisi lag rhi hu...

Raj stands and hold the lady's hand...

raj:Ani(Ananya)You looks beautifull...as always (ani blushes & whispers)Ani:thanks

(Raj & Ananya Singhania:raj is a well known Business man & the owner of SINGHANIA EMPIRES while Ananya is wife of raj & a partner in Singhania Empires )

Voice:Ehem Ehem (voice comes from the door of the another room ,a man wearing blue fadded jeans blue ts & a black blazer and looks handsome and his eyes is closed and covered with his one hand for not to see raj ani romance)aap logon ka romane khatam ho gya ho toh main apni aankhein kholun...

Raj:ullu k patte kya timings hai teri

Ani:raj(scolded him)

Ani:swaya, bete apni aankhein khol le..

Swayam:thanks mom...

(Swayam Singhnaia:Younger son of RajAni and a senior doctor in USA Sanjeevni but now in mumbai Sanjeevni)

Ani:sam ja dekh kar aa tera bhai tayaar hua hai k nhi...

Swayam:I m sure mom wo apna PSP khel raha hoga...

Ani:ha jaanti hu isliye tujhe bhej rhi uske paas ja use bol hume der ho rhi hai

Swayam:ok mom (he leaves)

In Swyam's brother Room:

The room is full messy (bachelor guy ka room hai toh messy toh hoga hi ...whats new...?)and a guyis sitting on the beam bag & his back facing sam & jaise ki sam ne apni apni mom ko kahan tha uska bhai PSP khelne main hi busy hoga aur wo shi nikla this guy is so busy is playing PSP so sam didn't disturb him coz he knw if he did....(wo mujhe nhi chodega (sam in mind))par uski mom k orders bhi the so he waits for some time and

Sam:rey

(Reyansh Singhania(__):yes,he is d same rey of elite and kria's first crush...he's the elder son of RajAni ,elder brother cum best frnd of Swyam &was a senior Doctor in USA Sanjeevni but now in Mumbai Sanjeevni)

(He stands from the beam back and faces sam with a broad smile bcoz he won the game )(He wearing black vest and black payjamas & he had a muscular body'girls go gaga over him)

Rey:sam I won the game...(goes towards sam and hugs him)

Sam:(smiles)I knw buddy...no one beats u...

Rey(smiles):I knw no one beats me...

Sam(expression change):rey tu abhi tak tayaar nhi hua...dad k frnd k gar jaana hai...(teasingliny voice)...tere liye ladki dekhne...

Rey(expression change happy to sad):sam tu jaanta hai main shaddi nhi karna chahta...

Sam(serious expression):jaanta hu aur ye bhi jaanta hu kyo...pause...grow up buddy...tujhe elite chode saalon ho gye hai aur tu abhi bhi us ladki k baare main sochta hai...pause...look buddy...sochna galat nhi hai wo tera pehla crush thi aur pehla crush humesha sabko yaad rehta hai...par us faltu se crush k liye apni life waste karna its not good...apne baare main nhi mom dad k baare main toh soch wo tujhe settle dekhna chahte hai and for my sake us ladki k baare main sochna chod de isse sirf tujhe beeti baate yaad hi aayegi ki tune kabhi apni feelings k baare main use nhi bataya...aur tujhe aur dukh hoga...

Rey:tu shi kehra hai mere bhai...maine kabhi bhi apni feelings k baare main use nhi bataya...aur is baat k liye apni l;ife waste nhi kar sakta mom dad ko dukhi nhi kar sakta...sam maine faisla le liya hai...is baar main rishte k liye mana nhi karunga...agar ladki pasand aayi toh ha kardunga... use bhulana aasan toh nhi hai par try jaroor karunga...(they both hugs)

Kriyansh ek hi time ek hi halat se gujar rhe hai aur wo hai kaise ek dusre ko kaise bhulaya jaaye par unhe kya pata wo toh ek dusre k liye ek dusre ko hi bhulana ki koshish kar rhe hai... jis kismat ne unhe dur kiya tha wo kismat hi unhe milane ki saajish kar rhi hai...

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Plz do LIKe & comment

And ha I don't want only word comment

Agar one word comment karma hai toh there's no need to comment

aur agar mujhe comment na mile toh...I'll stop writing

now the decision is yours...

Ok bye t.c

kriti

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

Part 2

In Ghai House

All are waiting for the singhanias and then door bell rings...

Shashank:lagta hai aa gye...

(neha,smriti & Shashank goes towards the door & Shashank open it)

Raj:Shanky...my friend...

Shashank:Billy...(two frinds hugs each other tightly)

(raj comes out from the hug &

Raj:smriti bhabhi kaisi hai aap

Smriti:main bilkul theek hu aap kaise hai bhaisahab

(raj dramatically touch his heart &)

Raj:Bhai sahab mat boliye na yahan dukhta hai

(all laughs..)

Shashank:raj tu bilkul nhi badla

Raj:ha toh tum dono kahan badle ho ...(look towards smriti nd)wahi sundar meri bhabhi...(look towards shashank)wahi sadu mera dost...(all laughs again)

Ani:smriti...(and the two friends hugs each other lovingly)(both came out from the hug)

smriti:Ani...kaisi ho tum...???

Ani:main bilkul thik hu aur aap dono kaise hai...??

Shashank:bilkul fit & fine...are bacho ko toh milao bache toh ek dusro ko jaante bhi nhi hai...

(Rey,Swayam & neha meet with each other & greet their elders)

Smriti:ab puri shaam yahi bitani hai ya andar bhi chalna hai...chaliye andar...

Raj:...ha ha chalo...

(All sits comfortably on sofa & then vickyenters in living area)

Shashank:ye lo, Vicky bhi aa gya...

(rey look towards vicky &)

Rey(happily):vicky...tu...

Vicky:Reeeyyy...mere bhai...(both hug each other)

Ani:vicky beta kaise ho...

Vicky:main thik hu aunty'aur sam kaisa hai yaar'.(and then he hugs swayam)

Sam :main toh bilkul theek hoon dost'.

Shashank:aap log vicky ko kaise jaante hai...?

Rey:uncle...vicky musoorie main humara neighbour tha...

Billy:par vicky tum yahan...?

Shashank:Raj...vicky mera damad hai my son-in-law nd neha's husband...

Rey:vicky tune shaddi bhi kar li aur apne bhai ko bataya bhi nhi...(shows fake anger)

Vicky:rey mere bhai sab itni jaldi hua aur main tujhe kaise batata ...mere paas tera address ya phn no. kuch nhi tha...

rey:chal kuch nhi hota...maaf kiya...(smiles)

Rey:toh neha main aapko kya bulau...neha ya bhabhi...

Neha:only neha

Rey:ohk...neha...

Raj:ab aap logo ka milna khatam ho gya ho toh hum bhi apni hone wali bahu se mil le...kyo shanky...?

Shashank:ha ha ...kyo nhi...neha...

Neha: ji dad main abhi use ko lekar aayi...(nd she leaves)

After 5 minutes

Neha & kriya enters in living area all looks towards kria except rey he is looking towards floor...

(kria wears a purple chooridar match with rey's shirt...plain duppata wears around her neck...purple & silver stones jhumkas in ears with light makeup & she's looking simply beautiful)

Kria greets rey parents and sits opposite to rey with rey's mom without looking towards rey

Ani:smriti...hume tumhari beti bohot pasand aai...tumhe kaisi lagi kria... rey...

(listen their names they look at each other &)

R & K(in shock):TUM...

(ok guyz kriyansh ek dusre se pehle mil chuke hai elite main nhi aaj ki hi subha BB court main)(ab aap soch rhe honge kria ki entry toh sote hue hui thi fir wo subha BB cout main actually kria daily morning main jogging k liye jaati hai aur wahi par wo rey se mili ab kaise mli wo hum flashback main dekhte hai)

************FLASHBACK************

kria jogging karte hue apne shoelace khula dekhti hai aur apne shoelace ki tie karne k liye BB court k stairs par baith jaati hai aur waha ek ball uske head par hit karti hai piche mudke dekhti hai toh waha rey kuch bacho k saath hota...

Rey (with full attitude):hey bulls eye(indicates her angry big eyes) may i hve a ball plzz...

Kriya stand up and go towards rey

Kria (attitude):tumhari hai...

Rey:well...itna acha BB yahan par mere ilawa aur kon khel sakta hai...

kria:bohot SMART samajhte ho apne aap ko'dekho tum jaise ladko ko main ache se jaanti hoon'.jahan khoobsoorat ladki dekhi nhi'wahan apni smartness dikhakar use impress karne chale'but MR. hey tumhare tactics mere upar nhi challenge samjhe'

Rey :hey hey hang on girl''kitna bolti hoon tum'mujhe bolne ka moka hi nhi de rhi u r such a baatcutter'.(and she saw him angry eyes)

(and theen her cell rings and she turns to leave)

Rey :hey baatcutter ek match ho jaaye'.

Kria;(she look towards him )NO

Rey :kyo dar gyi'.waise khelna na aata ho toh main seekha bhi sakta hoon'.I'm a good instructor u know'.

Kria :mujhe abhi late ho rha hai'warna tumhari akad ko is basket k sath basket kar deti'.

Rey :waise baatcutter'tum sirf baate karma janti hoon'ya kuch karma bhi aata hai'.

Now kria is super angry'she go towards him and take the ball from his band'bounce it'.and basket the baat'.without facing the basket'

Rey:waise ye game akele nhi khela jaata 5-5 wht say...?

kria: done

(they starts the game and with score 3-3 , kria cell phn's again rings)

Kria:tumhe kisi aur din harana padega...abhi mujhe late ho rha hai...(& she move towards exit)

rey:hey baatcutter apna naam toh batati jao...

kria gave him a glare and moves on...

*********FLASHBACK ENDS*********

Neha (confused):guyz tum dono ek dusre ko jaante ho...

Kria:nhi neha jaanti nhi hu...bas aaj BB court main mile the...

rey:ya aur humne basket ball bhi khela tha...

neha:ohk...so...who wins...?

rey:ty...

(kria gives him a anger look)

raj (cutshort both):shanky mujhe lagta hai...dono ko akele main baat kar leni chaiye...akhir faisla toh dono ne hi lena hai...

Shashank:ya right...neha...dono ko terrace tak chod aao...

neha:ji dad...come rey & kria

ok guyz I think its enough for part 3...I hope u like it...press like button...nd leave ur lovely comments...

next update on page 95

kriti...

Precap:Kriyansh alone on terrace ,Kriyansh conversation...& kriyansh decision about marriage

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

hey guyz...

I'm here again with my new story...

but something is new in this story...

is main kriyansh and gang colg. students nhi DOCTORS hai...

soo haw may of u want to see kriyansh and our whole gand as doctor...

this story's environment will be same like DMG

thodi masti thoda pyar thoda dance thodi dosti

so are u all exited for this story

should I cont. or not...????

kriti <3

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