~Eternal Flame SS~ Rajeev/ViSu/MuRat Part 2 pg 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

khushi :

cant believe this yaar, tu bhi supernaturals par story likh rahi hai😲 ?? anywayz, since it's your SS, i bet it will be good. gone through the CS, all are good enough. but i'm more interested in the story, so update soon.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: polly_03
khushi :

cant believe this yaar, tu bhi supernaturals par story likh rahi hai😲 ?? anywayz, since it's your SS, i bet it will be good. gone through the CS, all are good enough. but i'm more interested in the story, so update soon.😊

supernatural its my fav topic ❤️

thnx😉

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Khushi Grover

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Posted: 12 years ago

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part 1 next page😊

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#44

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Part 1

A village between near dehradun, dark night, a cottage...

A woman was lying on mat, her hands n legs were tied tightly by ropes, she was crying n shouting out of pain,
thr were lots of ppl gathered arnd cottage but no one is daring to step inside,
sum of them were really scared, her husband was trying to go inside,
the lady was pregnant with 3 months, he can't bear her pain but her parents n other villagers dnt allowing him to step inside,
from inside the cottage is a mess, utensils, etc are here n there.

After few hours of chaos, a car stops, villagers stands, joining thr hands, looking towards car.

A long man aroud 35-40 years, in black clothes (pants n shirt) with gud physique, wearing glasses, intense looks, fire in eyes, came out of the car, he was AASHIF, the soul controller n gr8 tantrik.

The woman's husband ran towards him n go down on his knees n touches his feet n says,

Man: Please save my wife n child, only u can do it.

Aashif make him stand n smiles while wiping his tears, n says...

A: Jo log allah k bande hote h wo kabhi apna sabr nahi khote.

He moves towards cottage, opens the door n step inside, as he step inside the cry of the woman stop for a moment,
he ask his assistant rehmaan to step inside n close the door,
the door closed.

Woman luk towards aashif, she was not herself,
sum bad soul has captured her body n hurting her,
her eyes was changing colour, blue, green, red, etc.

A: Who are you?

The women dnt reply.
Aashif ask thrice but she dnt reply, he slowly move towards her,
removes his glasses n luk straight into her eyes for few seconds n then close his eyes.
As he close his eyes the woman cried loudly, aashif's eyes are still closed...

Woman/soul: Leave me please.

A(with close eyes) : When i ask ur intro u dnt reply me n now u r asking me to leave u so easily.

Woman/Soul: I beg u please open ur eyes n free me, its burning inside.

Aashif smiles: You have captured an innocent woman who has a small life inside, do you know how much it pains her.

Soul/Woman: Its not my fault, m here to give you a message.

Hearing this aashif open his eyes, he was surprised, as he open his eyes the soul gets free
n it leaves the woman's body but it can't step outside as the cottage was bounded with mantras rehmaan was countinuosly chanting.

A: Message? Which message? And who sent you here?

Soul: Get ready, he's cuming to capture you.

Aashif was surprised, rehmaan stops chanting as he hear it,
the soul try to move but aashif moves his hand in its direction
n tightly close his hand, the soul was not able to move.

A: Who want to capture me?

The soul make a symbol on wall

Aashif takes a knife n make a small cut on his hand which was closed,
the soul shouted "NO" loudly n vanished, aashif taken the souls power n set it free,
he looks deeply to that symbol n try to understand its meaning,
all focus goes to that symbol.

After 30 years, Dehradun, Dark room in a big house(Khan Mansion),
a 27 year old man, looks r same as aashif, intense eyes with fire inside,
calmness on face, gud physique.

He was reading a diary n looking the same symbol,
Rehmaan calls him.

R: Aamir beta, khana lag gya h.
He turns n gave a sweet smile, which can soothe pains...

Aamir, aashif's eldest son, he's just like his father.

Amir: Chota aa gya kya?

R: nhi amaan baba abi tak nahi aye.

Amir: phone kijiye use, hum chote k sath hi khayenge.

R: Ji.

Rehmaan goes to call amaan, aashif's youngest son, just opposite of aamir,
naughty, rebellious, couldn't control his anger but luves his brother like anything, do anything at his one call.

Rehman dialed the number... a phone was ringing on other side but no one is picking it, thr was loud music playing in a house, a party was going on...

Lots of college going galz n boyz are there, amaan heard his phone ringing n he picks it ...

Amaan : hello

R: Chote baba, aamir aapka wait kar rahe h khane pe , unhone kaha vo aapke saath hi khayenge

Amaan: unko boliye main bas yun aaya

Phone disconnected...

Amaan: ok guyz i gtg, bhaijaan waiting for me ...

Crowd: no amaan ... aise nahi u hv promised to sing that song ...

Plz plz plz

Thy requested him a lot ...

He took the guitar n start singing ...

Turn on your speakers

Back ground

Rab bande di zaat iko...
jive Kapde di zaat hai ruuhhh
kapde de which uuh hai lukiya
kapde de which ruh ruh lukiya
kite which bande de tuu
aape bole aap bulanve...
aape bole aap bulanve
aape bole aap bulanve
aape kare hu hu...

Amaan singzzz

Tu mane ya na mane dildara
asan te tenu rab maniya
tu mane ya na mane dildara
asan te tenu rab maniya
{{das hor kera rab da dwara
das hor kera rab da dwara
asan te tenu rab maniya
tu mane ya na mane dildara
asan te tenu rab maniya }} X 2

Every1 njoying his song ...

A girl : Everytime amaan sings this song... m sure he loves his girlfriend very much

Amaan's frnd : no , he's single

Girl : wat ? 😲 phir ye ganna

Frnd : he loves his brother like god, aamir bhaijaan is everything to him

Song continuing in back ground ...

At khan mansion ...

Aamir loking at aashif's n sadia's pic on wall...

{{tujh bin jeena bhi kya jeena
tere chaukhat mera medina}} X 3
kahi or na sajda gwara
asan te tenu rab manya
das hor kera rab da dwara
das hor kera rab da dwara
asan te tenu rab maniya
tu mane ya na mane dildara
asan te tenu rab maniya

Tears cum in aamir's eyes ...

In the party

Amaan...

hasde hasde har ghum sehna
ha ha hasde ho..
hasde hasde har ghum hai sehna
raazi teri raza mein rehna
tune mujhko sikhaya hai yaara
asan te tenu rab maniya
tu mane ya na mane dildara
asan te tenu rab maniya
das hor kera rab da dwara
das hor kera rab da dwara
asan te tenu rab maniya
tu mane ya na mane dildara
{{asan te tenu rab maniya}} X 3

Precap : Brothers Secret Meeting

Edited by Amor. - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

bharti mein bhi is ka hasa banna chahti hoon pls dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

bharti yar mera naam bhi is mein add karna ok 😳

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Khushi Grover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Part 1 posted :)
srry for delay

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Priya Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Maza aa gya pd kr
kya mst ud thi 😉
mujhe to aisi stories bhut psnd h
man u r amazing di
like da way u describe abt aashif n soul
u know di mere gaon me bhi ek women pr aise hi soul aati h
maine kbi dekha to nhi h
bt mom dad se suna h

ye sign mujhe mst laging
dhasu 👍🏼

bade bhaijaan to bhut shant h 😉
m to chote pr aati hu 😛

haye kinna mst laging 😳
kitna cute h :*
sb apni gf k liye gana gate h
or ye apne bhai k liye 😊
koi ni koi ni gf k liye bhi gayega 😆

vo bhi aa rhi h 😉

di ab to bs yhi wali update kro
vo bhi jaldi jaldi

want to read more

ye mere type ki story h
super thrilling
kya dhasu ud h vo bhi 1s ud
luv it

bt mujhe punjabi song kam smj aaya :/
bhut thoda thoda

btw luv it
luv u 🤗

Edited by princesspriyart - 12 years ago

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