(ArHi) Arranged Marriage #4 Thread5 Link Added pg1

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#851

Omg arnav confused
now hat is this jerk going to do.

I hope he dnt make blunder...i really dnt wnt this trip to end like this plzzz.

Continue soon plzzz cnt wait for next update wnt next update till weekend plzzz pretty plz wid cherry on top

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dqkytm

@dqkytm

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#852

loved the update! :)

loved the way you described what Arnav is going through! cant wait to see what he does next!! update soon please

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asdfgh456

@asdfgh456

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#853

I loved how you showed arnavs inner turmoil, and how his mind is working. Slowly khushi is chipping away at his defences and bad habits!
The part where you mentioned he put his trust in anjali was great, it had a sense of foreboding and already has me in suspence!
Great update, can't wait for the next :) x

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#854

Perfect description of ASR... Very wonderfully written... It made me think about asr during the initial days of IPKKND... I can't wait to read what he is going to do to earn her forgiveness... I am loving it and thank u.. pls update quick. .

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#855

not that he didn't learn one fo life's important lessons, he misunderstood it. people who have gone thru extremes in their life do place an emphasis on money but rather than realizing that money is only a means to an end, he misunderstood it to be the end itself.

interesting that the only thing he could focus on was an apology uttered unintentionally.

was it even heartfelt?

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#856

Great update loved how you wrote Arnavs conflict pleased he wants her forgiveness hope Aman is able to plan something that may start working for them

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mssj

@mssj

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#857

that was an amazing update on Arnav's POV.

its very well written.

and ty for the fast update.

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desisoaps05

@desisoaps05

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#858

ajhfaksjdhfasdfjsadf;lksdf;lk this relationship is so dysfunctional :(

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#859

Could catch the last 5 chapters now only...Wow...Your Khushi has risen lke a phoenix bird from its ashes...I loved Arnav's POV.He is guilty and can feel a metamorphosis in Arnav's character...love the way you deal with their emotions.It is not easy to write these chapters because the emotions taKe a toll on the author when she expresses it...Being another virgo, I can really see the love you pour in each words...So dear,I would say GREAT GOING👍🏼