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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

Oh my, ur on a roll K!! I must say I'm loving the fact that ur finally giving attention & focus to this story, as it is one marvellous one!!

Loved all the updates, finally Khushi's outburst :)

Hope to see another update soonish :)

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

ohhh...the chapter ended too soon for me.loved the insight on arnav...great piece of work please do continue

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amritab

@amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

I've always thought of Arnav as a sum of parts - loss of his mother + determination to succeed + pride + money - all of these distinct parts/motivations making up a whole man; what this chapter did was sort of tie-in why one part affects the other. I preferred the second part of the chapter to the first - when Arnav is reflecting on Khushi, on his reaction and his apology - it somehow made him so much more human. All of us fear - it's how one addresses/fights the fear that defines the person. I can't help but chuckle that he chose to call Aman - the businessman is back in action, trying to cut his losses perhaps?

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cherry227

@cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

fabulous play of emotions!

the character sketch of mr raizada is such that you cant hate him even if you want to! and loved the way you've summed him up!

confusion is something that asr doesnt do! n thats when aman walks in :)))

cant wait to read ahead... thanks for arnavs pov!

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

I was waiting for the day that Khushi would stretch enough to snap.
It was a beautiful portrayal of raw anger. Lovely updates!

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

what an intense update man. just perfect.

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

Very interesting P0V. Arnav isnt stupid...s0 waiting t0 kn0w the reas0n behind the call

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arhifan1

@arhifan1

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

good! he is repaying for his attitude! :P

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

The way you wrote Arnav's POV...amazing!! Well done with Khushi's outburst.. Keep it up!! Loved it 👏

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sur91

@sur91

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

So I just found out that u have updated not one but 5 chapters since I last visited the fanfic section, so I read them all just now.
Finally the outburst happened, I was waiting for it from the starting of the story and it was Perfect and everything I wanted khushi to say to arnav. Arnav deserves every bit of it and more.
I just hope khushi doesn't forgive him and or become soft towards him any time soon and actually give him a hard time