TS(THREE SHOT)-FOREVER TOGETHER PT. 3[A](LAST)PG89

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Sanchari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Amazing part! 😃

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Akorshi Oroni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

momo whn wil u update????????

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sshh.. ;)

@momo121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: Akorshi
momo whn wil u update????????

on the weekend :)

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KSG_luv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Wow this is truly amazing!

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@momo121

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Posted: 12 years ago

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trivedishraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

My place :D

*edited*

Gosh Minnie,i already told you i hate you..who can you kill Khushi?! Grr.. 😡 kathor dil Minnie.. 😔

Anyway..Aarush in tai-kwando pose,so cute..touching ha.. 😊

And Arnav's talk to Khushi's pic..same did his son..and you say you don't write good emotional stuff,Damm it..lier,its so touching..

Do dill ek jaan-i cried Minnie,there can be no big complement..

The news was so bad,and i was so inside the story,but the end brought me peace ..

The light,her smile,the shine,the beauty of the way you ended..i in tears,yet i smiled seeing the end..

I saw it as i read..so beautiful forever-together..

Perfect as it could have been..thanks for sharing your fiction on IF..

🤗
Your a beautiful writer,and your story was so lively.. Loved it..

Keep writing baby..Minnie,am proud of you..

Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

this was so sad

I didn't expect Khushi to die, although she was sick I thought when she found out about Arnav being alive she would pull through somehow

Nor did I expect Arnav And Arush to die also

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IMMI-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

simply amazing well done👏

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Mahi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#529

I'm so sad Khushi died! I didn't expect her to die, nor did I think Arnav and Arush would die! It's so sad! Great update and an awesome TS!

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shivi.10rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#530

res.

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omg khushi dead??
i wshd they could spend one day together
but destiny had some other plans

that do jism ek jaan was amazng

nd d endng when all three of them were together was too emotional
finally they were together forever

Edited by shivi.10rocks - 12 years ago