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PART 19


M-Sure why not then but I am not sure its love... though...

G-Huh?

M-I don't spend time enough so I can say that. I do like her lot, more than I have ever liked anyone

G-Wohi to! Saara time mere saath spend karoge to uske liye time kahan se milega?

M-I want to be with her more than I have ever wanted to be with anyone

G-Want se kya hota hai? Spend time with her, want ye want wo mat karo. Kuch karo

M- I am working on it

G- Good. Haw! Kahin usse mere baare mein pata to nahi hai?

M- Well... it's complicated

G-Matlab?

M-I'll explain it some other day

G-Nahiii abhi batao, now or never

M-Maybe when you meet her.It'll clarify things automatically

G-How can you be so casual about your love? Tch ! Ullu ho tum. Why would I meet her?

M-Why wouldn't you?

G-No girl would like, ki uska boy friend kisi aur ladki ke saath time spend kare

M- Ek bar gf bane... to tum se to mulakaat honi hi hai

G-If she knows about me naa, uske saamne meri khub burai karna ki main to badi badsurat hoon aivayi hoon, aur wo jo hai sabse best hai

M-But Geet.. Beauty is skin deep haina... tum to yahi bata rahi thi

Maan is laughin silently

G-Ufff jahan bhi deep. No gal would like her man praising other woman

M- So you want me to lie...but lying is also bad, isn't it?

Jo Jo kehkar Geet ne pareshaan kiya hai Maan ko, sab wapas payback

G-Ufff ek jhooth se kuch acha ho to kya farak padta hai aur main hi to keh rahi hoon to lie about me, to jhooth kahan hua

M-Nahi par jab wo tumse milegi to usse pata chal jayega naa ki I lied to her to aesa thodi chalega...

G- Ufff main usse nahi milungi. Aur milungi bhi to, tab tum keh dena ki, tumhari liye to bass wo hi khubsurat hai, dusri koi nahi

M-Aesa tumahra sochna hai. By the way, shall I practice?

G-Practice?

M-Yup

G-Practice what?

M-Saying that

G-Yeah ok

M-Geet

He says with a deep sexy smoldering sigh

G-Aage bologe?

M-You are the most beautiful...woman I have ever met

G-Goood. Aise hi bolna, flat ho jayegi

M- I have met many but no one has ever captured my heart like you. I don't know what attracted me first to you, your outer beauty or your glowing personality but the moment I met you I knew you were different and I really wish we can meet more often, just spend some time, talk about things or sit in companiable silence, wouldn't you come and meet me?

Geet to ek pal ke lie pause maar gai thi par kuch moment baad system restart kiya thinking ye to uski gf ke lie hai

G-Yesss, good very good aise hi bolna. Main bhi dekhti hoon kaise mana karti hai.

M- You think it's good enough? What if she doesn't take me seriously?

G-Perfect ! Aise kaise seriously nahi legi? Aise koi mazak karta hai kya?

M-What if she says that I must have said it to 100 other girls and that I am just flirting?

G-Haan ye ho sakta hai. Par have you said this to 100 other gals?

M- I have never even thought all that for another girl, bolna to door ki bat hui na

G-To bass! Par pehle tum ye decide to karlo you loveee her or not, phir bol dia baad mein laga nahi galti kari tab to problem hai naa

M- Hmm theek hai I'do that and maybe I can say it again to you tomorrow, you know on face thing

G-Mujhe bolne se kya hoga? Jisse bolna hai usse bolo naa

M- oh it'll help

G-Aur pehle pata to lagao apni feelings ka. Pata chala tum sochte reh gaye, aur usse koi aur udaa le gaya

M- Kisi ki himmat?

He is laughhing ki Geet ki maa ke samne se koi Geet ko uda le jaye...

G-Bekaar ki baatein mat karo. Socho wo bhi usko pasand karne lage to

M-Nah if I am around wo to hona bohot mushkil hai besides I am stubborn type remember. I get what I want

G-Love is all about letting go. Waise bhi bohot hassi aa rahi hai naa tumhe iss serious matter pe, iska matlab tum usse pyaar karte hi nahi warna iss serious baat pe daant nahi phaadte. I am trying to help you aur tum daant phaad rahe ho

M-Nahi, it's not like that, I was just imaging anyone even trying to woo her away She has protective family, very protective family

G-Thik hai, par pata kaise lagaoge?

M-I am working on that too. I spend a lot of time thinking about her. It helps bringing thing to perspective

G-To jaldi karo aur mujhe batana kya pata lagaya. Main bhi kuch koshish karti hoon

M- ok, well good night then. See you tomorrow

G-Good night

Dono phone rakh dete hain

Maan soch raha hai ki Geet ko kaise samjhaye ki koi aur nahi wo hi hai, par ye bhi hai ki Maan ne love and all tak ka nahi socha nahi hai and then sab log kehte hai ki love is a feeling you can't define to uske paas koi compare tool ya definition bhi nai ki wo keh sake ki haan bhai I am in love now and jaise gf bf hote hain in general ki lightly I love you keh diya wo keh diya aur ghum liya achha itme spend kar liya and even if they part they part as amicable friends

Maan ke liye to wo hi perfect relationship hai, jisme dono ek dosre ko support karte hain jab tak saath hote hain and baad mein no hard feelings

Rahi Geet ki baat...he knows ki Geet is not the causal kind to isiliye Maan na usse casual I love you keh sakta hai aur na hi koi zyada physical relation expect sakta hai. But maybe a few more hugs and few kisses and may be a lip lock one day

He doesn't know, it's new thing and he is taking it as it come. Right now he just enjoys what he is doing why worry about future and proposing and kahan tak ki limits

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Ab dopahar ko Geet goes to ma

G-Ma, aap se kuch kehna tha

Ma-Ab kya kehna bach gaya hai?

G-Permission chahie

Ma-Maine konsi rok lagai hai

G-Jaun?

She grins happily and hugs maa

G-Thanks maa

Ma-Haan haan ja, maine kaha naa jahan jana hai ja.. mujhe kuch mat batana naa poochna, kyonki meri to sunni nahi hai

G-Thanks Maa, you are the best

Maa is muttering and grumbling ki satya nash ho chuka hai iss ladki ka

Geet ne to khushi khushi Maan ko phone kiya

Maan ne nahi uthaya, meeting mei hai Maan

Geet felt sad for a moment then thought koi nahi ayega to sahi

She starts studying her alphabets par Maan ke khayalon mein zyada kho jati hai, uski baaton mein, kaise usne kaha tha about the beauty aur sab kuch par wo to uss ladki ke lie tha

Geet ko lagta hai wo hogi koi hi fy, super modern, koi lambi model types

Par ek faida ye hai ki Maan ki gf hui to ,Geet can tell maa aur maa ki chik chik band aur naa hui to...khair...gf naa hui to waise koi faida nahi par phir bhi she likes the 2nd option more

Shaam ko Maan aata hai

Usne aaj test ki planning cancel kar di

Geet opens the door

M-Hey beautiful!

He says smiling

G-Kahan the? Phone kyun nahi uthaya?

M- Meeting mein tha

G-Call back karna nahi aata?

He shrugs

M-Milne to aa raha tha thodi der mein waise hi

G-Koi emergency hoti to? Main marr rahi hoti to?

M- To tum wapas call karti and mujhe waise pata chal jaata. I have a sixth sense aur tumhari maa hai to ghar pe aese kaise mar jaati?

G-Khair...maa ne permission de di

M- oh good

Maa bhi aa gai, idhur udhar karke side lines se dekhte hue

G- Hi aunty, to chalo baitho

Maan takes out a sheet of papers from his bag

Geet to dhap se jaake sofe pe baith gai, ache se alti paalti maarke

Maan ignores the gesture; agar wo uske lap mein sarr rakh kar so sakti hai , jaise wo ek din uski car mein so gai thi, to ye to usi ka ghar hai ussi ka sofa hai, wo to pure comfort ke saath hi baithegi

M-So I inquired around and...

Geet is peeking at the papers

M-This is what I found out

Maan advertisement padke sunnane lagta hai, usne pata lagawaya tha secretary se kaun kaun se group hain jo thodi training afford kar sakta hai and are looking for violinists

Maan bata raha hai ki ye hai wo hai... iska audition hai uska audition hai bata raha hai

G-But..I cant' read...wo mujhe kyun lenge?

M-Chup! Jo main keh raha hoon wo suno

Maan saare naam and sab bata kar poochta hai ki kis kis mein Geet ko interest aa raha hai

Maa durr se muh kholkar sun rahi hai

She seriously thought that was just time pass with Geet but agar wo sirf wo nahi kar raha hai in return he is doing a lot she is beginning to see that

G-Mujhe kuch kehna hai

M- Bolo

Geet looks down

G-Kuch nahi chodo, itni bhi serious baat nahi hai

M-Kya hua hai bolo bhi

G-Kaha naa, waise bhi tum daantoge ..shayad

M- Daant kha lena.. ab bolo

G-Daant khaani achi nahi lagti

M-Koi baat nahi fir and baad mein keh dena ki sab meri galti hai, theek hai?

G-Tum naaa, harr baat pe ye mat kaha karo, mujhe acha nahi lagta

M-Tum topic chage kar rahi ho

G-Thik hai sab kee sab meri galti hai

She pouts

M-Cool with me

G-Hmm

She pouts more

He rolls his eyes

M- Ab bologi ki nahi?

She is pouting sitting with her arms crossed, Maan ne uska mood off kiya

But he is not aware of it at all

M- Tum kuch bologi ya silent treatment dekar bhaga rahi ho?

G-Mujhe bass ye kehna tha ki...main kal soch rahi thi...tumhare baare mein

M-oh ...

G-Hum dono ke baare mein

M-Really...

Grin appears on his face

G-Yeah..the time spend and have spent..and all and I think people search their whole lives for one moment of what we share when we are together

Maan gives a full-fledged smile

M-Bilkul, I am glad you thought about that

Geet also smiles back

Maan ache mood mein aa jaata hai , thoda aur discussion karta hai Geet se groups ke baare mei, uske liye music book bhi laayaa hai, blind and visual translation ki

M-Ab tum yahi padho... we can concentrate on other things later

Geet side rakh deti hai, shakes her head

M- What?

G-Mujhe ghumaane le chaloge?

M- Of course I will..,maine kaha tha na. Tum gaana bajana shuru kar do tumhari maa se permission mil jaye fir ek special place lekar jaunga

G-Abhi

M- Abhi?

He raises an eyebrow

G-Haan abhi le chalo

M- Your mom said ok??

G-Mujhe le chalo naa yahan

Bagal mein kund sa gai

She shows her a picture of a water park, advertisement hai newspaper mein

M- Oh Geet.. uske liye to subah jaana hoga...shaam ko band ho jata hai

Her face falls

M-Hum parson chalte hain

G-Kal kyun nahi?

M- Kal mera office hai isiliye

G-oh haan, aur tumne kuch socha?

M-Kis baare mein?

G-Ufff usi baare mein jiske baare mein baat hui

She nudges him smugly

M-Jaise ek raat sochne se I would get all answers, jo itne dino se nahi mile.

G-emm..tumne socha hi nahi hoga

M-You can't say that

Ma-Geet!

Maa sajke purse leke ready

Geet looks at ma

ma-Mouni maasi ki tabiyat kharab hai. Main milne jaa rahi hoon. Samjhi. Abhi aati hoon

Looks at Maan with murderous eyes

G-Jii maa

M-Do you want me to leave? Aunty?

Ma-Jiske jo mann mein aaye kare, waise bhi meri kaun sunta hai

M-I am listening

Maa walks out

Geet ne to peeche se Maan ka haath pakad liya to refrain him from saying anything more

Maan shakes his head ki kuch nahi ho sakta, phir baith jaata hai

M- To water park hmmm, parsoon subah chalnege, 10.30 taiyar rehna

She nods

G-Pata nahi maa ko kya lagta hai [She sighs] Jab tumhari ek gf hai

M- Abhi nahi bani...

G-Haan jo bhi, bann jayegi

M- Jab bann jayegi tab bolna

G-Tum usse pyaar ka izehaar nahi karoge, I love you nahi bologe to kaise banegi

M- Haven't we been over this already?

G-Haan haan jo bhi

M- Good, waise water park ka achanak shauk kaise?

G- Aise hi mann hua

M-Do you know how to swim?

G- Usmein swimming ki kya zarurat

M-You have a costume?

G-Costume wahan se mil jaata hai

M-Well if you wanna wear the public one... you never know who else had worn it before you

G-Waise jane ka shauk to khair...soch lo shayad tumhe costume mein dekhne ka mann ho gaya

She says smugly

G-And about costume, my sister has one

M- oh really... not into inner beauty thing anymore, are you? Ok, sis ki costume borrow karlo

G-Tumhari sangat ka asar

Thoda khiski Maan ki taraf

G-Ab ankhen hain to uska use karu naa..

Geet aur khiski

M- Waise I may tell you in advance, I do look pretty spectacular in a my trunks

G-emm...we'll see

Geet ki zulfein andhera sa kar rahi hain

M- Trying to take a closer look, Geet?

He says bending all the close, right into her personal face in front of her face

G-em hun...mom ko lagta hai..mujhe tumse khatra hai...ulta bhi to ho sakta hai

M-oh.. ulta? Kya ...iradein hain tumhare, bure wale?

G-Main tumhara issi waqt rape kar duun to?

She grabs his collar

His voice takes a deeper note

M-Are you sure, you know how?

He says looking at her lip with need and then back at her eyes, passion starting to glow in his eyes

She narrows her eyes, her hands grabs his collar

Maan slowly raises his hand and touches her hair, lightly guiding his fingers down to the back of her head, spreading his fingers inside her hair

She looks at him mesmerized

He raises an eyebrow

M-Well? What are you going to do to me?

G-Huh?

Geet thoda bend hoke khadi thi

As she comes back to earth she loses her balance and falls on him

Maan catches her perfectly into his lap

G-ohhh

M-You are a clumsy rapist, you do know that don't you?...

She chuckles

Maan jerks her to him

M- Welll state your evil plan...

He says holding her flat against him

She looks down, cheeks acquiring color

M-Not so evil now...

He murmurs close to her ear his lips brushing her cheek

Geet red ho gai

Maan ka mann to booot kuch karne ko machal raha hai but he somehow keeps a plug over things...coz it's neither the time nor the place

M- oh aunty!!!

He says alarmed

Geet jumps off his lap with shock

There is no maa

G-Maaann youuu

M- Hmm?

He starts laughing

Geet andha dhuu maarne lagti hai Maan ko haath pe

m-You should have seen your face

He keeps laughing. Her blows hardly doing much damage

His ribs hurt more form the comic reaction of Geet... he had never seen anyone so afraid ...

Geet gala pakadke hila deti hai

Maan holds her hand away...

m-Tumhari maa sach mei aa gai iss time to soch lo, aese dekhkar mera to yahan aana band ho jayega

Maan is has quieting down to smiling from laughing

G-Bass tum naa

Geet dono haathon se ache se Maan ke baal bigaad deti hai while laughing with him

M-Ismein itna hasne wali kya baat thi?

G-Look at you..tab tumhe pata lagega

M- Tch Geet.. ab to tumhari maa ko yakeen ho jyaega ki tumne mere akele hone ka fayeda uthaya

He says finger combing his hair into order

G-Khair mera mann to har roz karta h ki fayda utha loon par wo beech mein tuhari gf jo aa jaati hai

She says with a mischivious glint in her eyes

M- Haan haan dekh liya maine...kitna maan karta hai aur kitna aata hai...

G-Haan wo to mujhe tumhari gf se jhagda jo nahi chahie naa bass islie warna mujhe sab pata hai, main koi bachchi thode hoon

M-oh and tumhe kine bataya?

G-Kyun main andhi hoon to kya mujhe pata nahi ho sakta, jaise tumhe kisi ne bataya mujhe bhi kisi ne bataya hi hoga

M- well... welll.. oh well...so you read po*n...cool!!

G-po*n? [She looks at him quizzically] You read po*n?

M- Nope, I never said I did apparently you did...now I never would have guessed that!!

G-Ufff Maan! It's not about that. You know I have a sis and you know blinds are also humans

M- I know that

G-And, you know my mom is a gossip queen

M-Nope, I didn't know that. oh so all you know is gossip... I should have guessed that's what you were talking about since you don't even know your birds and bees

G-I know theory, everything

M-Geet, there are things... that people just don't even gossip about

G-Yes I know about sex. s-e-x, happy?

He looks at her with his eyebrow raised

G-Birds and bees..my foot!

She rolls her eyes while he narrows his eyes

M-Well then miss know it all, I guess I should get going before my virtue really gets in danger...or his mouth out of control or his head with desires [He thinks aside]

G-Nooo stop

M- Geet.. babe I actually do need to get going now.. it's late

G-ummm

She shakes her head

M- What? I actually do have my own place to go at night so I don't stay here...

She shakes her head

M- Fine, why don't you want me to go?

G-You wanna go?

she says, her elbows rested on his shoulder

M-That doesn't answer my question

G-Zindagi mein aisa...bohot kam hota hai janab, jab koi kisi ko itneee pyaar se rokta hai

M-Wo to hai

He says sitting back in relaxed pose

Geet mischievous wali naughty smile deti hai

G-Kya hua? Ruk gaye?

M-Well, why the hell not...? Tumahri maa ne kuch kaha to I'll ju say that you were taking advantage of me

G-Jo kehna hai keh dena. Phir maa..jo karegi uski zimmedari meri nahi

M-Mujhe to bahar nikal dengi tumhari mom phir to tumhe hi sunayengi naa

G-Nahi tumhe bahar bilkul nahi nikalegi. Zabardasti pakadke tumhari shaadi kara degi

She says smugly and starts laughing

M- Sach? Tum bade confidence ke sath keh rahi ho? Experience much?

G-I know my mom islie bachke rehna bachchu. Khair tum ruk gaye to tumhari jaanemann ka kya hoga? Jao tum

M- Nahi nahi its fine...

He pulls her close to him in a more comfortable position

G-ohhh ye kya kar rahe ho?

M- Nothing, just sitting

G-Sitting like this? Wo dekhegi to kya sochegi?

M-Wo kaise dekhegi? Dekha bhi to usse kuch samjh nahi ayega

G-Kyun? Kyun samajh nahi ayega? Gadhi hai kya tumhari tarah?

M-Haan thodi to hai...

G-Arre kaise ladke ho apne pyaar ko gadha kehte ho

M-Sach ki to kadar hi nahi hai aaj kal ke logon ko

G-Tumne usse gadha kaha aur tumhe kya shabashi chahie. Sharam nahi aati. Iska matlab tum usse pyaar karte hi nahi ho

M- Tumhe jaise sab aata hai. Mujhse bada samajhti ho tum. Samajh mein kuch aata nai hai, kuch bhi bolti ho aur fir mujhko hi suna do

G-Mujhe kya samajh nahi aata? Haan?

Maan ne utha kar Geet ko side kar diya

M-Aata hota to poochti nahi

G-Badi aag lag gai tumhe maine tumhari gf pe sawaal utha dia to! Jao maro uske saath, yahan kya kar rahe ho?

M-Goddd Geet !!!!!!!!!!!! I don't have gf!!!!!!!!!! Don't you get it?!! And, the only girl I am spending time with is you!!!

He says getting up in a huff

Geet shuts her eyes at his shouting

G-Wohi to spend time with the gal you like, that's why I said. Can't you understand?

M- I am going. This isn't even funny any more

G-Funny??????? You think I am joking?

Maan apna briefcase uthata hai and chala jata hai

G-You think I will joke about your love life?

He goes leaving her shouting and ranting..

Geet ne bhi darwaza band kar dia, aise kaise chilla dia, thik hai she commented on his personal life, to kya hua, utna to hakk uska banta hi hai

Raat mein bhi Maan call nahi karta Geet ko

Ek to wo thoda frustrated hai with everything plus a nagging mom and workload

Edited by storywriter - 11 years ago
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Aww such a cute part =)
Please update more often
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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she still did not understand...it will take time..
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Beautiful n lovely update. Liked it a lot.

Maan telling Geet abt his love. N Geet telling funny n weird suggestion. Phone convo was mast. It was hilarious. Geet Maan ko gf ko Kaise rakhte hai n usse treat Kaise karte hai woh sikha rahi hai. Maan telling abt his complicated love.

Geet thinking abt Maan. Hope she feels something for him too.
Maa toh kuch kehne layak nahi hai. Missing Mann.

Geet wants to go to aquatica... Maan agrees. Does Geet feel anything for Maan. Why she wants him to stay n is nearing him. Achanak Maan ke saath sweetly baat kar rahi hai n wishing they could be together. Wat happened to her.

Maan saving him izzat. Lol. Making fun of geet. Geet gussa.

Thanks a lot for longg update. Continue soon
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Hi...lovely ppl...wish u a Merry Christmas and a Happy new year...apart frm tht...this day is so spcl coz its my mom's bdy...so this part is fr mom...happy bdy mom!


PART 20

Raat mein bhi Maan call nahi karta Geet ko

Ek to wo thoda frustrated hai with everything plus a nagging mom and workload

Geet call karti hai

M- Hello?

G-Count?

M-Count?

G-CC

M-What are you rambling about?

G-Cigarette count

M- I have much more important things to do instead of counting, now if you don't mind I was busy

G-Gussa? Are you smoking right now?

M- Geet I am not smoking, I am busy

Maan ne Geet ke phone aane par hi cigrett by involuntary reaction bhuja di thi

G-Koi baat nahi gussa baad mein kar lena

M- Geet do you want something? Seriously? Coz I really am busy

G-Yes...ummm...are you angry..Maan??????????? Don't be angry...naa

M- No I am not

G-You are my only friend, please

M-What is it?

G-And you are my bbf too

M-Geet...get to the point

G-There's no point it's a line; mujhe neend nahi aa rahi

M-Its early to go to sleep study your music

M-Nahi...tum gussa rahoge to neend nahi ayegi. Pyaar se baat karo

G-For the last time, main gussa nahi hoon. Agar tumne ye bolna band nahi kiya to main ho jaunga. Is that what you want?

G-Hmm khana khaa lena time pe, agdum bagdum mat khana, cc count mat badana, bolo haan

M- Fine fine, anything else mom?

G-No baby, take care of yourself...baby

M- Good night mom

She chuckles

G-Good night...beta

They hang up

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Agle din

Maan Geet ko call karta hai around 1

G-Hello

M- Hey

G-Hey

M-Kya kar rahi thi?

G-Mom ke saath...hum hamari devrani haara parivaar aur bachche ye serial dekh rahi hoon

M- Should you be watching tv? And how the music lesson coming up?

G-oh haan maine ek jagah phone kiya tha, Monty Coutto. Aaj jaungi uske wahan 7 baje

M-Good good. Best of luck for that

G-Thanks

M-Achha suno, I can't come today. I have a meeting scheduled and it can't be avoided

G-Haan sahi hai, waise bhi mujhe 5 baje nikalna hi hai 7 baje pohonchna hai naa

M-It takes 2 hours? Tum wapas kaise aogi?

G-Arre Monty Coutto apne farm house mein rehta hai. Koi taxi mil jayegi to le lungi, let's see

M- Tum apni mom ko saath le jao

G-Mom ko zara chest pain hai wo nahi jaa sakti. I'll go, tum mummy kyun bann rahe ho? Main koi bacchi hoon jo kho jaungi?

M- What? I can't worry about you now? Aur bachhi ki baat nahi hai...durr hai, farmhouse waise hi isolated types place par hote hain. Tumhe wapas aane mei dikkat ho sakti hai. Aesa karna apne taxiwale ko keh dena ki wo ruk jaye

G-Thik hai

M- And, let me know how it goes

G-ok

M- Bye then

G-Bye bye

Maan phone rakh deta hai

Shaam ko 10 baje tak Maan ki meeting khatam hoti hai. He checks the phone for Geet's calls but there was no call from her. So he calls her. But her number is unreachable. He calls it a few times, but same unreachable

So he calls her home

Ma-Hello

M-Hello aunty, it's me Maan. Can I talk to Geet please?

Ma-Arre..kab se tumhara no. dhund rahi thi...kaise ladke ho tum saath nahi jaa sakte the uske

M-Ji? Main busy tha and she said she would manage. Kya hua hai? Is she stuck somewhere?

Ma-Kab se phone kar rahi hoon unreachable jaa raha hai

M-Aapki last baat kab hui thi?

He says getting up and getting ready, getting his wallet his car keys

Ma-Jab jaa rahi thi tab

M-Wahan ka address hai aapke paas?

Ma-Han ek minute batati hoon, chashma dhundne do

Maan goes down gets to his car

Maa 10 min baad phir bolti hai address

Maan starts the car drives out

M- Fine I'll go see there what's wrong. I'll drop her home

He disconnects

Maan wahn pohocha address pe toofaan ki raftaar se car bhagaake

Maa ka phone aaya

M-Hello?

ma-Aa gai Geet, abhi aayi hai

M-Let me talk to her

Ma-Thak gai hai, jaake so gai hai wo to

M- I see. Would you tell her to be ready tomorrow by 11?

Ma-Thik hai keh dungi

M- Did she get selected?

Ma-Kuch batya hi nahi. Aayi, hath mooh dhoke, kamra band karke so gai. Tum kahan ho abhi?

M- I just reached the farm house and, you mean you couldn't make her stop and answer? Aunty aap ki baat nahi suni!!! Kuch hua hai kya?

Ma-Mujhe to nahi pata

M-Was she upset?

Ma-Mujhe laga thak gai hogi, thaki hui lag rahi thi

M-Hmm, theek hai aunty main kal aunga subah, aap usse mera message de dejiega

Ma-Hmm

Ab maa ko bhi lag raha hai dheere dheere ki ladka time pass nahi hai bass, fikar hai meri beti ki

Maan ko bhi lag raha hai ki Geet ka selection hua ki nahi,mann to kiya Geet ko call karne ka bohot lekin phir maa ne kaha ki. Thak gai nahi pata to Maan ko bhi laga ki kyun disturb karein

Lekin since wo farm house to pohonch hi chuka tha to usne socha ki yahi pooch le

Maan ka to waise hi thoda kihska hua sa hai, chaiye to chahiye bass types wala

Pohonchke Maan ne door bell bajai par gate khula tha

Ghar ke bahar badaaa garden and pool tha, wahin se sab messed hona start hua tha

Maan ko to smajh nahi aaya ki itna mess kaise, saare log jo interview dene aaye the kis baat par bhadak gaye

Maan andar gaya

M- Hello???!!!

Ghar bhi waisa messed

Ghar ke wahan badiii khidki, wo banda highhh on drugs...saamne wale tree pe chada hua

Maan is like ki W*F, ye kya hai? Why is bloody drugee here!!

Usne reference diya tha Geet ko..surely usne druggi ka to nahi diya hoga and on top of that W*F was the guy doing on the tree

Maan walks over to the guy as he is curious plus he is worried if they tried to offer Geet drugs or something. Geet ka bhi kya pata le liye ho, usse bhi kya pata hogaki drug asli mein kaisa hota hai ... pada sabne hai par dekha and taste kitne logon ne kiya hai

M-Hey you!

The guy throws his bottle at him

Maan side steps neatly

M- Hey a**hole!! What in hell happened here?

Maan ka phone baja

M-Hello?

Its Geet

G-Maa ko phone kiya tha?

M- Hey how are you? Why is everything a mess here? What happened here?

G-Where? I cleaned my room

M- At this farmhouse where you came for audition

G-Tum?? Wahan kya kar rahe ho, come back

M- I couldn't reach you... I was worried; your mom said she hadn't talked to you either so I came here to find you. What happened here? It's a mess. Was there a riot or something? Did somebody offer you drugs?

G-umm..emm...no

M-Why aren't you telling me?

G-There's nothing to tell

M-Then tell me why is everything a mess here?

G-How would I know, mera ghar hai kya?

M-You mean everything was fine when u left here?

G-ummm...emm...they were having a party

M-I see. Why didn't you just leave then?

G-I tried giving my audition but... I guess Mr Coutto was too high on hallucinations

M-You tried????????? You see people snorting powder and you tried giving audition?!!! Are you mad? Why would you even want to work for such a guy?

G-But..main to audition dene gai thi naa, mujhe usse kya wo kya kare

M-Jiske liye kaam hi nahi karna usse audition kya dogi?!!!!

This time he does shout

Geet chup..ankhein band

G-Par wo gaana kitna acha hai...

She hums a song

M- Do I sound like I give a shit? Let him work however he wants, currently I am going to report him

G-Why?????? Usne tumhara kya bigada?

M-Are you saying that if a person is taking drugs, we should let him? Good if I report him, he would probably get some help. Look, you go to sleep. Tumhe kal milta hoon 11 baje; abhi isko dekhta hoon

G-Tum kya karoge?

M-I'll see what I can do. Bye

He disconnects

Phir awaaz lagata hai uss bande ko

Maan is worried ki what is he falls down and breaks his neck or spine

M- Oye hero!!! Neeche aa

>>>>>>>>>>>

Next day-

Maan comes, as he said he would come at 11 am

He rings the bell

Maa kholti hai, muskuraati hai

Ma-Aa rahi hai, baitho. Nahaa rahi hai

Maan is shocked inside, but outside has a straight face like Mr calm and cool

M-Thank you, aunty

He comes in and sits down

Maa Maan ko paani laake deti hai

M- Thank you

Kuch der baad Geet aati hai gile baal leke

G-Chalo chalo. Aaj tum apne judo karate karne nahi gaye?

M- Nope and its Tai chi. You have everything you need?

G-Yuppp

Maan gets up

M-Chalo

He says to her mom-

M-Aunty, I'll bring her back around 7

Ma-Haan haan

G-Bye maa

M- See I told you, your maa would understand. Tum faltu itna darti thi. Koi jailer thodi hai wo

He says opening the car door for her

G-Maa to kuch aur keh rahi thi

M-oh kya kaha tumhari maa ne?

G-Ye sab ki...

He gets in starts driving

M-Yes?

G-...ki mujhe to lagta hai ki wo tujhe pasand karta hai, kuch kaha hai kya?'

M- I am beginning to like your mom

G-To maine kaha, nahi kuch nahi kaha

Maan rolls his eyes at her

Maan keeps on driving and they reach their destination

Pohonch kar-

M- Tumhara number unreachable kyun aa raha tha kal?

She shrugs

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M-What is the meaning of that? Why was it unreachable?

G-I d-o-n-t k-n-o-w

M-You really are stupid sometimes.

Maan gets out of the car, goes buys the ticket

Geet to idhar udhar mandraa rahi hai

Kisi ke godh mein baby tha, shoulder se jhulta hua usse khel rahi thi, usse ched rahi thi

M-Chalien?

G-Huh? Oh haan

She walks film ka poster laga hota hai

She gazes at it

G-Mera fav hero

She keeps on looking

Maan glances up at the hero

M-You are watching too much tv. Tumahri hi akhien kharab hongi

Geet ignores Maan and blows a flying kiss while walking away from the poster

M- You do that one more time and I would start ignoring you

G-Whyyy?

M- Coz you don't do that sort of thing in public nor do you openly drool over a man like that, it says a lot of bad things about your character to any passing stranger

G-I don't care. Khullam khulla pyaar karenge hum donooo, iss duniya se nahi darenge hum donooo

Geet is all sing song jiggy jaggy

Maan gives her an incredulous look, phir ignore, nahi pata ki kaun hai

M- You keep that up, main aaj tumhe pehchanne se inkar kar hi dunga fir kahin jaunga bhi nai. Pata chala tumhara yahi chalta raha pagal khane wale aakar tumhe utha kar le jaye and tumhari maa to mujh par hi chilaayegi

G-Jao jao chod do, abhi chod do. Tata bye bye

M- You think you are so smart don't u? You know everything, you can do everything You can just be a bit humble before making mistakes so you don't make them, but nooo; you have to go ahead and get in a mess and then apologies later and then as promptly forget about it

G-What do you expect me to do? And what mistake did I make? Tum sadu ho uska kuch nahi ho sakta

M-Forget I said anything. Go ahead shout your love out to the poster

G-Yeah I will..what's your problem?

Maan just turns around, nahi jaanta Geet ko

Geet bhi peeche se nikal gai, marne do sadu ko

She had always known how to enjoy herself alone

Maan jaa kar ek park bench par baitha hai, soch raha hai ki kyun aaya, kyun ladaa, kya farak pad raha hai usse and why can't he just stop being affected ? Saara kaam chod kar raat ko 4 ghante ki drive, phir aaj yahan par bhi bench par baitha hai

It's not like Maan is jealous ki wo hero ke liye sing kare ya wo uske liye tha, the thing is public embarrassment

Geet ne to change bhi kar liya in pink spaghetti and short jeans shorts

Maan to wai baitha hua tha

Geet dekha pani ko, nikal gai saamne se, main bhi main bhi' karke chad gai ride pe

Maan dekh raha tha, her going away.

Chadhne do' he thought.. he didn't feel much like doing anything

Geet ride se aai 1 ghante baad, drenched hoke

Kuch oglers ki to lottery ho gai..akeli ladki dekhke

Tab tak Maan ka bhi mood achha ho gaya wo baithke chips kha raha tha

Geet bhi paise laai hai, uske pouch mein hain paise

Usne bhi ice cream li

Ek achi jagah dekh ke wo bhi baith gai chaat ne

Maan ko Geet dikh rahi hai baithi hui

Geet to ghaas pe baith gai, she isn't sophisticated as him

Khaa rahi hai wo mazze se

Maan can see the men ogling at Geet also but wo bhi durr se hi dekh rahe hain

Maan doesn't think ki park mein koi badtameeze karega

Ek street dog kahin se andar aa gaya tha

Geet ne usse adhi ice cream khila di

Let gai ghaas pe khule aasmaan ke neeche while the dog was besides her having the ice cream

Geet lag to sexy rahi hi thi gori gori..drenched thoda spaghetti uth gai

Maan bhi dekh hi raha tha aram se enjoying the view

Geet uthke thoda dusri side chali gai...away from visibility of Maan

Maan utha, thoda chala to Geet dikhi

Geet is smiling happily while surrounded by those ogling boys, chit-chatting with them and giggling

M- Socialize karne aaye hai hum yahan?

She looks at him

Boys narrow their eyes

Maan raises his eyebrow

M-Hey...he is Maan. Maan he is Ravi, Manish, he is Prashant, rahul and Mayank

M- Hi

He says muhh pe plastic si smile chipka rakhi hai

Boy-Geet chalein crazy river mein?

G-Haan chalo chalo

M- You are going with them?

Maan says, holding her hand

Geet to zara hairaan

M-Haan [But obvious tone]

M- Go with me

G-Tumhe mujhse problem hai to you don't have to embarrass yourself. My new friends aren't embarrassed by me

M- Friends already? I don't think so. You aren't going anywhere alone with them

G-Mujhe akele akele acha nahi lagta...tum samajhte to...khair chodo...[she looks hurt]///tum samajh hi nahi sakte...I am just an embarrassment for you

M-Main chal to raha hoon saath and agar tum kuch kar rahi ho jo mujhe pasand nai hai to, that's it? Everything is over? No middle roads? You can't even try and think of compromise or negotiation?

G-Why are you blaming me? You are the one who refused to come along, left me alone

She says, visibly upset

M-I was there watching you. Did you ask me to come along? But of course it's always my fault, isn't it?

She rolls her eyes, hands on her waist, shakes her head , turns and walks

Maan follows her at her heel silently

Geet goes into ladies room

He waits around

Geet aai 20 min baad changed her clothes and starts walking towards exit

Maan exhales a long breath of air. The day was titled disaster with capital D

He follows her along silently

Geet stops a taxi

M- You are taking a taxi home? I will drop you.

She walks silently towards his car

Maan opens the door for her

Geet sits

Maan goes around gets in and starts driving

Geet pure raaste chup

Maan ne gaana chala diya

Pohinch gaye ghar, Maan opens the door for her like he always does

Geet nahi utar rahi

He crouches in front of hers

M- Want to go somewhere else?

G-Sorry for the inconvenience

She says grimly

M-But it won't be repeated...ever

G- I had a feeling you would say something like that

M-Good then. Decided

Geet utar gai

M- What is decided?

G-That it's the last time

She isn't looking at him..she is looking down

Maan is confused...if he say no then it automatically means he says yes to her fool hardy ways in the public and trusting on complete strangers and; if he says yes it is... it may come out like both are hedging as to who would bow down first while it is not a competition in the first place...tricky situation

M- What do you exactly mean?

G-It's the last time, you won't be embarrassed. You can spend time with whoever you want and not have to run around me and nobody will disturb you...to hell with doing it the right way

Maan gives her a long speculative look

She is looking down, nazre nahi milayi

G-Please move

M-I don't want this to be the last time...we can work on my embarrassment issues if you would cooperate and there is no whoever.. you are the one I want to spend time with and nobody is disturbing me

She is looking down..chehra nahi dikh raha her head shakes a little

M-I wouldn't have to chase if you wouldn't run. Why can't we walk side by side?

G-B..because you are Mercedes Benz and I am a tractor

M-Can't we upgrade you a little and downgrade me little?

Geet nazre churaye sar neeche...jaane ki koshish karti hai par Maan gaadi se utarne de tab na

G-Please..jaane do

M- I can't let you go when you say that this is the last time...

G-I..I am just flavor of the month...

M- You are not

G-Main tumhe samjha nahi sakti...sach to ye hai..it's actually in reality, all my fault

M- oh is it?

He says cheekily

She nods

M-Ye kab hua? Tch... koi aur ladki ne sun liya to tumhara gala daba degi

G-Main kitni bevkuf hoon

She presses her hand to her mouth with her head still down

M- Tum thodi to ho...but then nahi hoti to shayad main pasand bhi nahi aata

G-Hato jaane do. HATO NAAA !!!!!!!

M-First take back all the stupid things you just said

G-Fine I take back. Hato

M- You don't mean it

G-eggghhh I mean it. Hato naa

She hisses

M- Tch so impatient..

He moves aside

Geet literally runs frm thr...darr gai ki kuch zyada zahir na ho jaye

Maa ne door khola to Geet bhagi andar

According to Geet problem uski hai

Maa ne poocha ki itni jaldi kaise aa gai, Maan ne to kaha tha ki 7 baje tak aoge

Geet mooh chipake baith gai

Maa- Arre kya hua hai? Bol. Kuch kaha kya usne? Kya baat hui hai?

G-Kuch..nahi hua hai maa...kuch nahi

maa-Arre bata kya hua haii...

maa says taking her face in her hand

Geet's eyes are filled with tears, she shuts her eyes

Ma-Arre beta bol...kya ho gaya?

G-Kuch nahi...kuch bhi nahi

maa- Dekh usne kuch bola hai to bata mujhe, kuch ulta seedha kiya to bol, nahi datungi tujhe

G-Usne kuch nahi kaha...sab meri galti h...maine usse kaha...mujhe nahi...par kyun nahi maanta

maa-Kya nahi manta? Kya hua hai? Kuch bolegi bhi?

G-Kuch nahi...sab..meri galti h...sab...main kitni bevkuf hu

maa- Kya hua hai? Kya kiya usne?

G-Usne kuch nahi kiya sab meri galti hai...sab...sab..kyun hu mai itni bevkuf...kyun nahi samajhti wo ek sapna h...kyun pasand karti hu usse

Maa is jaw dropped

Geet to mooh chupake let jaati hai

Maa-Tune usse kaha ye? Ki..ki... tu usse...

She shakes her head in reply

G-Aisi bevkufi bhari baat..main usse kahungi kya

Edited by storywriter - 11 years ago
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nice update...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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she feels she is incompetent for him...but doe snot realize that he wants her only...
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part 17
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