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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
hi
the up is good the story is moving very interestingly
i liked the way sujal helped kashish and i wonder that child oh god in dono ke chakkar mein he have to to and fro everytime
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4
nice part dear...
ufff Sujal is intrigued now...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 5

She picks up the phone

k-Hello

'Look at your right...near the black car'

It's a male voice

She immediately recognizes who it belongs to

Kashish bhauchakki si ho gai hai

Looks at her right and locates Sujal standing there

k-Why are you here?

s-You are free now...we can go for a movie

k-Nahi nahi...maa hai. I have to go. Jao yahan se. Maa dekh legi

She is afraid of her mom. Kashish ko bachpann se yehi sunne ko mila hai ki world outside is very dangerous, people who can see have a very different world. Most of them are cunning and malicious people and she is simple; She shouldn't interact with them much as she isn't cunning or street smart enough

Mom stressed on men specially as mom knew Kashish was good looking

Kashish ki maa ke saath saath uski choti behen dono milke Kashish ko dabate rehte the

She seldom had any say in anything because end of the day...she was their liability

They love her too much and are protective ye ma ka point of view tha

Behen ka thoda alag hai

The sister has her own insecurities

Kashish was always the far more prettier one even if she couldn't see herself

Sujal witnesses maa aur Kashish auto mein chad gaye

Sujal call kiye ja raha hai

Kashish ko sunn nahi raha

Sujal ne ek to jugaad lagake Kashish ka number nikalwaya ab wo phone nahi utha rahi

Kashish ne phone nahi uthaya to, Sujal ne sms kiya

Par irony of the situation is Kashish can't read...she only knows brail... aur Kashish can't even ask someone to read for her... ghar mein maa aur behen hain...dono hi uspe par chadh jayengi

Sujal ne movie hall ka address sms kia tha

He was expecting ki wo ayegi

To ab Kashish pohonchti hai wapas ghar Doctor ke wahan se wondering ye ladka peecha karte karte Dr ke paas tak pohonch gaya kaisa ajeeb hai

Kashish ko to pata nahi jaana-vaana bhi hai, wo to ghar pe aaram se thi, mom ke saath describing her how the new world looks

As Sujal messaged her naa ki iss jagah milna for movie to Sujal to uss jagah wait kar raha hai

He is waiting ki Kashish ayegi ayegi

Par Kashish nahi aa rahi hai, usse to pata hi nahi

Sujjal ko pasand nhai hai wait karna

Wahan Kashish wo to aram se maa se gappe lada rahi hai

Sujal ko bilkul pasand nahi hai wait karna, uski shaan ke khilaaf

He had thousands girls who would roll over and die for him...wo Kashish ke liye wait kyun kare

Par wo kar raha hai

Coz usse lagta hai ki Kashish aisi nahi hai jo jhoot types bole and...and ...agar Sujal ne kaha hai to Kashish ko aana chahiye; bas end of matter...uski baat to pathar ki lakeer

Movie ka show start ho gaya...intehaan ho gai intezaar ki aai naa kuch khabar mere yaar ki...ye Sujal ko bhi tha yakeen Kashish bewafa type ki nahi hai

Phir wajah kya hogi usko ko intezaar karane ki

To isse khayal mein dooba dheere dheere simmer ho raha tha

His anger and frustration coming on to a lovely slow boil

Show khatam ho gaya

Log nikal gaye movie se

He left after waiting for 2 hours as his dignity came his way

Aakhir Kashish ne haan bhi to nahi ki thi ...order to sirf Sujal ne diya

Kashish ne to koi reply bhi nai kiya

Ab next day, Kashish utri bus se apne time pe with her usual ' it's a beautiful day wala' expression leke

Sujal wahan thunder cloud sa khada hai ciggrett phookta hua

k-Hi [She smile sin a friendly manner]. Phir ciggrett? Baad mein pii lena

Sujal takes the ciggrett away but it's clear by the pile that he had smoked at least 2-3 already

s- Where were you last night? Why didn't you come?

He says holding her elbow

k-Last night????? Come where? I was with mom, who else?

s-I called you for movie, I messaged you too

k-Message????

s-Nahi aana tha to mana to kar sakti thi or you wanted to know and test me huh?

k-Which message?

Sujal narrows his eyes at that question

k-What message? What are you talking about?

s- I sent you an sms telling you to come and meet me for the movie. Are you telling me that you never received it?

k-Sms???? Phone???

He pulls her elbow closer daring her to lie

k- Yeah..I heard a beep

Sujal is waiting for further explanation

k-And it vibrated also

s-And you decided to ignore it? Not read it? What type of game are you trying to play?

k-Read? I can't read

She says innocently

s-Wha- you can't...? How ridiculous is that? Of course you can. Don't you have a better excuse?

k-Well...blinds can't read by seeing. I can read brail

s-oh..

He lets go of her elbow...ye to socha i nai an then he looks annoyed

s- Why didn't you tell me that earlier? I would have sent you voice message then

k-You never asked. It's obvious...isn't it?

s-No it's not obvious. You need to tell that even without asking. You don't go sleep with someone and then tell them by the way I am HIV positive

k-Huh?

s-What huh? Meet me today here at 8. I don't want any more excuses

k-Huh? Why? Something important?

s- For movie, what else? You want to meet for something else?

k-Hmm..I'll ask mumma if she will give permission

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
hi
the up is really good
sujal is waiting for kashish but kashish is no where oh poor lad sends so manys sms and calls but kashish is nonchalant
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
part 5
nice part...
goo he came to know she cant read sms...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Part 4

now dat was caring of sujal to handle those mawalis 😆😆😆 but he didn't forgot to taunt Kashish 😆😛 "billi"😆 but whatever he deserves a thank you 😊😊 ...but thank you ke chakkar mein bechare bache ki parade hogayi 🤣

sujal first step par hi movie 😆😆😆

Part 5

😆 😆 Sujal toh peeche hi pad gaya 😆😆 guess he desperately wanted to watch the movie 😉😆😆 wud have loved to join him 😛😆

dat was sweet of him to wait 😛😆 but uska gussa 😆😆😆..kashish darling u gonna have to face it girl 😛😆😆😆

thank god he understood 😛😛 phir se movie 🤣... he seemed to be crazy filmy buff 😆😆😆

all the best this time 👍🏼 😛 😛



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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

PART 6

s- For movie, what else? You want to meet for something else?

k-Hmm..I'll ask mumma if she will give permission

s- I don't want that excuse. Tumhari mummy permission de ya na de, I don't care. You are coming. Warna msin tumhare ghar aajaunga

k-Tumhara dimaag kharab hai. Ilaaj karao

s-Yeah yeah

Sujal just shrugs

s-I waited 2 hours yesterday. You have to compensate for that so you have to come no matter what

k-Maine kaha tha wait karne ko? Did I?

He bends close to her

s-Tumne mana bhi nahi kiya.. kiya tha?

k-Maine kaha tha doctor ke paas jana hai. Khair meri bus aa rahi hai

s-Aur maine uske bad tumhe messasge kiya

Sujal holds her elbow before she leaves

s- I'll wait there

And then let's go of her

k-I can't be sure, depends on mom and control your smoking...bye

Chad jaati hai bus mein

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Shaam ko Sujal to 1 poora pack phook deta hai waiting for Kashish that day lekin part time he is angry part time he is worried ki kuch ho to nahi gaya raste mein; why didn't she come but mostly he is angry

Kashish ko maa se permission mili nahi aur maa ne bitha liya Kashish ko film dekhne

Kashish wahin so gai

Kashish ka cell tha uske room mien takiye ke neeche islie suna bhi nahi

Kashish phone uthaye naa and Sujal ne aaj 3 ghante to kya 5 ghnate wait kiya

Par Kashish nahi aayi

He is incensed

Sujal ne kuch nhai khaya na usse khana hai

Kashish aaram se soke uthi...maa ne kaha khana khale

Kashish ne aaram se hassi mazzaa karte hue khana khaya

Phir sab karke Maa ko good night bolke sone gai to yaad aaya...Sujalll

k-Off course he wouldn't have waited, I said pakka nahi hai jane ka

Phir bhi she thinks ek baar phone karke sorry keh deti hoon

Kashish ne kiya call

He does pick up the call after few rings as his numb mind registered the ring

s-Whoizt?

k-Sujal

s-Thtz me

k- Its Kashish...I am sorry

She knows daant padegi

s-$!#%%##

Kashish is shocked

k-Sujal !!!!!!!! Don't use these words or I won't speak to you

s-f***off

Sujal phone kaat deta hai

Kashish calls again

Sujal nahi utha raha

Kashish ko bass sorry kehna tha and she wanted to explain aur Sujal ko bhi sunana tha ki he dare not use such words again

Sujal ne ringtone hi silent kar di

For Sujal there can't be good enough excuse for what she did

She calls a few times

As he doesn't pick up, she thinks bhaad mein jaaye...maa was right abt these people

Sujal kaafi pii chukka hai and Kashish ki saari calls bhi enjoy kar chuka hai

He feels like a jerk again ki usse koi resist nahi kar sakta and that he is all that

To socha ki abhi mil lete hain; chalo Kashish ko maaf kiya

Kashish let gai thi chadar odhke...adhi neend mein thi

k-Hello

s- heellloo

k-Tum?

s- unhmm main hahhaa

k-Kya? Hello?

s-Are you sorry for making me wait?

k-Yes I am

s-Good. You need to make amends therefore, yes?

k-Amends? Means?

s-Come meet me now

k-What??????

s-Come here now. Make it up to me

k-See the time

s-Come now. I don't care, come

k-Sujal so jao

s-Cooommmeee

k-Good night

s-Nooowww!!!!!!!!!!!

k-Stop shouting

s-zen come

He says quietly

k-Sujal ye kya bachpana hai? So jao

s- blah blah blah...yada yada come

k-Are you drunk? Did you drink?

s- Nooo

k-Where are you?

He tells her the address

k- Go home

s- Noo! You come or ...or

k-Its late, your family must be worried

s-or...u come rizt now or

k-Or what?

s-or..ahaa or I will come! Haha...zat right...I am coming over

k-Sujal,you ...

He shuffles into his car

k-You shouldn't' have drunk so much. I am sorry I couldn't come, really sorry

Kashish can hear shuffling car beeping horn, door opening

k-Sujaaal where are you? You are not driving!

Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
hi
the up is good
sujal asks kashish to come for a movie kashish who cant go without taking her mom's permission says that she cant promise but will try
kashis's mom who thinks that the whole world is waiting to punce over her lil innocent daughter refuse her
kashish without protesting just started enjoying her house company
and here poor sujal is waiting for kashish
he is getting angry
at last kashish madam realised that she should call sujal and when she calls him she gets a good bashing wow good job sujal
anyways now sujal is coming
me really wants to know what will happen next
plz write a long part cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
part 6
Sujal is so arrogant...
nice part...
and Kashish doesnt bend to all his dictations...
good...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

PART 7

s-or..ahaa or I will come! Haha...zat right...I am coming over

k-Sujal,you ...

He shuffles into his car

k-You shouldn't' have drunk so much. I am sorry I couldn't come, really sorry

Kashish can hear shuffling car beeping horn, door opening

k-Sujaaal where are you? You are not driving!

s- Me come to you

k-You are not driving! Listen to me

s- of corz I am

k-Have you gone mad !!!!!!!! Sujal no

s-nopty no

Sujal shuts the door tries to get the seat belt par lag nahi rahi so he leaves it seatbelt ko 1- gali di

Kashish to tension ke maare kya kare

k-Sujaaal

s- hmm? zont shout kaziz. I can hear ya zust finnnee

k-Please dont drive...its not right to drink and drive. Take a cab, go home. We will meet tomorrow

s- No we meet now! I'll come and we'll meet

k-Sujal, try and understand and stop the car, please

He starts the engine

k-Nooo pleaseee kuch ho jayega. You are worrying me

s-Now I need to put down phone. No talking and driving, ok? Come down and I'll come there

Kashish to darr se tension se adh mari ho gai hai

She thinks Sujal ka accident ho gaya to, she wont be able to forgive herself

Suhal changes gears, ek baar to back

s - ooppsss. Zong direzion

Then starts laughing

Kashish phone pe Sujal Sujaaal chilla rahi hai

k-Please nooo Sujalll

s- What ? Shh Kashish you are distracting me

k-Stop the car. Dont drive We will meet tomorrow, pakka

s-No. I drive we meet today. You lie... u make false promiz... we meet now

k-You could have driven if you weren't drunk but don't drive drunk.

s- I am absolutely-hic- not

k-Listen take a cab and go home

s-No

Sujal starts counting gear

s-1 up 2 down 3 up 4 down 5 up rev down. 1 for start 2 for bump 3 for traffic 4 for highway]5 for Kashish

k-Nahiii o nooo don't drive...plz slow

s- no no we meet quick

k-Nahi please...I don't want any accidents please

Sujal 5th gear par karke start kare to start hoe na gadi

grrr grrr bhat...gadi band

s-Kaazzz car dont start at 5

k-Good. Take a cab go to your home

s-I dont wanna come all the way in 1st gear

Kashish giggle ki isko yaad nhi ki gear can change

k-Fine, then you go to your home in a cab. We can meet tomorrow, pakka

s-No no I'll come in 1st gear...

k-Nooo arre

s-Mechanic can take car of rips later

He starts is baar 1 par lakar

s- Ahaa!!!

He is successful

s- Kazzz its dark...I cant see

k-Head light

s-How to turn them on? Nah I don't need them. Kazzz you come down ok

k-Sujal please dont drive...you are r really drunk...Sujaaal...no, its risky...don't drive

s-But I wanna zee u now! is dark but I havta drive!!

k-Sujal, when you go to sleep and then wake up in the morning...then I will be there for you; in front of you. You can see me then and there's nothing special in me to see

s- You lie

k-I don't lie...I promise

Sujal starts driving 1 haath se grunting noises comes as he pushed forth on 1 gear

s- Yo brek promizez...thts lying and cheating and making me wait

k-I am sorry...I didn't mean to but mom didn't permit \

s-And you don't pick phone' and you are cruel

Kashish ko samajh nahi aaraha, ksise samjhaye kya kare

s-I am cong now'

k-Why are you so stubborn? Please listen to me

s-Ooopss!! [screeching noise]

k-Kya hua?????? Sujal???????

s-Scratch...just a scratch

k-Are you ok???????

s- umhmmm I am finnneee

k-How did you get the scratch on your car?

Sujal ulta ghumke khidke se muh bahar nikal kar

s-Kazz itzz too dark I don't know

k-Sujalll pleaseee I beg you; stop the car take a cab. Please no driving

s-Why?

k-Take a cab plzzz plzzz plz listen to me plzzz

s-u diztract now I have scratch

k-Scratch where? on car? Plz I am worried for u..plz don't drive...plzzz

Sujal zor se ek gaali chilata hai nd there is sound of horn blaring

k-Sujal??????????????? What happened? Whats wrong??????????

Kashish ki har awaaz ke saath dhadkan tez ho rahi hai

s- !$!$#!%!driving in ong direzion idiot

Doosre car wale ke liye keh raha hai

Kashish knows its most probably Sujal driving on wrong side of the road

k-Sujal plz stop the car. Take a cab please

s-Nooo. Bunch of@$@$@$

1 -2 or car pass hoti hai

k-Sujal, listen to me, take a cab stop the car now or I wont speak to you ever

s- No I wanna zee u now

k-I wont even meet you

s- I'll come up then I guess no other way

k-I wont speak to you then; never ever. Please, don't drive, pleaseee Sujal please

s-zen coem and meet me

k-Don't come warna aage se pehchaanne se bhi inkaar kar dungi

He cuts the phone

Sujal finally reaches her place

Par uski gaadi khatara ho chuki hai par

Kashish ne socha aise hi peeke badbada raha hai

She didn't know the real Sujal Garewal and his conviction

Kashish bhi so gai

Sujal is there in front of Kashish's building and he calls her again

Kashish phon uthati hai

k-Hmm bolo

s- Kazzz neeche aao

k-Kya????????? Neeche?????

s-hahahaa... yup neechhe...hahaa

He is laughing for some good damn reason...maybe he is haapy he mde it all the way there

Kashish bhaagke khidki ke paas jatai hai

She is shocked

k- Tum????????? Yahan??????? Yahan kya kar rahe ho tum? Go home

s-I am here...live in flesh and blood...come down sweet

k-Why are you here? Go home right now. Yahan kar rahe ho tum? Ye mera ghar hai tumhara nahi. Tumhe apne ghar jaana hai

s- ive come zo meet u as i promizzed...now u come down or..

k-Sujal ye kya zidd hai. I cant come down. Maa ghar pe hai. Mumma so rahi hai. Main aise akeli itni raat ko kaise...? Mahualle ke log kya kahenge...tum jao yahan se...kisi ne dekh liya to

Sujal blows his horn

s- Even my car is calling you to come down

k-Shhh...shor mat machao...mumma jaag jayengi

s- Whyyy????? Tooo??????

k-Shhh tum samajhte kyun nahi ho? Mumma ko pata chalega to danategi...tumse kabhi milne nahi degi.. kisi mauhalle wale ne dekh liya to baatein banengi

: s-Tum bhi to nai zamasti tht I need u here...with me rite now

k-Why do you need me?

s-hahaha i don know

k-Nanhe munne bachche ho? Maa ki zarurat hai?

s-na na not as mother of courz not...come down Kazzy

He tots horn again
Beep beep beep

She takes a deep breath

k-ok I will come but then you will go naa. I'll just come for 5 minutes...then you have to go, ok?

s-yezz yez i will

k-ok I am coming

Kashish sneaks to see maa so rahi hai...dabbe paun chup chap climbs down the stairs of the apartment and comes down

Sujal is waiting for her arms open

Kashish walks to him

s- You came!!

k-Shhh

He takes her hand and turns her in circles extremely happy

She pulls him to a side

k-Guard hai! Why did you come? Why did you drink so much? Why Sujal?

s-Coz I wanted to see you coz...i mizzed u

He says softly touching her cheek

s-Why didn't you meet me?

k-I said naa mom didn't give permission. It's a small thing..you shouldn't have drunk like this. Kuch ho jata to?

s-So? She said no.. you say no? You say no to her and yes to me, simple

k-How can I argue with her...she knows the best

s- No I do

He says tucking her hair behind her ear

She looks at him slightly drowning in his suckers

k-You do what

s- I don't know whatever you want me to

k-I don't want you to get drunk like this. You shouldn't get drunk, not because of me

s-Then u shunt make me wait...I smoked too

He says quite smugly

k-You are telling me as if it's an achievement

s- I'll not smoke if you come...smoke ever promiz

She just sighs

k- Go home now, your family must be waiting. Keep the car here, take a cab

s-no onz waititng no one waitz...car wont start anyway

k-hmm, tell your mechanic to repair it tomorrow. You take a cab and do call me when you reach

s-Kal milo mujhse is time no excuses

k-Kal to milenge hi naa, roz to milte hain tumhare lunch time mein

She was holding his arm to steady him

s-No kal you come...we see movie...no waiting..or i'll...i'll...i'll

k-I guess you love watching movies

He nods

s-Yes...wiz u i wnna watch..its fun : u'll zee

k-With me? Why? Why me specially? Khair jao naa aab yahin sone ka iraada hai kya

Sujal says bye bye

k-Aage jaake taxi stand hai aur suno pohonchke phone karna

He catches a cab gives her a last whirl around holding her hands aur phir khushi khushi chala jat ahai

Kashish is left standing to herself

k-Pagal !

She is smiling

Bhaagke jaati hai ghar pe waiting for his call ki pohoncha ki nahi

Idhar udhar check bhi karti hai ki kisi ne dekha to nahi

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