OS: Vines*Reposted* - Page 13

wow, what a line: Was 'love' a collective noun for these feelings... lovely to see arnav's thoughts, pain and regret especially as he such a closed book always... nice of you to leave the ending so open-ended yet with a hint of hope and happiness... a truly emotional piece... have always been a fan of nk and this os has endeared him to me even more!

oye, crazy! DON'T U DARE TO STOP WRITING.

👏👏👏 beautiful piece of work

Awesome... I second wht Jess commented if the serial is that much gloomy n wht not why to make IF like that too...pleaseee dont stop n write the ss u promised to write the 5 which u asked vote for... I dont want such an awesome writer to quit please... Sorry for commenting late i m damn busy n even then m unable to complete all my subjects like i have planned in my time table still i manage to get some time for IF...
Now for OS simply beautiful... Just amazing... I thought something had happend to Arnav but thank god... Poor NK feeling bad for him... It was so good i cant tell u in words but if only one sentnce might make u see how i liked it 'touched my heart'.

LOVELY OS 😃

very beautifully written Zehra...

It is beautifully written. It is probably one of the longest pieces that you have written and I'd like to tell you that it was perfectly written...nothing out of place or overly exaggrated. In fact, I'd suggest you keep this length.

About the content/topic, I'll be honest, I have mixed feeling about this OS. Given how the show is going, I hate to think of Khushi with anybody else...even though that wasn't really the highlight of your OS and even though she had always loved Arnav. Nevertheless, it was nice. I loved the ending, really!

Keep up the good work.

very nice os 👍🏼

Owow its a great os ..
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u left me speechless... it was awesome...👏