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Karen Johnson "Maria"

@Karen_sharon

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

RES😎

{A Big Comment On the way for my Pratik Bhai and Deepu di}

Unres

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My dear Pratik Bhai & Deepu di,

At 1st place...Pratik..kitna intro dete ho...and btw how were ur exams..and promise yad hai na?

For sure the OS's concept is amazing...I always luv Shantanu/Swayam as a flirt...😆 but I don't know why this OS has something different I meant usually we pair Swayam with Rey...but u both paired him with "NILESH"...I think u guys wanted to create the Tannu-Maccy bond here...and thats the reason u so badly wanted us to imagine TanHa as SwaRon here...but I can't stop laughing bcoz thats my normal reaction when Swayam teases Sharon...how cute would they be (Dreamy Mode)...but jokes apart for sure this was a Fab work...and GR8 team work Pratik Bhai & Deepu di & Pratik u r rite di is a Fab writer...and I forgot to tell UPD8 ASAP...PLZ...btw Di & Bhai...how r my siggies?

Ab maine bohot bak bak kar li...Hope so yeh comment kafi tha next Upd8 tak..but ek request ho sake toh nxt Upd8 ke bad mere liye comment RES kar de na...bcoz like nishu I luv being 1st!

With lots of love

Karen (Maria)

Edited by Karen_sharon - 12 years ago

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

it was nicely written. da conversation between dem was awesome ya looking forwards for next part

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

OMG!!😃
wooowww this OS has something really special.. something new...
so starting with the OS...oh!gosh!!OS ko bhi aapne choda nahi bhaiya n di ...sooo long!! 😡 but i had a great time!!😉😳
So hmmm kajol n srk haan!!😆 instead of ReYam you guys showed neil n swayam ...innovative!😉
i loved their convo...from the start...marking the gals...discussing their ex's!!😆... then swayam's eyes finaly landing up on our Sharon opps Senorita!!😉 n the way their cono started off... the best part was like how you guys linked them with their minds!!!loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏⭐️
two of my Fav n best writers on IF!!!😉 🤗 your 1st work together...it was like ...ummm... totally amazing ...entertaining...just everything...!!!
can't wait 4 the update!!!!!!please dont keep a high demand update 😡!
great combine effort!!!...i mean i was shocked as soon as i saw the pm saying combine OS!!n woh bhi aap dono!! 😉 i mean... chalo...abhi bahut ho gayi tarif... mein bahut thak gayi hu!!😆coz you'll have done my work!!!😆 praising each other...n thanking n dedicating your frnds on IF... (di-thanks di for dedicating it to me! 😊🤗)
n please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!...😡😡
forget ur FF,SS... n concentrate on this 1 plz!!😭 😆 now plz dont take my previous line seriously!!!!😆
love you guys!!🤗never ever leave writing!!...

Edited by Satluvsd3 - 12 years ago

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Wantubak

@Wantubak

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

outstanding profamance u to 👏👏

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

I know its late bt still RES for now...till den thumbs up to Deeps di nd CA Bro :))
*edited*

I know i took a longg tym to edit but i had to make it big and good! 😳

Soo Di and Bro! Thanx a lot for this Amazingg and hatke OS! I loved itt! Aap dono ka collaboration toh mast thaa! 👏
Bro gud luck for your result..i wish aap CA ban jao aur meri koi bhi Cs ki problem ho toh aap solve bhi krdo!! 😆
Lol..but seriously..finally you are free!!!

Now cumin to the OS..!
Hahaha swayam ko bhi CA bna diya ismei!! Hadh hai 🤣
Swayam aur nilesh kitne bade tharki hai yaar!! Limits!! 😆
The way they were giving to numbers and counting their gf's! Gawd! Big tym jerks!
Then sharon ki entry! Lol swayam toh fida ho gyaa!
And kya gazab ka flirt maara hai usne...sharon ko majboor kr diya convo ke liye! 😉
Aur pat hi gyi finally!! 😃

It was awesomeness!! 👍🏼
Thanx for the dedication deeps di! 🤗

Edited by surbhimathur - 12 years ago

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wow Pratik bhai what an dhamakedhar entry after a long time👏 😆and deeps ke sath hai to kya kehna, deeps is like sugar, jiske sath milao sishe will spread her sweetness.😳 aap dono ka SS likkna together is our achi kismat hai, lovely. Bhai dont forget you have more to update.

Moving on to this update, it is AWESOME! Swayam baba😆 well deeps and Pratik you guys are simply amazing, Pratik always narrates the story so well taking in to considerations even the minutest detail, and deeps has a flair for a flowing flowrey language which i am fida on.❤️ Each scene is so well written, especially the bit where they are fighting. Super sweet!!!!!!

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awwweesum...Do continue it... 😊😊😊

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

That was one long update but I enjoyed !! I loved how Swayam was flirting with Sharon but nothing worked and Sharon was so smart at pretending like Swayam didn't affect her at all !! The part where she challenges him so that he will spend more time with her was really sweet !! I can't wait to see what happens at the lake after this !!

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Riya

@rockstarriya_26

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Hey prateik and deep di,

Maine tumhari writing toh peli bar padhi hai par di ki bahut bahut bahut barr.. And I love them ! BTW deep di update karo na jaldi jaldi.. plz plz plz.. and This ff is totally amazing !

You both have done a fabulous job for writing this ff.. The concept is new and flirty swayum ( day dreaming) he is totally adorable while being confused and you guys mentioned it.. a big thanks for that ! And sharon giving full attitude to him and he trying to woe her.. again very well written

plus cherry on your sweet cake was nil-swayum bonding.. both at CCD for "bird-watching" haha.. that was very funny!

Anyways enough of my crap, update sooner and plz res a place for me if possible..

Love,

Riya❤️

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Hey Friends 🤗

I guess Pratik has given enough introduction about this OS ...but still i would like to say few lines about this OS...after all its my first work with my dear friend Pratik...This was not a planned write up...this was just a game played by us with SRK & kajol's cheesy lines...on a boring Saturday afternoon...I don't know when SWARON entered in our minds...i guess SWARON has that effect on all the SWARONIANS ...as they stay in our hearts...❤️

@Pratik...hey Mr CA...thanx for saying all those nice words for me...i hardly have any contribution in this OS...so please don't give so much credit...it was a great experience working with u on this...me being the lazy one & u Mr Perfectionist 😆...i had a great time while writing this with u...😳

This OS is dedicated to all our IF friends...special mention to few of my crazy yet sweet Friends :

Nish,himi,nehal,suku,tanu,surbhi,satu,amy,anu,lalita,neets,teju,tanya...luv u all swthrts ...😊

Hope u all like this OS... 😳

Luv
Deepika

Hey Deepy thanks for saying that i have really worked hard for this OS and you have done very little work...now i can say that you have become modest like me as you are not ready to accept that this was your idea and everything just was created by you i was just assisting you all the way...so you deserve all the applause dear...and mai parfectionist kabse ban gaya ji...muje bhi nahi pata maine ye kam kaise kar diya achese...but writing with you was total joy i must say that...as someone here said that you have most wonderful language here and that just shows that how wonderful you are with your expressions here because all the sharon expressions here are just bang on...