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darya20

@darya20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

superb loved the update sooo much and specially the kiss waw

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

fab update...

he wants to propose her.. omg..

Anjali is so sweet...

omg.. he reached her hostel to meet her..aww

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

ohh i love anji at least she against their alliance like kushal...

n she advised him to propose her ohh i so love her now...😆

devyani faced kushal...go dadi go!!!!😆

ohh he asked raja to share khushi with him... super cute scene...😊

n second best was he went to meet her in broad day light...hats off to him...👏

just hope that kokila wont tell kushal abt his visit...

n he brought roses and he kissed on her cheeks...😳 ON UR FACE rupi, gia and sheela 😃

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Deepti

@deepti1906

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

awww that was so so so cute...
Just Loved it...
one of my fav. updates till now...
Do update soon...😊😊

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kaira101

@kaira101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

awesome update

sorry for the short comment

will comment a longer one tomorrow😳

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OMG OMG OMG still hyperventilating after imagining the Arnav Singh Raizada's amazing entry at the girl's hostel to meet his lady love.

Commenting from heaven above:

Anjali's entrance was nice and simple and added amazingly to her character. Loved the way she was asking Arnav about Khushi and she was so supportive of it. Raja and her meeting was the best part in that scene. It was very well written and I simply adored how Arnav confirmed to Anjali that Raja doesn't bite. My favourite part was also how everytime someone mentions Khushi Raja's ears just perk up to hear what is being said. It always makes me cry that they are apart. Hopefully not for long. Yaya ASR is going to propose but he is looking for the right time and place. Can't wait to read that part.

Devyani and Kushal confrontation was awesome. Loved how she confronted him regarding sending Khushi away from home. Well written and simple scene which held importance as we found out a bit of Kushal's weakness towards khushi.

Girls hovering to get a glimpse of a hot hot hot ASR was the best part. Loved the way u wrote khushi's reaction to everything especially ASR coming to her hostel. And also the whole jealousy from those two girls about Arnav bringing roses for Khushi.

uff the goodbye kiss was magical, I could just imagine the blush on Khushi's face and the infamous ASR wala smirk which makes all girls swoon. 👏 Loved it. Whilst some girls were happy about this new found relationship others frown that ASR is taken by the most beautiful girl. When will he take her home. Waiting for that day. Raja is too cute, love him so much. Especially his bond with Khushi.

Continue soon

can't wait for the next part

thanx for the pm

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

nice to see that devayani has discovered part of the truth though not the complete one... half-revelations are highly irritating... can't understand why people can't speak up when needed and things drag on forever!

loved the anjali-arnav convo, her gentle teasing of her brother and her sensible advice... really loved arnav asking raja's permission to woo khushi and requesting raja to share khushi with him... adorable and moving at the same time

arnav's hostel visit was quite machiavellian! he hooked the hostel authorities with his charm and had them eating out of his hands! sheela, gia and rupi are all going to be spoilsports, I have a feeling... hopefully, the support of the other hostel girls will help the course of first love run smooth!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: chandana.s

Well ofcourse i'l be first because i'm stalking ur thread like a romeo 😆 LOL very sweet of you😳

Coming to the update,Its a lovely & beautiful part Thanks sis

Devayani was missing Khushi & her convo with Khushal was no help..But Nice that both came to know that the other also know about Arnav-Khushi relationship.. yep.

Something is there,Y he told Arnav & khushi cant be together & Khushi cant come as daughter-in-law of the house...Is something there which Khushal know about Muskaan's death which others dont know??? 😕 ( U r not going to split it so easily...r u?? ) 🤔 nope. Vines don't grow in straight lines.😆

Anjali was very sweet & nice that Devayani told Anjali everything about Arnav-Khushi Love story.. So now everyone know about there Love...Thats great ummmhmmm

anjali-Arnav shares a lovely bonding ... They had a very smooth & easy going convo... very close.

Awww,Loved how Arnav asked Raja if he is ready to share Khushi with him...Now that was something wihich took my heart.. 😳 ❤️ Yay! thanks for liking. Our Raja is a possessive one, so this was a big decision for him.

Wow,Arnav came to hostel with Raja & all the hostel girls r going gaga over him... What group of girls wouldn't,lol😆
After his convo with his di i thought he came there to propose her but i forgot expecting something after knowing everytime its fails only lead into Heartbreak 💔 *Ouch* 😆 LOL. don't expect things in my ff til they happen. I'm not type of writer.😉

Everyone r shocked that Khushi know Arnav & few r Jealous about her..
Wow,they saw Arnav kissing Khushi.. * i wanted him to peek her on her lips but never mind there is a next time to everything,lets the girls digest this first * ☺️ ( Lots of teasing & harsh comments coming on her way ) Yep you got that right. more teasing.

So he is going to come again...I think Kokila or Bebo might tel Khushal that there grandsone has visited there hostel... ( That may lead to Khusal-Arnav face off ) *Hopefully* I can honestly say, no.😆

Cant wait...Update sooon
Love U

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Originally posted by: Nichuss
i missed my first comment.

...better luck next time for me...😉 lol. now calm squirrels😆

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lovely part...and superb...👏 thanks

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Anji-Arnie convo was so nice...they are the perfect siblings👍🏼 Aww thanks for saying so.

How Anji supoorted Arnie for a propose...tat too was like a gud friend...👍🏼 Yep they're quite close.

wen girls screamed ASR here with rose bunch... i guessed of romantic proposal... everyone guessed...and guessed wrong, 😆 expect the unexpecxted...

but u made me shocked with wonderful entry of ARNIE among kokila..sheela..bebo...👏 ummhmmm😉

now he can come to see KUSHI without playing hide and seek😳 thats the plan

my RAJA back...❤️(thank uuu zaaraa...he he he ) he's got arnav to protect him from squirrels😆

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now only part im worried is the past of muskaan's death n kushal's silence...
whether it will be a disastrous arshi separation.or will it lead to arshi togetherness😲😲😲
really worried about it... Expect the unexpected.

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waiting for next parts...

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Originally posted by: ARSHI_FAN11
Awww this was so cute !!! I was constantly grinning 😳 yay!
I loved Anjali for suggesting that he proposes Khushi and I wonder whats there in that velvet box, am sure something that belongs to Muskaan... mayyybe...maybee not😆
And then our hero finally enters the hostel in style (not sneaking this time) 😆 giving heart attacks and heart aches to some 😉 Lol. right on.
I wonder if this is how he will be meeting her everyday (they'll be watched then...) and when is he going to propose???? 2moro night.
This Kushal's reason is still leaving me confused... what is his problem?? Does he feel that if Khushi marries to Arnav and becomes the daughter-in-law of his house she will have the same fate as Muskaan??? So close...yet so far.

Eagerly waiting for the next update !!!! Thanks Zara!!! welcome

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Originally posted by: -Shobhu21-
This update was just lovely !
Beautiful beyond words !
I really wanted a Devyani and Kushal confrontation for long, and now Ive finally got it ! But he still wont tell why he sent them ! The way he talked, it seems he doesnt mind their love, but he finds it inappropriate due to some reason ! he's protecting Khushi and him self...thats what he thinks...

And Anjali is such a sweet sissy !
She actually helped him and gave him courrage ! And finally ! Arnav and Khushi no more playing Hide and Seek ! The way he came to present her with flowers was just very lovely ! Though Sheela, Gia and R(sorry forgot her name) are trying to somehow do something to spoil it ! told you all. Anjili's moral support😆

I loved the easy flow of interaction between Arnav and Khushi !
Aww ! These two are so in love ! The way Arnav asks Raja permission for proposing Khushi, was just too sweet !
Loved the update ! Arnav and raja scenes are always sweet😉

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Originally posted by: penny25
So u did stick to u're words nd really posted on Pg 109...😊😊love u for dat..really d update was awesome..👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
no probs
so fynally anjili makes n entry...😊so devanyani did confront khushal bout khushi's departure but he still preferd to stay mum..😕😕😕y is it always lyk dis...😡😡😡he really one mysterious charcter nd has dis aura dats y no one questions him nd d day arnav comes to know d truth den we can expects some bomb blasts..😉😉😉😉 Your words have significant meanings... Expect the unexpected.

it so annoying.. d suspense is killing me..😡😡😡😡😡😡😡plz Zara tell me wen will we get to now d truth...:O:O:O:O 😲😲😲😲😲Can't w8 for dat glorious day...😳😳😳😳d part where arnav-anjili talk was so lovely..dey share such a sweet sibling bond..😳d bond to die for..so anjili put in arnav's mind to propose her..ohh dat was d icing on d cake..so d nxt stop is dere propsal..😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 glad you liked it.
he came to her hostel to propose her..dat sheela nd d two bitches suck badly..😡😡😡😡😡d girls were madly love-struck wid asr..😳but wat wil hapen wen khushal will now dat arnav came to meet khushi..ohh noo...😕😕😕😕dere kiss was so innocent..😳😳d hostel staff is supportive though nd dey loved d fact dat khushi has someone spl in d form of asr...😊😊😊😊 yep all sweet and lovely.
the best part was arnav asking permision from Raja to take his queen from him..😊😊😊😊aww dat part was d best ever,..never ever i have came across such a gr8 stry..<3<3 nd ultimately he did give her d permision..aww just lovely...<3 Aww thank you :')
gr8 update Zara..WvT is turning out to be just a perfect fairytale...love it<3<3<3 w8n for d nxt update...😊😊😊

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Originally posted by: raomedhz
Awesome update Zara! :)

Love Anjali here for telling Arnav that there was no point in waiting anymore. :)
The right moment never arrives if you keep waiting for one.
I'm liking Anjali here. 😳 Anjili has the right idea, but sometimes things really do have their time as you'll see. fate.

Kushal...accept why you've made her go away...!!!! Tell Devayani the reasons...so she can help you with your demons too! Unless he manages to open up to someone...its of no use.
And U hope e divulges his real reasons for sending Khushi away soon. 🤔 soon, but not yet.

EEE!! MY RAJA CAME BACK IN THIS UPDATE!!🤗
Ok guys...m stealing him away now! And nobody stop me this time!!😈 *slaps forehead* not again, lololol😆

Loved Arnav n Raja's convo...where he asks Raja for permission to marry Khushi...really well written Zara. I loved that part.❤️ thank you.

Arnav just went to see Khushi...with Raja...and a rose plant...in broad daylight!!!!!
Yay!!!!!
He knew nobody would refuse him entrance...and he got to meet Khushi on this visit too!! And he gave her plants because he knew how much she missed gardening!!😳
Awww...😳 Arnav is very cunning😉

Lol...the peck just before he left! Very cheeky Arnav...but now everybody kinda knows something is definitely up between these two...and I hope no more trouble is brought on Khushi by the sour grapes (Gia n Rupa😆) due to this. more teasing.😆

Thanks for the pm Zara...🤗 welcome