awesome update
sorry for the short commentwill comment a longer one tomorrow😳EDIT EDIT EDITOMG OMG OMG still hyperventilating after imagining the Arnav Singh Raizada's amazing entry at the girl's hostel to meet his lady love. LOL. yep hothothot!😆Commenting from heaven above:LOLOLAnjali's entrance was nice and simple and added amazingly to her character. Loved the way she was asking Arnav about Khushi and she was so supportive of it. Raja and her meeting was the best part in that scene. It was very well written and I simply adored how Arnav confirmed to Anjali that Raja doesn't bite. My favourite part was also how everytime someone mentions Khushi Raja's ears just perk up to hear what is being said. It always makes me cry that they are apart. Hopefully not for long. Yaya ASR is going to propose but he is looking for the right time and place. Can't wait to read that part. we shall see how it goes. thanks for liking anjili's entry.Devyani and Kushal confrontation was awesome. Loved how she confronted him regarding sending Khushi away from home. Well written and simple scene which held importance as we found out a bit of Kushal's weakness towards khushi. exactly. thanks for understanding the simplicity behind it.Girls hovering to get a glimpse of a hot hot hot ASR was the best part. Loved the way u wrote khushi's reaction to everything especially ASR coming to her hostel. And also the whole jealousy from those two girls about Arnav bringing roses for Khushi. lol. glad everyone enjoyed the scene. 😳uff the goodbye kiss was magical, I could just imagine the blush on Khushi's face and the infamous ASR wala smirk which makes all girls swoon. 👏 Loved it. Whilst some girls were happy about this new found relationship others frown that ASR is taken by the most beautiful girl. When will he take her home. Waiting for that day. Raja is too cute, love him so much. Especially his bond with Khushi. Yep arnav is a very naughty man.Continue sooncan't wait for the next partthanx for the pm welcome
Originally posted by: Maddy1270
nice to see that devayani has discovered part of the truth though not the complete one... half-revelations are highly irritating... can't understand why people can't speak up when needed and things drag on forever! Kushal feels he has to deal with this himself as his demons haunt him. Sorry if i am making seem it's dragging but it's called vines with thorns for a reason.
loved the anjali-arnav convo, her gentle teasing of her brother and her sensible advice... really loved arnav asking raja's permission to woo khushi and requesting raja to share khushi with him... adorable and moving at the same time. thanks. 😊arnav's hostel visit was quite machiavellian! he hooked the hostel authorities with his charm and had them eating out of his hands! sheela, gia and rupi are all going to be spoilsports, I have a feeling... hopefully, the support of the other hostel girls will help the course of first love run smooth! You'll have to wait and see...
Originally posted by: Shona.Angel
okay so Amna is here finaaaly to make a comment *uggh i hope mum doesn't come and say to shut my phone 🤢 * lol.
First of all i must say this is a beutifull story. Loved reading it 😊 thanks
The best character is Raja 🤗
Aww...ii love him 😉
He's a sweetHeart 😃
I want him 😳
Raja bacha mere paas ajao 😉 Oh god, now your part of the 'raja is mine!' squirrels.😆 you got big competition.😉
Ummm...ArHi i love them. I love this Arnav thou he is a ruthless bines man (saying in Sobti style) par a sweetheart wd his family... Khushi is a sweetheart, bitya cnt speak par i love theri chemistry.. aww thanks for liking
Devyani...she is such a sweet si dadi :' )
Kushal Singh Raizada.. I wonder what is d reason kay he pretends that he hate khushi bitya.. i'm eager to know this. vines that have thorns are like memories, grip it and it hurts, but if you don't the vine will grip you instead.
buaji aur Anjali tw apni serial jesi hi hain achi si sweeet siii :) *love them too* thanks
Aman and Chinky..they are sweetheart too.. I love their bonding wd Khushi :)
I hope i havn't forgotten any character 😊 nope you got them all.
Now coming to the story.
Story is wonderfull..
ThankGod that Arnav Ain't the same as serial wala thou he is hearthrob of India par Khushi k sath bht acha hai not bringing thier class in b/w and loving her for what she is 😊
I love him for being such a sweethearrt 😊 Arnav is like his mother by heart, but anger from dadaji.😆
Damn!! They have already made love... i hope there's no seperation bari waali. I won't b able to bear that jjudaai 😭 pehle hi i dun know why Kushal has sent khushi to hostel. I hope he has some good reasons fr this bcz when Arnie will get to know abt this he won't leave his dadu for sure you might be surprised.
Ahh... Their were soo many scenes when i got goosebumps while reading but the best one was when she spoke fr d first time and said '..I..' and when he stopped her i wanted to hug that man!! Damn he is a prince charming type here yara 😊
*my heart goes hmmm* LOL. yep Arnav hates Khushi trying to be someone she's not. He loves her the way she is.
I was really happy when Arnav gotta know that Raja knows where his queen lives and they went to hostel to meet her.. And OMG his second visit.. The cat got his cream 🤣 but i wonder woh hostel main aya kesay? Didn't anyone stopped him? Or Harun bhaiya usk saath mila hua hai? 😛Arnav can be sneaky too, but the next time coming up will be with Harun's support. Why else did Arnav visit the hostel openly.😉
And Arnav's third visit to the hostel with Roses , Raja and his ASR style..awwwhhh... Laaaved it
Damn !! This Khushi is a lucky Girl... I'm jealous 😳 Anyone would be,lol😳
I wish i was this Khushi 😳
All the girls in college are jealous of Khushi and some thinks that he is doing all this in some kinda sympathy or what *lmao*
Fools ASR loves KKG!! 😃 Yep they know the truth, but just jealous😆
I wonder whats gonna happen jab Kushal ko pata chale ga k Arnav ko pata hai k khushi kahan hai Shock.
And i loved the convo between the siblings 😊
I love this Anji.. She is a lovely sister 😊 yep very supportive
Zara, its a beutifull story. Liked it very much. Thankyou very much for the PMs. I know you don't PM ev one 😃 nope I don't. Very true.
Umm... Now one thing... Just lemme know how you update i mean how many tyms a week and how many tyms a month? I usually specify at the end of the update, usually its after 14 pages ( which we get to very quick, lol) but if different then I say at the end of the update. So it's literally every 2-3 days.😆
I'm not gonna b a staalker but will defintly be a regular commenter 😊 and maybe a spammer too..if you don't mind 😳 LOL your going to be definatly be best friends with Nichuss and the other two naughty squirrels, lololol
And if i'll b late o comment then samajh jaiye ga k i'm hell busy warna i dnt take much time to comment on my fav stories 😊 I'll try to keep that in mind😊
Now i'll run before ammi catches me and gives me some joots's
Ahh... ThankGod i'm done wd my comment *ballay ballay* thanks very much!😳
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