ManVeer FF:~~We Are One~~[CH-18-pg-153] 30/03/2014

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Tannu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

WOW lovely FF <3

wish DEK track would happn lyk dis...but.. *sigh*

cont soon

do pm me wehever u update nxt chapter :)

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: -Tannu-
WOW lovely FF <3

wish DEK track would happn lyk dis...but.. *sigh*

cont soon

do pm me wehever u update nxt chapter :)

thanks dear😛 will pm u for sure😃

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

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hmmmm dude i forgot

@.maleficent.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

chal yeah me reseve wala game khelti hoo 🤣

EDIT
YEAH ME FIRST ONE TO COMMENT
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME CHAPTER
UDAY KNEW HIS PRINCESS SO WELL
THAT BEGING AWAY FROM HIM WILL BRING HER MORE CLOSE TO HIM,
I REALLY LOVE THE UDAY MANYATA'S SCENE THEY WERE REALLY HEART TOUCHING
FINALLY MANYATA SPOKE OUT ALL HER QUESTION TO UDAY AND GET HER PRINCE CHARMING
FINALLY UDAY CONFESS HIS LOVE THAT HE LOVES ONLY MANYTA NOT HER RIYASAT
AND MANYTA TO LOVE HIM
AND ALL THE REMEMBERENCE BOTH MANYATA AND UDAY IMAGINE BEFORE THEY GET MARRIED WAS VERY WELL WRIITEN
BUT ONE WEEK POIN UPDATE WAS SMALL
AND YOU STOP AT REALLY INTRESTING POINT😉
OVER ALL UPDATE WAS VERYWELL WRITTN AWESOME BLOSSOME
AND REALLY LOVED IT
THANX FOR PM AND CONTI SOON AS I CANT WAIT TO READ AHEAD

Edited by aliya666 - 12 years ago

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huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

awsssmmm👏
but tooo shhooorrrttt😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

RES

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OMG Zina ...i loved d plot

the way u framed the story is just amazing

Chapter 1 : the concern she has for him, her love, her feelings wen he left her just on the first day ..was nicely portrayed

Chapter2:

u wrote beautiful poems...loved each n every line of poem

Manyata waiting n ultimate confession

UV proposing ...Aww so sweet

Amazing work😊

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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sonia

@sirjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Waooo but it was too short update ad we r sooo hungry 4 manveer dat everything we find short n unsatisfying...

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

OMG zina!...That was amzing and so rhythmic.👏

so we have got a poet in our forum..Infact we have lots but the way the confession was done was just so blissful and so very dreamy!...Romantic will be an understatement for your confession scene..Yes it was dreamy and very beautifully done...⭐️

Keep up the good work!👍🏼