#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Wooow...

That was an amazing update...

Really liked it...

The 4 slaps were awesome!!!:);)

Plzzz update soon...

Waiting eagerly to noe wht kria hs written in the letter!!!

Thanx 4 the PM!!!:):)

-Tehmina!!:):)

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Hey khushi amazing part

hehe loved those slaps...

I could actually imagine sharon doing that...hayee kya scene tha

wish kabhi sach mein dekh pau...

Lekin yeh kya bas itne se...u should have added two three more...

Chalo subah subah update ne tuje bacha liya...or else u know...wont be spared

lol

love
kinjal

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Sharon jst killed it ..!
God knws wat is dis shivam will do ..!
Never mind dey got d letter dats a gud news ..!
Hopefully rey n kriya will meet soon ..!
Update soon ..!

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

congrats dear for new thread...
and i just wish that u cross many more thread like dis...

really nice update...

i'm loving dis sharon... acha kiya uss shivam ko thapad maare... one from my side too...

and swayam what can i say about him...why he has to be so so good and charming...uske gusse mein toh aur bhi bura haal hojta hai...awwiiee...

i really liked d way vishakha comforted sharon...

and d most waited part...letter is wid dem now...YIPPIIIEEE!!!!!

just waiting to see what's in it... i wanted to read rey's reaction towards it... eagerly waiting...almost impatiently...

so update really very soon...

thanks for pm...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

awesome update

bechara shivam kitne thappad pade usko par wo isi ke layak hai

i am just waiting for the next update pls do it soon

thanks for pm

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anjali

@anjali22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

congratulations for new thread

awesome update

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esha

@ArShaAngels

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Awesome updte...

luved sharon's violent wala avatar very much..!!..

waiting eagerly for nxt chappy..!!...

updte soon n thnx for the pm..!!...

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Wah kya plan tha 👍🏼...

Well Sharon ki acting he itni achi thi ke Shivam ko toh phasna he tha 😉...

N then that 'Dangerous Sharon' ...

Shivam ka chehra dekhne layak hoga 😆...

It was amazing 😃...

She really cares for Swayam 😊...

Haye Loved it ❤️...

Eeep waiting to know what's in that letter n Rey's reaction as well 😃...

Thanks for the pm 😊.

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

woww awesome update👏

jus luvd it😃

shivam got 4 slaps

loved sharon n dis update

waiting for d next part😊

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Congoz a ton khushi darls 🥳
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superb update . . . . . Loved it 😃
the plan was really tactfull . . . . . It was'nt lame 👍🏼
swayam & vish gave such an awesome support to remove her nervousness...
us looser ke sath to aise hi cheat karna chahiye 😈
sharon acted as extra sweet . . . . . . Trapped him in her innocent plan 😆
& vish managed to get the treasured letter . . . . Wat a scene 😎
iss shivam ne to swayam ko bhi hinsak bana diya . . . . . . Zaban se hi sahi 🤣
aur sharon ka to pakka hath hi dard ho gya hoga . . . . . . Swayam ko bol thoda massage kar de ☺️ . . . . Aakhir ek slap to usko hurt karne ka bhi tha 😉
I just hope . . . . The contents of letter are untouched . . . . . . But i'm damn sure she have'nt mentioned any truth in dat . . . . . Aur rey ko kuch khas pata nhi chalega 😭
kriya ko bhi jaldi vapas la . . . . . . Don't tell me that u'll wait till 10th thread 🤣

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